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Teamwork - Gang Rape Galore

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A pair of the degenerates had grabbed hold of me on either side and lowered me onto a third who waited prone on the floor. At the time I had been preoccupied with struggling to escape and lobbing a steady stream of curses at my assailants. Had I not been so overcome with rage and dread at the next imminent violation I might have been impressed by how the three men acted in sync to force my then-protesting ass onto the jutting shaft; or how deftly they pinned my arms to my side while simultaneously prying my kicking legs open to bare my vulnerable pussy.

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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.


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Title: Teamwork
Author: @chloevee

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Author's note

This is a fantasy that depicts things that would be unforgivably immoral and very illegal in real life. This story, and I, do not condone rape.

After finishing the first draft I realized that this story was partially inspired by @AdmiralPiet's Spoils of War and @Claire's Record Chaser, at least in some of the themes.

This story is an entry in the Gang Rape Galore Story Contest.

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Teamwork

What really struck me was how well they worked together.

Ok, no, what really struck me was the thighs of the man currently reaming my ass, the slap of his balls against my battered pussy lips, and the head of a cock jabbing at the back of my throat.

But I had become somewhat detached from what was happening to my body at some point over the last several hours so I'd had a lot of time to observe the half-dozen men violating me. As my body automatically relaxed my throat--a recently-developed reflex--and swallowed down the invading shaft, I found myself reflecting on the group interplay that I had unwillingly become so up-close-and-personal with.

I had first become aware that there was something exceptional about the group when two of the pricks had plucked me up from where I had been dropped by my most recent abusers, hauled me into the air and positioned me to be spitroasted. It happened so fast that I hardly knew what was happening before I was skewered, limbs swaying inches from the ground. They had deftly maneuvered me with such coordinated grace, I remember thinking it almost seemed choreographed.

I was reminded of something that happened before I had adapted to my new reality, not long after arriving at this strangely secluded hotel conference room.

A pair of the degenerates had grabbed hold of me on either side and lowered me onto a third who waited prone on the floor. At the time I had been preoccupied with struggling to escape and lobbing a steady stream of curses at my assailants. Had I not been so overcome with rage and dread at the next imminent violation I might have been impressed by how the three men acted in sync to force my then-protesting ass onto the jutting shaft; or how deftly they pinned my arms to my side while simultaneously prying my kicking legs open to bare my vulnerable pussy.

Thinking back on the day's events in light of this realization, I picked up on other things, such as the many subtle examples of the kind of thoughtful and cooperative comportment at the root of effective teamwork, which they demonstrated--well, towards one another--in spades.

As introduction to this merry band of rapists, one of the sick fucks had held me cradled in his lap, obligingly trapping my knees wide open for his friends who, one after the other, unloaded into the mess of slurry soon drenching my cunt. Granted, it wasn't long before my desperate attempts to close my legs were too weak to pose any real challenge. Still, his leaking cock that prodded at my lower back the whole time felt hard enough to be painful and he got nothing out of it aside from gnawing on my neck and occasionally groping a breast whenever his hands were free.

Later, after that same sicko had toppled me forward onto my knees one of his comrades had, unbidden, given my shoulders a helpful little shove, supplying the last extra bit of force needed to cram the sick fuck's unusually girthy bulk into my then-straining channel.

Then there was the time awhile later when a man kneeling behind me had reached over my body to hold my face in place for his friend kneeling in front of me, who in turn reached over to pull apart my ass cheeks, each offering up one of my holes to the other.

Their communication skills were great too, I realized--far more effective than any of the executive teams I had coached in my career by a wide margin. While they weren't a particularly wordy bunch, they undeniably practiced the tenet of "Clear and Open Communication" outlined in the "Three Pillars of an Effective Team" handouts scattered forgotten near the door, though they didn't follow quite the same methods. No, they spoke in nods, gestures, and half-phrases, a private language built over years of camaraderie.

"You wanna..." and an eyebrow lift and glance at where I thrashed on the conference table clawing at the hand pinning me down by my throat. To which the man opposite him, immediately understanding, proceeded to pin my shoulders down and spear my throat for good measure.

"We could..." and a head tilt in the direction of a conference chair. To which a man nodded, and together they plopped me on the chair facing backwards, knees straddling the backrest and breasts pressed into the meshed fabric, positioning my holes at the perfect height to be used by a man kneeling or standing.

"Open 'em?" a man had prompted as he pressed my closed, straining knees towards my chest. The man buried in my ass under me had responded by wrapping his arms around the back of each knee, folding me in half, splayed open and utterly helpless.

It was surreal, almost eerie how they worked in concert almost without words.

Moreover, the group embodied a "Culture of Learning" to a degree that the bickering teams I usually worked with never seemed to grasp. This group supported one another without ego, freely offering and accepting feedback and constantly improving together.

"Careful," one had cautioned. "From the side." He had demonstrated wringing my neck without crushing my larynx as his psycho friend had been, until my limbs grew too weak to put up a fight. I can't be sure how his friend reacted because I passed out soon after and therefore missed his response. But when I came to it was the psycho's finger's uncurling from around my throat. I could only assume he adopted the proffered technique since I was able to gulp in precious lungfuls of air, still alive to endure many more hours of use.

"Can I show you?" prompted a lech in his mid-to-late-forties, coming to the side of a younger man who I guessed to be the newest member of the group, a pervert in his early-twenties who was somewhat awkwardly fucking my face. His wobbly hold on my sweat-dampened shoulders seemed liable to slip and leave me dangling backwards from the man standing across from him who I was mounted on.

"Try here." the old lech advised, and I felt him guide one of the pervert's hands past the inside of my slack arm and clasp onto my ribs, demonstrating a more secure grip that forced my back into a dramatic arch and tilted my lolling head fully upside-down. "Just like that," the old lech had beamed as he watched the pervert pull me onto his cock with each enthusiastic, forceful thrust, pride evident in his voice.

I considered everything I had observed about the tight-knit group.

From a purely professional standpoint, it was a beautiful thing.

I only had one complaint--well, aside from the relentless rape which I was absolutely not thinking about.

Of the tenets I would have taught today had I not been wrestled to the ground and stripped the moment I'd walked through the door, they utterly failed at--a "Habit of Listening", specifically to those outside of a given group. I suppose the sort of external feedback they were likely to get--"Oh god, no!" or "Let me go!"--would run somewhat counter to their mission, so I could see why they wouldn't be interested in adopting that particular practice. Still, the glaring shortcoming in an otherwise stellar assessment needled at my professional sensibilities.

But if I was honest with myself I had to admit, I thought as cum squirted out from around the dicks unloading into my over-filled orifices--two out of three really wasn't bad. Pondering this as I was passed off to a well-rested trio who had been patiently waiting their turn to inflict unspeakable acts on my body, I tried not to wonder how much longer I would be at the mercy of this all-too effective team.



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All feedback welcome, but I'd especially appreciate if you'd be so kind as to bring any errors to my attention.
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1) What did I immediately feel after reading this
2) What I love about what I read
3) What would I change in the story to make it perfect (for me)
4) Did I get off on this and why

1) Damn, jumping right into the thick of things in the second sentence was a bold move.

2) The victim's attempt at detachment from reality was solid. She was trying so hard to view it as something "normal" and "grade" their teamwork when it was far from normal. That says a lot about the character in such a short amount of time. This likely isn't the only time she has been abused.

3) Too short of a story, probably due to time constraints as the contest was about to end.

4) No, but I probably would with a little more detail and focusing on one moment at a time.
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Most excellent work. The balance of violation mechanics and other interactions is just great, and the inner monologue is pitch perfect.
chloevee wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 9:29 pm... they undeniably practiced the tenet of "Clear and Open Communication" outlined in the "Three Pillars of an Effective Team" handouts scattered forgotten near the door...
I think there were more than three, ahem, pillars involved. :mrgreen:
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I’d love to hire your protagonist for an evening of team building and clear communication. Hers would have to be non verbal as talking around a gag or cock might be difficult.

Fantastic start, right in the middle of the action. Very glad you decided to join the contest.
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RapeU wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 9:54 pm 1) Damn, jumping right into the thick of things in the second sentence was a bold move.
Thanks! IIRC, that was the line that first popped into my head when I first thought of this story.
RapeU wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 9:54 pm 2) The victim's attempt at detachment from reality was solid. She was trying so hard to view it as something "normal" and "grade" their teamwork when it was far from normal. That says a lot about the character in such a short amount of time. This likely isn't the only time she has been abused.
Thanks, that's exactly what I was going for! Well, except the part about her being previously abused. That didn't occur to me, but you're right--it totally makes sense for her character.
RapeU wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 9:54 pm 3) Too short of a story, probably due to time constraints as the contest was about to end.
Usually my stories tend toward being too long (and therefore never finished) but with this one I was worried I wouldn't be able to reach 1,000 words.

I have a hard time imagining it longer in the current format, though I suppose I could transition to a more traditional, linear style. As with my last story though, I like leaving things open-ended.
RapeU wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 9:54 pm 4) No, but I probably would with a little more detail and focusing on one moment at a time.
Yeah, I expected that. The flashes of scenes hopefully get the heart pumping, but there just isn't enough continuity to finish the job.

It's a shame, but I felt it was a worthwhile tradeoff. Or to be honest, that's just how the story showed up in my head. ;-)
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Lucius wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 10:00 pm Most excellent work. The balance of violation mechanics and other interactions is just great, and the inner monologue is pitch perfect.
Thanks, I really appreciate it!
Lucius wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 10:00 pm I think there were more than three, ahem, pillars involved. :mrgreen:
:lol: :roll:
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Shocker wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 10:10 pm I’d love to hire your protagonist for an evening of team building and clear communication. Hers would have to be non verbal as talking around a gag or cock might be difficult.
I have a funny feeling she'll be fully booked for awhile. ;)
Shocker wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 10:10 pm Fantastic start, right in the middle of the action.
Thanks!
Shocker wrote: Sun Jun 08, 2025 10:10 pm Very glad you decided to join the contest.
I appreciate it. I'm not usually into contests (participating in them that is), but I had an idea that worked, so I figured--why not?

I did learn from this experience that having a deadline is quite conducive to me finishing a story.
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@chloevee I wholeheartedly agree that deadlines have a wonderful way of focusing one’s mind when it comes to writing. Also let me tell you a secret about contests, they are not to find the best storytellers, it’s to encourage people, to follow their inspiration and craft a story. More stories are always desirable to have.

For me personally the challenge of writing within constraints is the actual reward of participating, as well as being able to read the other excellent entries.
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I really enjoyed this, not only as a fun and original take on interpreting the theme, but also as a almost comical way of reading the thoughts of a victim as she attempts to disassociate from what is happening to her.

I didn't find it particularly erotic as a stand alone piece but I feel like it would work really well in conjunction with the more traditional simultaneous perspective from the POV of the assaulters. For example, they plan it. They wait for her to arrive. They grab her then the attack - her perspective and psychological survival efforts during her attack - and the conclusion. And maybe end with her aftermath reaction of looking back on her own thought process. Just a thought that occurred.

Over all, very well written and concise. I enjoyed the way you paint the picture of the assault throughout the text rather than having the set up in the beginning (even though I said what I said above lol), there was certainly enough hints and clues to complete the picture by the time you get to the end.

Thank you for sharing your talent within the framework of this contest.
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Another good one, @chloevee. I'd be surprised if this one didn't rank high once the voting for the contest is over. At first, I wondered whether the story might be too short for the contest, but at 1303 words it avoids being considered flash fiction. And I really like that you didn't say "Oh the word limit is 5000, the minimum is 1000, I should maybe go a little longer" but kept it exactly as short as you wanted it to be. Word limits, especially in short story contests, are often interpreted as targets and not as limits. I really like that you kept it short.

I find the narrator's voice so deliciously out of place, it's great. Any idea what her voice would sound like if she hadn't resigned herself to her fate yet?

I was surprised (but happy) to read that Record Chaser might have given you some inspiration. To me, it read more like The Infinite Rape (I think you would like that one a lot. It's very short, too.) meets Men at War.

You wanted us to point out mistakes. Now, I myself have actually little to no idea how you place commas in English correctly. But there were some sentences where additional punctuation would have made reading the story easier for me. One example:
But I had become somewhat detached from what was happening to my body at some point over the last several hours so I'd had a lot of time to observe the half-dozen men violating me.
That transition from "hours" to "so" tripped me up a bit. I think both a comma or a full stop and then another sentence would have made reading that easier, would have given it a better flow.

You like to write these long, flowing sentences that sound great, but I think the occasional additional comma in there would direct the reading flow a bit better.
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