Beach Party

[EvilKnight]

Teaser: Margot becomes the main event at a beach ‘party.’
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The author of this story has read and accepted the rules for posting stories. They guarantee that the following story depicts none of the themes listed in the Forbidden Content section of the rules.

The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.
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Title: Beach Party
Author: EvilKnight
Chapter Tags: No sex, lead up
Content Warnings: Add here further content warnings you would like to make your readers aware of.
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Beach Party

Chapter 1: Margot gets ‘invited’

Margot Hardiman was not a nice girl….growing up wealthy, waited on hand and foot, catered to and spoiled, she saw servants as cogs in the machinery of making her life perfect, not as humans being. Her parents had taken her to Roatan off the coast of Honduras for her graduation and birthday present. She had just turned 18 (fortunately for you, dear reader). Margot was a spoiled princess from Manhattan and she was used to getting her way. She was a gorgeous girl, striking auburn hair down to her lower back, petit but with a bubble butt and amazing perky medium sized tits that seemed to defy gravity. And a sweet, pixie like face.

The resort her folks had taken her to was opulent and had exacting standards for the staff. Eyes down and absolutely NO ogling of the guests. Javier had worked there for several years and was disgusted by the snobby attitude and entitlement of the guests. In particular, the young, mostly beautiful, stuck up bitch daughters of the opulent and powerful. He often fantasized late at night about teaching one of these cunts the meaning of service.

On this morning, Margot, poolside, had demanded that Javi clean the pool NOW, before she got in it, even though he had cleaned it a few hours before. He gave her a dirty look but quickly put his head down and grabbed the net and started cleaning the pool. Margot, unfortunately, noticed his pissed off look and complained to one of the managers. Later that morning Javi got reprimanded, AND docked a whole day’s pay. He was besides himself with anger….His little hermanita, his sister, was very ill and now his family would have to choose between dinner and her medicine. That fucking gringa tourist bitch! Javi decided that night that she would pay. He contacted a few of his unsavory friends - Manuel, Jorge and Tomy. “Hey amigos. Want to have a special party tomorrow night? I have a special guest from the resort who needs the ‘treatment.’ You in?” “Of course they were in

Javi had a plan. He had noticed than Margot had a habit of taking a short stroll around the grounds late at night, right before bed. There was a spot on the back side of the pool area that was invisible from anywhere else on the grounds and went alongside the wooded areas on the other side of the fence. The next morning, at 4:30 am, before his 5am shift, he arrived from the outside by that area of fence and, with his wire cutters, made 5 snips, creating a slit a body could pass through. He quickly walked away, entering the resort from the front along with the rest of the early crew. He could already feel his verga swelling as he thought about sinking it into that gringa’s unwilling cunt while his buddies held her spreadeagled. Oh yeah…he was going to really have a go at her. And then his friends. And then all of them again. And after… well…. He couldn’t really let her go. And he didn’t want a murder on his conscience. But he had an idea to make more than enough money to make up for his lost wages. It was going to be a long ‘hard’ day taking a lot of concentration not to be walking around with a screaming boner all day.

Finally, he checked out of work at 5 pm, after 12 long hours. He knew he had till around 11;30, so he went home, had dinner with his family, went to bed early. He arose at 10, quietly leaving the house. Jorge picked him up. Tomy was in the back, but they had to pick up Mani on the way. They parked behind a warehouse about a kilometer from the spot. They walked quietly to the hole Javi had made. Javi and Tomy entered while Manuel and Jorge waited just outside the fence. They waited no more than 15 minutes when they heard her coming. Alone, and looking at her phone - fucking stupid bitch. She never even looked up and did not notice them standing behind a couple shrubs. As she came alongside, Javi dropped a rough canvas bag over her head and then punched her hard in the back of the head. She slumped, stunned or unconscious. They pulled her over to the hole in the fence, and Jorge and Mani pulled her unresisting body through. They four of them each grabbed a limb and hauled her to the car, dropping her in the trunk. Javi had grabbed her phone - he tossed it in the river as they went over the bridge, and they were gone.

Tomy had a tio who was involved with the local gang, and had a place out of town, quite secluded, that he used for ‘business’ deals and other unsavory activities - this would not be the first gang rape perpetrated at this place. The boys were beside themselves with lust. They could hardy wait to get this sweet young thing naked. Although none was a virgin, they were young and had limited sexual experience - but they all had watched LOTS of porn, most of it violent and brutal… they were going to try all kinds of fun things on cute, innocent, bitch Margot. Well, fun for them, not so much for her. Tomi had a sadistic streak in him, and none of the young men was a gentle soul nor in the mood to play nice. Javi in particular was still furious with Margot for causing him to lose pay and causing his familia to go hungry. He intended to make the little gringa bitch pay, and pay. And he and his friends were going to enjoy her and her suffering.

Would she go back to her family? Ever get to go home? Or would she end up in a shallow grave? As a sex slave in a Honduran whorehouse?



End of chapter 1

[Shocker]

I really enjoy your setup and things it promises. So please don’t take this as criticism, but a question on story telling. You started the story, with a short snippet from Margot’s perspective before permanently switching to Javier’s for the rest of the chapter. While that us a perfectly valid approach its always a bit jarring for me as a reader, I know personal preferences vary, the thing I wonder was what were you trying to achieve with that choice, and do you think you succeeded.
I think you also portrayed Margot as a spoiled, young woman, relishing her parents money quite well through Javier’s perspective.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[EvilKnight]

Shocker
Excellent point. No intent - just a span of time between writing and me being an inexperienced lazy writer.

I’ll consider and will likely edit.

Thanks

[Shocker]

Shocker
Excellent point. No intent - just a span of time between writing and me being an inexperienced lazy writer.

I’ll consider and will likely edit.

Thanks

It wasn’t intended as request to change anything, I hate getting those. But I find it useful to get feedback, forcing me to think about why I wrote something a specific way. All choices are valid, but thinking about the why helps the growth as writer.

[praetor3d]

I like the premise of the story and I'm very much looking forward to what "all kinds of fun things" they have in store for her.

I agree with Shocker, perspective switching was a little abrupt to me, but I think there are a few ideas you could try to see if they flow things better:
Like in paragraph 3, split Margot's and Javi's perspective into separate paragraphs. I think that would instantly change things to read better to me.

I like the procedural planning descriptions you had in paragraph 5 to set up the abduction scene, but it kinda got a little repetitive, like: "Jorge picked him up. Tomy was in the back, but they had to pick up Mani on the way." What I would have done is add some dialogue between these actions, like maybe Jorge describing to Tomy and Mani what Margot looks like to whet their (and the reader's) appetites, and you're building this crescendo along the way and breaking up the repetitiveness. Also, maybe Tomy and Mani can reply with what they'd like to do to her, which allows you to organically characterize their individual personalities or info on their lack of real sexual experience, without having to actually state it.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to chapter 2, please do continue!

[EvilKnight]

Excellent comments
Thank you

[Claire]

I'm probably not the target audience for this story, but I like how the anger and the personality of Javier comes through in his narration. Your writing certainly doesn't lack character.

There was one thing that had me a bit confused.

He gave her a dirty look but quickly put his head down and grabbed the net and started recleaning the pool. But Margot had noticed. She complained to one of the managers, and later that morning Javi got reprimanded, AND docked a whole day’s pay.

My reaction here was: What had she noticed? He did clean it again, didn't he? And then I realized that you meant the dirty look? I think this passage would have been more effective if he had told her that he would clean the pool again but then didn't do it or half-ass it because he had done it just hours ago. It's minor detail, but it had me stumble for a moment while readiing.

[boooboo2]

Can't wait for chapter 2. She's in for a world of hurt...

[EvilKnight]

Been awhile.... busy time of year for me... enjoy... Margot certainly won't...

Would she go back to her family? Ever get to go home? Or would she end up in a shallow grave? As a sex slave in a Honduran whorehouse?

When Margot woke, she was confused, and uncomfortable. The discomfort slowly turned to pain and the confusion into fear, as she opened her eyes and realized she was hanging by her wrists, her feet just touching the floor. She appeared to be in a dark room….but the main thing that got her attention and made her petrified was that there were four young men, buck naked, surrounding her, staring at her hungrily. They all sported fully erect cocks.

None of them said a thing. Javi approached her, and suddenly slapped her left tit. Margot yelped and cried out…. “Stop! I can pay you. My family has money. Please just let me go.! Pleasepleaseplease…. Aiggghhhhhh!!!’ The shriek was ripped out of her as Javi kicked her square in the pussy.

Without further ado, he grabbed her hips, placed the tip of his cock at the entrance to her most private place, and slowly, remorselessly, shoved it into her dry and aching cunt. “No! Please stop! NO! Stop raping me!!!’ Javier adjusted his grip on the small girls hips, pulled partially out of her, and then jammed it in as hard as he could. Margot screamed out in agony “Oh God No please stop it hurts so much… PLEASE STOP!” But Javi didn’t stop. He continued fucking her hard and fast, her pert young tits bouncing obscenely with every thrust. Margot was in hell…. Or so she thought. Suddenly, Mani stepped behind her and poured some lube on his raging hard dick. He stepped up, and Javi held still. Mani grabbed her hips, placed the tip of his cock against her tiny asshole, and pushed….slowly and steadily forcing his way into the shaking girls unwilling body. Margot was screaming wordlessly and weeping as Mani took a full minute to lodge his rampant rod into her ass. He held it there as Javi started fucking her again, just enjoying the feeling of the other dick against his through the girl’s thin lining. Then he pulled a little bit out, and sharply jabbed it in, eliciting an extra loud yelp from the ravished teen. The two of them then proceeded to rape the shit out of the weeping girl. They went at it for a couple minutes, reveling in the feeling of her tight holes around their rampant young dicks. But just as much from the pain they were causing Margot - these were not kind, gentle young men, but rather savage angry wannabe gangsters trying to prove to their friends how tough they were. Margot was in for a hell of a rough time and she’ll be lucky to survive the next couple days.

After just a few minutes, seeming like days to Margot, they both began hammering her even hader as their orgasms approached. Javi grabbed her hips and shoved himself all the way into her as Mani speared her damaged asshole. They ejaculated at the same time, shooting their hot sperm into her. Javi groaned as he came in her…“Que buena puta!” (What a good whore - All dialogue from now on will be in English, although the boys obviously spoke in Spanish). Mani just grunted. Margot, feeling their hot cum shooting into her cunt and ass wept bitter tears of pain and humiliation.
Tomi had been watching the double rape and was getting more and more anxious for his turn. He was definitely going to rape her, but first….

He reached over and grabbed his leather belt. As Javier and Mani stepped away, Margot slumped over, head on breast breathing heavily. Tomi stepped over, and with no warning, reared back and brought his belt around in a wide arc ending on unsuspecting Margot’s left tit. With the explosion of intense pain, her eyes opened wide, body going rigid, head snapping up as her mouth opened to emit a piercing shriek. “Yagghhhhhhhhhhhh. No please stop nononono.” Tomi pulled his arm bad, an evil look on his face. Margot began to hyperventilate, panicking, eyes darting around for some way out of this hell. But there is no escape.

“Please don’t hit me. PleaseI’mbeggingyouletmego!! Please I’m beg…Arrrrrrggggggghhhhhhhh!” As the belt landed on the same left tit, wrenching a howl of animalistic pain from the girl. Again the belt falls, this time on the right side of her body, just below the breasts, where it is most sensitive. Again and again. Margot is moaning and crying, screaming for mercy. “Please please I’ll do anything stop hurting meeeeee AAAAAARRRHHHHHHHGGGGG!” As the belt swung up and whipped her directly on the pussy. Her body convulsed, mouth opened as if screaming but, silent, eyes bulging from the sockets, in a world of pain that shredded her of humanity and turned her entire being into a ball of agony.

Tomi dropped the belt, stepped up, and simply rammed his rampant dick into the poor girl’s snatch. Margot grunts as he enters her, still dazed and out out of her mind from the trauma and pain. He’s gotten himself so hot savaging the teen’s perky tits that it only takes five brutal thrusts that lift Margot off her feet, before he shoots his load into her damaged pussy. He grunts as he cums, pushing out every drop into her. “Oh yeah” he whispers in her ear… “cheap gringo puta. I’m gonna have fun with you.” He bites her left nipple, almost drawing blood. She cries out.

As Tomi steps away from the half conscious girl, Jorge comes close. In a twisted show of tenderness, he gently caresses the side of her face. “Sweet thing… I’m gonna show you how a man treats a woman.” He reaches up, unhooks the carabiner she had been hanging from. As she collapses, he scoops her up and carries her to an old mattress in the corner of the room. He gently lays her down. He leans forward and kisses her mouth slowly and tenderly. Running his hands slowly down her body, teasing, caressing. He whispers softly in her ear, “Don’t worry. I won’t hurt you.”He continues softy caressing and sweet talking her. Slowly her body relaxes, her mind dazed and confused by the pain and trauma, and now in a stupor, reacting to Jorge’s faux tenderness. After 15 minutes, she’s breathing normally and in a half conscious state brought about by stress and trauma. Her eyes close as the young man soothes her. He looks over at the other boys and winks. He continues his gentleness, as he maneuvers between her legs. He places the tip of his very large dick almost on her pussy lips. Reaching up, he grabs both her tits and twists, while simultaneously shoving his cock into her relaxed body. The contrast between the relaxed state she was in and the brutal violation snap her back to her unfortunate reality - getting gang raped and tortured by four sadistic young men. Letting out a horrid scream, she frantically tries to get away from the travesty being perpetrated on her nubile young body. But it is hopeless. Jorge yanks and twists her bruised tits while ramming his 10” cock deeply into Margots sweet teen pussy. Again and again he spears her cunt, eliciting shriek after shriek from her. Finally he releases her breasts, only to latch onto her hips as he pile drives her into the mattress. Letting out a huge groan, he penetrates her uterus and deposits his sperm in her fouled womb.

Jorge crawls of the ravaged teen. She’s lying spread eagled on the filthy mattress, cum dripping from her cunt and ass. Her tits and side are bright red and welting up from the beating. Her pussy is on fire after three brutal rapes, plus the whipping and the crotch kick. Slowly she curls into a fetal position and quietly begins to weep. “Puh-leez let me go home. I want my mommy. Puhleez please I can’t take any more. Oh god oh god why me?” The boys each pop a beer and joke and laugh. The gringa bitch has been awesome to play with.

“What should we do next?”
“Whip her.”
“I want to fuck that ass.”
“Let’s make her blow us.”

The thought of having the hot blond gringa wrap her lips around their cocks made all of theirs cocks twitch in anticipation.

Javi goes over to Margot. “You want to go home?” “Yes.. Oh my God please let me go… I won’t tell. I promise.” She gets to her knees….

“You first need to suck all of our dicks. Or… I could have Tomi use his belt on you again.”

The thought of getting whipped again makes Margot shudder with fear. She’d never felt pain like that before, and getting whipped on the pussy again was impossible for her to contemplate.

“I’ll do it I’ll do it I can do it good don’t hurt me please don’t hurt me again!” She was frantic to suck these sadistic young men to avoid another whipping. Perfect.

“If you bite, I’ll turn you over to Tomi who will whip you to death. Hear me puta?”

“Yes. I can make you feel good.”

“Say it!”

“Please can I suck you off?” “Si, puta. Suck!” He steps up to her, grabs her face and rams his erect dick straight down her throat. Pulling out, he rams it in again, holding it fully embedded in her face. She gags and chokes, her face getting red. It isn’t a blowjob, it’s a throat Fuck, cold, hard and brutal. Again and again he throats her, her vision darkening and her whole world focussed on breathing and surviving this oral assault. No one has ever treated delicate princess Margot so atrociously, and she was starting to lose touch with reality from the pain and the sheer brutality. After just a few minutes that seemed like hours to Margot, he tightens his grip on her head, jams himself in her throat, and shoots stream after stream of hot sperm into her gullet. As Javi steps away, Margot gags and chokes and tries to regain her breath.

Jorge steps up. “You do it,” he says.