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Beach Party

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Teaser: Margot becomes the main event at a beach ‘party.’
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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.

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Title: Beach Party
Author: EvilKnight
Chapter Tags: No sex, lead up
Content Warnings: Add here further content warnings you would like to make your readers aware of.
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Beach Party

Chapter 1: Margot gets ‘invited’

Margot Hardiman was in heaven. Her parents had taken her to Roatan off the coast of Honduras for her graduation. And birthday present. She had just turned 18 (fortunately for you, dear reader). Margot was not a particularly nice girl….growing up wealthy, waited on hand and foot, catered to and spoiled, she saw servants as cogs in the machinery of making her life perfect, not as humans being. Margot was a spoiled princess from Manhattan and she was used to getting her way. She was a gorgeous girl, striking auburn hair down to her lower back, petit but with a bubble butt and amazing perky medium sized tits that seemed to defy gravity. And a sweet, pixie like face.

The resort her folks had taken her to was opulent and had exacting standards for the staff. Eyes down and absolutely NO ogling of the guests. Javier had worked there for several years and was disgusted by the snobby attitude and entitlement of the guests. In particular, the young, mostly beautiful, stuck up bitch daughters of the opulent and powerful. He often fantasized late at night about teaching one of these cunts the meaning of service.

On this morning, Margot, poolside, had demanded that Javi clean the pool NOW, before she got in it, even though he had cleaned it a few hours before. He gave her a dirty look but quickly put his head down and grabbed the net and started recleaning the pool. But Margot had noticed. She complained to one of the managers, and later that morning Javi got reprimanded, AND docked a whole day’s pay. He was besides himself with anger….His little hermanita, his sister, was very ill and now his family would have to choose between dinner and her medicine. That fucking gringa tourist bitch! Javi decided that night that she would pay, and pay, and pay. He contacted a few of his unsavory friends - Manuel, Jorge and Tomy. “Hey amigos. Want to have a special party tomorrow night? I have a special guest from the resort who needs the ‘treatment.’ You in?” “Of course they were in :)

Javi had a plan. He had noticed than Margot had a habit of taking a short stroll around the grounds late at night, right before bed. There was a spot on the back side of the pool area that was invisible from anywhere else on the grounds and went alongside the wooded areas on the other side of the fence. The next morning, at 4:30 am, before his 5am shift, he arrived from the outside by that area of fence and, with his wire cutters, made 5 snips, creating a slit a body could pass through. He quickly walked away, entering the resort from the front along with the rest of the early crew. He could already feel his verga swelling as he thought about sinking it into that gringa’s unwilling cunt while his buddies held her spreadeagled. Oh yeah…he was going to really have a go at her. And then his friends. And then all of them again. And after… well…. He couldn’t really let her go. And he didn’t want a murder on his conscience. But he had an idea to make more than enough money to make up for his lost wages. It was going to be a long ‘hard’ day taking a lot of concentration not to be walking around with a screaming boner all day.

Finally, he checked out of work at 5 pm, after 12 long hours. He knew he had till around 11;30, so he went home, had dinner with his family, went to bed early. He arose at 10, quietly leaving the house. Jorge picked him up. Tomy was in the back, but they had to pick up Mani on the way. They parked behind a warehouse about a kilometer from the spot. They walked quietly to the hole Javi had made. Javi and Tomy entered while Manuel and Jorge waited just outside the fence. They waited no more than 15 minutes when they heard her coming. Alone, and looking at her phone - fucking stupid bitch. She never even looked up and did not notice them standing behind a couple shrubs. As she came alongside, Javi dropped a rough canvas bag over her head and then punched her hard in the back of the head. She slumped, stunned or unconscious. They pulled her over to the hole in the fence, and Jorge and Mani pulled her unresisting body through. They four of them each grabbed a limb and hauled her to the car, dropping her in the trunk. Javi had grabbed her phone - he tossed it in the river as they went over the bridge, and they were gone. Tomy had a tio who was involved with the local gang, and had a place out of town, quite secluded, that he used for ‘business’ deals and other unsavory activities - this would not be the first gang rape perpetrated at this place. The boys were beside themselves with lust. They could hardy wait to get this sweet young thing naked. Although none was a virgin, they were young and had limited sexual experience - but they all had watched LOTS of porn, most of it violent and brutal… they were going to try all kinds of fun things on cute, innocent, bitch Margot. Well, fun for them, not so much for her. Tomi had a sadistic streak in him, and none of the young men was a gentle soul nor in the mood to play nice. Javi in particular was still furious with Margot for causing him to lose pay and causing his familia to go hungry. He intended to may the little gringa bitch pay, and pay. And he and his friends were going to enjoy her and her suffering.

Would she go back to her family? Ever get to go home? Or would she end up in a shallow grave? As a sex slave in a Honduran whorehouse?



End of chapter 1

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Re: Beach Party

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I really enjoy your setup and things it promises. So please don’t take this as criticism, but a question on story telling. You started the story, with a short snippet from Margot’s perspective before permanently switching to Javier’s for the rest of the chapter. While that us a perfectly valid approach its always a bit jarring for me as a reader, I know personal preferences vary, the thing I wonder was what were you trying to achieve with that choice, and do you think you succeeded.
I think you also portrayed Margot as a spoiled, young woman, relishing her parents money quite well through Javier’s perspective.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Shocker
Excellent point. No intent - just a span of time between writing and me being an inexperienced lazy writer.

I’ll consider and will likely edit.

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Re: Beach Party

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EvilKnight wrote: Sun Apr 27, 2025 4:59 pm Shocker
Excellent point. No intent - just a span of time between writing and me being an inexperienced lazy writer.

I’ll consider and will likely edit.

Thanks
It wasn’t intended as request to change anything, I hate getting those. But I find it useful to get feedback, forcing me to think about why I wrote something a specific way. All choices are valid, but thinking about the why helps the growth as writer.
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