Quickie

[EvilKnight]

Teaser:Short but not sweet.
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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.
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Title: Quickie
Author: EvilKnight

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I’d been stalking her for weeks. She was perfect, Meek, soft, curvy and the a mom of an 18 month old daughter. Ilse was 23, Latina, a regular church goer, submissive to her husband, and doting on her child. I knew she’d be an easy mark. I’d noted her schedule, and found the ideal time and place. It wasn’t going to be a snatch and long slow rape (I’ll tell you about one of those another time). This one was gonna be a quick in and out, in more ways than one. Ilse drove a Tahoe SUV. And every Tuesday at 3, she stopped at Peterson’s bakery. There was parking spot she always used… it was a little further away, but was shaded because it was right up against the neighboring building. That was going to prove unfortunate for her. She’d pull up parallel to the building, get out, walk around the Tahoe, and open the back passenger door to take out her brat. At that moment, she was invisible from the lot and the street. Invisible and vulnerable.

Tuesday, 2;45 pm. I left my car a few blocks away, street parking. I had two knives, both sharp and scary looking. I waited just around the corner from her spot…. There she was. She pulls up and turns right around the corner. I count to 15, and start walking. As I turn the corner, I see her rounding the back of her rig and moving towards the back door. She has her back to me as I approach. She’s a sweet little thing, 5’ 1”, about 120. Long sleek black hair to her waist. Piercing black eyes. Skin like creamed coffee. Wearing a sundress the light shines through, showing her womanly curves….she ’s asking for this! She reaches for the door and I reach her and give her a low hard hook to her kidney, and she gasps and starts to collapse. I grab her and force her to the passenger door, opening it, I bend her over the the seat.

“Scream and I’ll gut you,” I whisper in her right ear as I lean over her showing her the long hunting knife. “Stay still and take it, puta.” I reach down and under her dress, feeling her leg, her thigh, slowly gliding up and inwards… to that softest place. Creeping inside her panties, caressing her ass…When my finger brushes her labia, she gasps, “Señor, no, pro favor!” “Si chica, SI!” I flip her dress over her back. Holding her in place with my left hand, I pull her panties down, and unzip. Pulling out my already engorged dick was no easy task, and I let go of her, after warning her again, “Move and you’ll bleed out.” Using both hands to free myself, I lean over her. I start rubbing my dick head on her pussy lips, and then drop some spit on my dick. Then I just push it into her slowly, but forcefully, driving into her velvety twat. I work it all the way in and hold it in her, deep. Throbbing, savoring her warmth…. God she feels good. I reach over and caress the side of her face… she shivers in fear and disgust. I pull out and then ram it into her as hard and fast as I can, again and again, Pile driving her into the seat. She grunts like a pig with each thrust, snot and spittle running out of her mouth and nose, unable to even scream. I am trying to get off as fast as possible. No problem… I shoot a huge hot load into her unwilling snatch, giving my hips a couple extra twists as I empty into her. Leaning over, I lick her cheek and stick my tongue in her ear… she whimpers and shudders. “Gracias puta.” Pulling out, I wipe myself on her dress. “Call the cops or tell anyone and I’ll come shove my dick in your hot little asshole.” Of course I’m not foolish enough to revisit a one of my unwilling cum dumpster, but she doesn’t know that.

I pull up my pants, and dodge around the corner of the mini - and I’m gone.

[Shocker]

A good use of minimalist storytelling. I did enjoy this despite the brevity

[Claire]

Thank you for editing the story to be in line with the content rules. For what it's worth, I don't think it loses much because of the adjustments. I hope you'll be a part of our next contest!

I usually prefer stories that are at least a little longer, but for what it is trying to do, I think it is well executed. The protagonist mentions that he'll tell us a longer story another time. Is that supposed to be the same guy as in Amending My Resume?

[Blue]

A good example how to build suspense with a short story. A real quickie.
And it leaves enough room for your imagination to wander. You can even imagine the story yourself, making it a little longer and more detailed.

[EvilKnight]

Not intended to be the same character