Closing Time: Rachel's Ordeal

[Vile8r]

CHAPTER 3:

True to their word, the work crew kept Rachel very busy. They were going through booze like it was going out of style. Rachel was glad a few of the tables in her section eventually cleared out, so it lessened her workload a bit. The crew guys were enough as it was!

After a few rounds at their table, they got up and meandered into the pool room. For a Friday night, the pool room was not that busy, which surprised Rachel. Usually, it was right full of people.

It made a little more work for Rachel as she had to keep travelling back and forth between the pool room and her other section. Carson and his boys were not slowing down in their drinking. Rachel didn’t mind. She figured after a couple of hours she had already made about $200 in tips from them.

Rachel came walking into the pool room to see if the men needed another round. She already knew they probably would. They needed another round every time they saw her.

“Another round?” she asked.

“Damn right, sweetie!” answered Bruce.

“And bring more shooters too!” yelled Carson.

“What I really need is a hot piece of ass,” Tad smirked.

Rachel looked over her shoulder as she walked back to the bar.
“Sorry,” she shrugged, “I really can’t help you there!”

Rachel left the room and Tad grabbed his crotch.

“Oh, I think you could, honey,” he said.
“Mmmm, what I wouldn’t give to spend a few minutes with her!”

Rachel was back in a few minutes with a fresh round of drinks and more shooters.

The men were just racking up the balls for another game of pool.

“Hey, why don’t you have a game of pool with us?” asked Owen.

“I’d love to,” replied Rachel, “but my boss would have a fit. I’m pretty busy right now.”

“Oh, come on,” chuckled Derwin.

“Yeah, we’re playing doubles. You can be my partner,” said Tad.

“I’m not really that good,” said Rachel.

“Bah, neither is Bruce, but you look a whole better than he does,” joked Tad.

“Hey, watch it pal!” Bruce shot back. He shook his fist good-naturedly.

“Maybe another time,” said Rachel, “but I gotta get back to work.”

Back at the bar, she paused for a minute to have a drink of cold water.

“Whew, those crew guys aren’t giving me a moment’s rest,” she said to Andy.

“Yeah, they’re liking you! Keep up the good work and they’ll keep spending money!" he beamed.

“Well, you won’t believe it! As busy as I am, they just asked me to play a game of pool with them.”

“Go ahead then!” said Andy.

Rachel gave him a weird look. This was unexpected!

“You….want me to?” asked Rachel. “But who’s gonna look after my tables?”

Andy gave a a dismissive wave of his hand. “Ah, shit, the bar’s died down a bit. Brooke can handle your section until you’re back. You’ve been givin’ ‘er all night. Take a little break. If it’ll keep those boys happy if you play pool with them, then go for it!”

“Okay, but Brooke ain’t gonna like it,” said Rachel wistfully.
“Ah, fuck that moody bitch,” snarled Andy. “She won’t complain if she knows what’s good for her.”

Rachel set her tray down, grabbed herself a can of Pepsi from the cooler, and headed to the pool room.

“Hey, girl!” yelled Tad as he saw her enter the room.

“Good news!” said Rachel. “My boss told me to take a break so I’m coming to play pool with you.”

“All right,” said Derwin. “We’ll start a new game.”

The men handed her a pool cue and re-racked the balls.

“Ladies first!” said Tad. “You break!”

“Like I told you, I’m not very good,” said Rachel nervously.

She held the cue awkwardly and lined up on the cue ball. She hit the balls and they scattered around the table.

“See, that wasn’t too bad,” said Carson.

Not that any of the guys were paying attention to the shot she made. They were admiring how the fabric of her shorts stretched tight across her ass as she bent over.

The other men all took their turns then it was Rachel’s again. She was struggling to get lined up on the cue ball.

“Here, sweetie. Let me help you,” said Tad.

He came around the table and stood alongside Rachel. Tad was over six feet tall and towered over the petite girl. He reached down to help show her the proper technique of holding the cue. His right arm was across her back so he could move her right hand and his left arm was down holding her left hand. Tad was able to look right down inside Rachel’s blouse and see the curve of her breasts inside her bra. He felt his cock stirring.

It felt so good, pressing against her warm firm body. Tad breathed in the fragrant scent of her perfume and her silky soft hair brushed his arm. He could just imagine what it would be like to have this gorgeous girl underneath him with his cock buried deep inside her.

He helped Rachel take the shot and she let out a little squeal of glee as she watched the ball she had been aiming at disappear down the pocket.

“I did it! I sunk a ball!” she squealed as she gave a little hop.

Owen and Derwin smiled to each other as they watched her small perky tits bounce under her shirt.

“Nice!” Derwin whispered.

The game continued, with Tad insisting on giving Rachel assistance with each shot she made. Rachel couldn’t help but notice, his body seemed to press a little harder and his hands roamed a little more, with each time he was close to her. And the other guys too, Derwin and Owen, seemed to be taking a few liberties, as well, doing things that caused them to “accidentally” rub and bump against her.

Rachel was beginning to feel a bit uneasy. It reminded her of things the boys used to do to her in school. Rub against her in the hallway, give her little pinches on the butt, snap her bra, juvenile stuff like that.
She always kind of figured it was the price she paid for being a cute girl. But she had hated it too! It also disgusted her to notice that Derwin was wearing a wedding ring. What the hell was he doing trying to flirt with her?

They played a couple of games. She and Tad beat Owen and Derwin both times.

“All right, my girl!” said Tad as he high-fived her.

“Well, I really have to get back to work,” said Rachel, glancing at the clock on the wall. They had been playing for nearly a half hour.

“See ya, Rachel! Thanks for the game,” said Derwin.

Rachel hurried back to the bar. She ran into Brooke.

“You done playing pool with your boyfriends?” she sneered.

“I’m sorry I took so long,” Rachel apologized. “But Andy told me to take a break.”

“Yeah, well, now that you’re done giving out blowjobs in the pool room, you can get back to work!”

Before Rachel had a chance to respond to Brooke’s sarcastic remark, she had turned and walked away. She knew taking that break to play pool would cause nothing but trouble with Brooke. Brooke already didn’t like her because, well, as far as she was concerned Rachel was just a little too curvy, a little too perfect, a little too perky. Rachel also knew that Brooke considered her as Andy’s little pet and that he let her get away with stuff that the other waitresses couldn’t.

Oh well, let her think what she wants, thought Rachel. It’s no skin off my butt!

Back in the pool room, the guys were still talking about Rachel.
“Goddamn, she is one hell of a cutie!” said Owen.

“Yeah, I’m sure glad we came here tonight,” said Bruce. “A little shithole town like Rutler, you probably don’t get to see cunt like her too often!”

“I sure wouldn’t mind partying with her,” said Tad.
The other men smiled at him knowingly. They had all worked away from home enough over the years to know what that meant.

Carson suddenly got up from the stool he was perched on.
“I’ll be back in a few minutes, boys. Keep the party going!”

Carson walked up to the bar and motioned to Andy to come over. He extended his hand out.

“Hello sir, the name is Carson Matlin. You’ve seen my boys in here tonight partying, I take it?”

Andy shook his hand.
“Pleased to meet you. I’m Andy Rouse. I own this place, and yeah, I saw your guys tonight. You’re working out on the new overpass, I hear.”

“Yeah, we are. Gotta say, ya got yourself a nice little establishment here. Me and the boys are quite enjoying ourselves.”

“That’s good to hear, Mr. Matlin,” said Andy. “I’m glad to see you came in tonight.”

“I was wondering if you and I could talk a little more privately?” said Carson.

“Sure,” replied Andy.

He motioned Carson over to the door of his private office and they stepped inside.

“Is there a problem?” asked Andy with a look of concern. “I hope you’ve been getting good service!”

Carson smiled. “Oh, no need to worry about that, Mr. Rouse. Your waitress, Rachel, who’s been serving us, she is something else!”

Andy smiled back. “Oh yeah, she is! She’s one of my best girls.”

“Well, it’s her I’ve come to talk to you about,” said Carson. “I’m sure you’ve likely noticed my boys have taken a bit of a shinin’ to her?”

“Yeah, I noticed,” said Andy. “Everybody who comes in here usually takes a shining to her!”

“My guys have been out working now for several weeks. Working damn hard too! They deserve a bit of a…..reward. I wanna give ‘em one. Not only that, Mr. Rouse, but you look like a guy who likes to make money.”
Carson reached in his pocket and pulled out a large wad of bills. He peeled several off and set them on Andy‘s desk.

”That’s $1000, sir! It’s yours, if you can get Rachel into coming over to our motel tonight for a party after she gets off work.”

“A “party”, huh?” asked Andy. “Now, this party wouldn’t happen to involve you boys all banging her, would it?”

Andy chuckled to himself. He had dealt with this sort of thing many times before in his years of operating a bar. Usually, when a bunch like this wanted a girl, or girls, to come back to their motel with them, it was for one purpose and one purpose only. To fuck the shit out of them!

He cleared his throat. “Are you proposing I prostitute my waitress out to you boys?”

“Well, you don’t have to say it quite that way,” said Carson. “Just ask her if she’ll come party with us. Tell her it’ll be good PR for the bar. You can split that money with her! I could just ask her myself, but I got a feeling she’d listen to you better, seeing as how you’re her boss.”

Andy looked at Carson and then at the pile of bills on his desk. A grin formed on his face. Carson could tell from the look in Andy’s eyes that the wheels were in motion. Andy was thinking an evil thought.
Instead of being offended and telling this guy to get lost, it aroused Andy, the thought of five strange men banging the hell out of his cute waitress. Then he realized to himself, this could be IT! This could be HIS ticket to finally getting between Rachel’s heavenly thighs!

“I, um, have an even better…… proposition….. for you, Mr. Matlin,” said Andy slowly.

“And what would that be?” asked Carson.

“You make it $2,000, and I will let you and your boys do Rachel right here in the bar! I’ll get her to stay late to close, I’ll lock the doors and shut off the surveillance cameras, and the place is yours for the night! How does that sound? And little Rachel will be all yours to do whatever you please with!”

Carson’s eyes lit up.
“Seriously? You’d do that?”

“Damn straight, I would. Like I say, for 2 grand! And you and your guys can help yourselves to some free booze while you’re here!”

Carson held out his hand. “Andy, you have got yourself a deal!”

He reached into his pocket and pulled out some extra bills to put with the rest on the desk.

“Now, there’s just one little condition,” said Andy.

“And what is that?” asked Carson.

“I get a turn on her too!”

Carson let out a snicker. “Ah, the dirty old boss wants a piece of ass too, huh?”

Andy gave a sheepish smile. “Fuck man, you don’t know what it’s like working with that girl. I walk around with a constant hard-on! I’ve wanted to fuck her since the day I hired her!”

“Well, we’ll help you get rid of that hard-on tonight,” said Carson, clapping Andy on the shoulder.

[Shocker]

Excellent continuation and increase in tension. This is a game of pool I’d love to join.

[LaLia]

Excellent continuation and increase in tension. This is a game of pool I’d love to join.

I agree...well structured, and I'm excited to see what happens next. One small thing: paragraphs are important, but there can also be too much. I found there was a bit too much scrolling here, but that's a comment for the B grade. And I think you forgot the headline. And please remember to update the index.

Seriously enjoying this one so far. Like the characterisation and the varying ages of the characters. Interested to see how the NC action takes shape. I'll certainly be keeping my eyes open for updates.
Thank you for sharing.

Oh and this one runs the risk of making like the main character so much that I cringe a little when she gets throw in into the NC action. Its funny really, I've experience that a few times with rape stories. when the characters are written to be so likeable that when they are busy getting assaulted I find myself sympathising rather than enjoying that action... Hmmm... Feels like I'm kinda missing the point lol.

Maybe that's what's intended, that you feel sorry for the victim!?