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Hell to Pay

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Teaser: As soon as she stepped across the threshold, she caught a whiff of something - sweat mixed with cheap cologne and burnt motor oil. Then big hands encircled her wrists and yanked her arms behind her back, making her cry out in surprise. She barely had time to realize what was happening before her vision went black and her senses were overwhelmed with the cloying smell of industrial chemicals mixed with rotting seaweed and molasses.

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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.


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Title: Hell to Pay
Author: MasterKey
Chapter Tags: English, Unfinished, Medium, Nonconsensual, Drama, Solo, Gang, Abduction, Humiliation, Interracial, Reluctance, Sleep, Bondage, Punishment

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Hell to Pay

Part One

As soon as she stepped across the threshold, she caught a whiff of something - sweat mixed with cheap cologne and burnt motor oil. Then big hands encircled her wrists and yanked her arms behind her back, making her cry out in surprise. She barely had time to realize what was happening before her vision went black and her senses were overwhelmed with the cloying smell of industrial chemicals mixed with rotting seaweed and molasses.

Then the blackness swallowed her completely.

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Vivian Hawthorne had not been tough to track down, not for someone with sufficient motivation and time… and Lester Boone had plenty of both these days. COVID had ravaged pretty much every business in the area, and Lester’s small machine shop had been struggling for years already. The pandemic had put the last nail in the coffin of his personal American Dream. His home, his marriage, both taken – the latter by the virus, the former by the bank when he found himself unable to make the monthly payments.

For the past six months he had been sleeping on a cot in the back of his shop, huddled close to an ancient space heater which buzzed alarmingly and had begun to smell like burning wiring. The shop was fully paid for, at least until the annual property taxes came due next month. Past that, he’d be living out of some roach-infested SRO, and when his pitiful bank account ran dry, his work truck.

Lester had no intention of quietly accepting his fate.

The plan had begun over beers with Sarge and the boys, the only spot of pleasure in his dreary day. Sarge liked to brag he lived large in his RV, able to pack and go at a moment’s notice, wherever the whim might take him. He’d never driven so much as out of the county. Sarge might be a blowhard, but at least the beer was cold and free.

Sarge was a war vet, which he brought up as often as he could so he could regale the boys with tales of his exploits in Vietnam as an MP. The men he’d killed, the men he’d saved – but mostly, the women he’d fucked. Every visit, Lester heard Sarge spin a fresh tale of the women he had screwed in Saigon, or wherever he’d served. If he’d served. Stories of paying some hooker for a fast fuck, then chaining her to the bed with his Army-issue cuffs so he could take his time with her. Most days, Lester tuned Sarge out when his stories wandered that direction. One day, when the heater was on the blink and the wind howled through every gap around every door in the shop, he didn’t. He listened.

“You can’t go wrong with the miniskirt,” Sarge said between long pulls of his Heinekin. “No fuss, no muss. Yank that thing up and whoo, full access to the fun bits. Quick and easy as you please. Course, the panties might slow you down.” He reached into his pocket and pulled out a worn utility knife, the kind with the replaceable blade that retracted all the way into the handle and was built to last a lifetime. “Fresh blades always do the trick. One little snip and those panties come right off in your hand.”

Sarge leaned back in the weathered patio chair. “But you need both hands, right? So just shove ‘em in her mouth. The other holes are just as much fun.”

Lester listened, and pondered.

The foreclosure papers were in a shoebox on the workbench, right where he’d dropped them the day he’d slept in the shop. He’d barely glanced at them during the process, still trying to process his wife’s death. Now he dug them out and leafed carefully through them, a yellow Hi-Liter in his hand, marking the name of every department, every individual he came across. It wasn’t long before certain ones began to become familiar: Loss Mitigation. All signed by account representative Vivian Hawthorne.

Lester may not have had a computer or email, but big businesses still used the Yellow Pages. So he let his fingers do the walking, and dug out a handful of phone numbers associated with the bank. Customer service still meant something to some people, and just speaking to a customer who was sympathetic instead of angry convinced more than one customer service rep to share information with him that they really shouldn’t have.

And so after two dozen phone calls he had an address, some office building downtown. The kind of place which had work trucks going in and out all the time. One more wouldn’t be noticed, not if he timed it right. It wasn’t more than a few days before he had a good idea of her daily work schedule. He had plenty of time, a valid permit to park in a nearby commercial lot good for another few months, and a decent pair of binoculars he’d once used while hunting whitetail deer.

But Lester had a different prey in mind.

A rifle and skinning knife would not do for this one, oh no – this one needed to be bagged alive and intact. She’d no doubt panic, probably scream, and alert everyone in the goddamn building in the process. So he looked through the odds and ends that inevitably build up, and found a bottle marked ‘Trichloromethane’ that he’d tried once to clean the surface of a workpiece and wound up gassing himself in the enclosed shop. That day had taught him two lessons – one, to always open the doors while working with chemicals, and two, to keep that damn bottle nice and closed so he didn’t wind up passing out on the sidewalk again.

Trichloromethane was another name for chloroform.

A little more searching, a little more work, and he had a makeshift hood fashioned form an imitation leather car seat - nice and pliable, but too durable to rip with one’s fingers. He’d laced length of rope through holes he’d punched around the opening, allowing him to pull it tight. Pour a little of the chloroform inside the hood right beforehand, it should work like a charm.

All he had to do was choose the right moment.

End of Part One

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It’s been a long time since I did much prose writing, and I’d be grateful for any thoughts you may have. Thanks for reading!
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@MasterKey Thank you for the story, but I'd like to remind you that according to the forum rules "[y]ou may add up to 6 optional tags to your story". At present there are ten -- could you remove (at least) four?
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Sorry about that, taken care of now :)
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I really like where this is going, don't be to distressed that I didn't give full points yet, I'd like to be able to reward you for the continuation of the story, to which I'm looking forward considerably. Admittedly you had me hooked at the suggestion of gagging her with her panties.
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Really liked this intro, can't wait until we get to meet Ms/Mrs Vivian Hawthorne. As an aside, who hasn't known a Sarge like character?
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Part Two: Service of Process

With the hood still over her head, the only thing Vivian Hawthorne could hear was the drip-drip-drip of water striking concrete echoing somewhere close to her. Where am I? she tried to say, but all that came out was a noise muffled by the imitation leather. She raised her head, tried to lift her arms, and found neither would obey her. A thick strap around her neck kept her from lifting her head, and thick metal manacles on her wrists and ankles had been chained to the angled contraption she had been strapped down to, rendering her unable to move. As cloudy memories returned to her, the truth of the situation struck: she had been taken by someone. Kidnapped. And she was naked.

A moment later the drip… drip… drip… was drowned out by her muffled screams.

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In the beginning – before listening much to Sarge’s ranting – Lester had only wanted to frighten her. At least, that’s what he told himself when he loaded her motionless body into the back of his work truck and covered her with a tarp. This floor of the parking structure was empty for the moment but he knew there was no time to think about what he was doing, not now that he was committed. He’d made sure to secure her hands and feet together with the handy roll of duct tape he always kept handy. Then he stacked a few boxes at the tailgate, enough to conceal the lump of canvas from a cursory inspection. It took less than three minutes from the moment he’d grabbed her until he drove out onto the street, the bustling city outside his truck completely unaware of what he’d just done.

With each passing minute, Lester become more and more certain that some cop was following his truck, just out of view. He watched the speedometer closely, ensuring he gave no reason for them to pull him over for some traffic violation. But soon the bustling streets emptied, the storefront windows shattered and covered in plywood sheets in a vain effort to keep criminals out of the abandoned shops. The pandemic had killed this already-struggling neighborhood, leaving no witnesses to his journey, and even if there were, his truck had driven this route thousands of times over the years. It was perfectly normal to see here.

He turned into the alley, stopped in back of his shop, opened the overhead door and pulled the truck inside. He secured a heavy padlock into the rail, preventing the door from being raised. Then he leaned over and retched. What the hell have I just done? he thought.

You found the bitch who took your home, the inner voice said, the one that had begun to sound like Sarge. The bitch who took all you had left of Abigail.

“Don’t,” he whispered fiercely to the empty shop. “You don’t get to say her name. Not now. Not ever.”

Why? Are you afraid she’d disapprove of what you’re about to do to this bitch?

In response, Lester just turned and unlocked the truck’s tailgate, tossing the now-useless boxes to the ground. He stood there for a moment, his chest rising and falling with deep breaths as his heart raced. Then he pulled away the tarp.

Lester had never seen Vivian Hawthorne’s face in such detail before – until now, it had all been distant views through shaky binoculars or grainy photos he had developed in the makeshift darkroom that had once been the shop’s ladies restroom. Abigail had insisted upon having one when they’d bought the shop all those years ago.

Long, wavy black hair that fell to the side when he removed the hood, revealing her light tan complexion. Her mascara hadn’t even run – she had no chance to panic before the chloroform had done it’s job. She was beautiful, in an exotic way – maybe she had some Mediterranean ancestry. Lester stared at her chest for a long moment, watching it rise and fall with each breath, regular as clockwork.

She was unharmed… for the moment.

Lester pulled the hood back over her head, then picked her up and slung her over his shoulder in a classic fireman’s carry. He’d been working with slabs of metal all his adult life – the weight of one woman hardly registered. The workbench he’d used for decades was gone – he’d cleared it of all the junk that had accumulated and shoved it off to the side against the wall of the shop. In it’s place was a heavily modified steel cart that had been fitted with a wooden framework on top, part of which could tilt to act as a backrest. On the other end, the seat end, two heavy steel pipes jutted up from the sides, acting as leg supports. It resembled a makeshift gynecology table, with the added feature of having various rings and straps in place to act as restraints for when she woke up.

Which she would be doing soon.

He laid her on the cart, fastened steel manacles around her wrists and ankles and secured them in place with padlocks. Then her took lengths of chain and ran them between loops welded to each manacle and matching loops he’d welded to the cart, immobilizing her limbs. Finally, he ran a thick strap of leather over her throat, hooking it to the frame with metal hooks he’d riveted to each end.

Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out his pocket knife, the one he’d used for decades for pretty much everything a knife can be used for. Today, that use would be slitting her clothes apart to remove them. Lester worked his way down, slicing away her blouse, her skirt, her bra. Her panties, he left in place for the moment. Then he pulled off her shoes and peeled off her stockings, adding them to the pile of discarded clothing.

She was just about ready. Now all Lester had to do was wait for her to wake up.

Then he would start.
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These first two chapters are fantastic! Wonderfully written. I love the dark, gritty atmosphere and the vivid portrayal of a broken American Dream. His inner struggle over whether to go through with it makes him feel very relatable.
The moment when he takes off her hood is almost poetic.
I’m really looking forward to learning more about Vivian’s character — and of course, where the story goes from here.
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Part Three: Unlawful Detainer

“Mmph…”

Lester snapped out of his reverie and looked over at his guest. Correction – abductee, that voice in his head cheerfully reminded him. Steel clinked as she began to move, flexing against her restraints and making the shop echo.

Time to do this.

He slowly rose to his feet and pulled off his work gloves, stuffing them into the pockets of his overalls. Them he walked toward her, listening to her muffled voice as it rose in pitch and volume, almost understandable beneath the dark brown hood which was still draped over her head. “Hllp!!” she was saying. “Plls, smmn hllp mh!!”

He paused at her feet and looked down at his work, breathing heavy, heart pounding in his chest. She was covered in a sheen of sweat, despite the chill in the shop. Muscles flexed and bulged as she tried to pull away from her restraints to no effect. The pitch of her voice rose, her pleas transforming into screams as the reality of her situation became apparent.

Lester reached into his back pocket, pulled out his pocket knife, flicked the blade open. For almost a minute he just stood there, watching her struggle, and almost to his surprise he found himself aroused at the sight before him. He licked his lips, and went to work. He touched the tip of the blade to the bottom of her right foot, just behind the ball, and slowly dragged it downward – not enough to draw blood, or even break the skin, but more than sufficient to get her attention.

She tried to pull away, but the restraints held her firmly in place. The screams devolved into panicked sobbing, unintelligible beneath the hood but undoubtedly begging for her captor to release her, how she’d never tell a soul if he just let her go unharmed. How she’d do anything if he promised not to harm her. Bargaining.

Too late now, he thought, almost sadly.

He slowly dragged the dull side of the blade up the length of her calf, spiraling around her knee and continuing up her thigh. Her breathing had become fast and shallow, the sounds she made nothing but babble as he drew the tip close to her groin.

Then he withdrew the blade. “No… no, not like that,” he murmured, folding the knife and sliding it back into his back pocket.

Lester reached out, grabbed the top of the hood and yanked it away. Blinded by the sudden brightness after the blackness beneath the hood, Vivian Hawthorne squeezed her eyes shut and cried out in surprise. She opened her mouth to scream again, but when Lester clamped his left hand around her throat all she could do was sputter. “Be quiet,” he said. “Be quiet and I’ll let go.”

Gasping like a beached fish, Vivian looked up at her captor, her dark eyes wide and rimmed with tears. Then she pressed her lips closed and stared up at him. Lester waited a few seconds then slowly released his grip, letting his hand fall to his side. “Good… you can listen. That’s very good.”

He reached out a hand and leaned close to her face, his breath hot on her cheek. “I’m going to ask you questions. If you can’t answer, tell me. Do you understand?” He leaned closer and whispered into her ear, “Please… don’t lie to me, Vivian.”

She nodded as best she could under the straps, her mouth forming the word ‘yes’ with no sound.

Lester stood up, took a step backward. “Do you remember me?”

“N – no,” she squeaked. “I – I’ve never s-seen you b-b-before.”

“That’s right. We’ve never met before today.” He reached into his overalls, fished out a battered leather wallet bulging with all manner of odds and ends that a business owner tends to accumulate. “But you’ve left a very deep mark on my life.”

He fished out a battered photo, gazed at it sadly, then turned it so she could see. A Polaroid, faded and yellowed, two young, smiling faces in front of a yellow two-story house. “Do you remember this house?”

She shook her head. “N – no.”

“Of course you don’t,” he sighed. “How many homes did you foreclose on this year? Do you remember?” He stepped closer. “How about last month? Or last week?” His hand shot out and gripped her cheeks, pinching hard. “How many pieces of paper did you sign that wrecked people’s lives?” She tried to speak but his grip made that impossible.

“Imagine my surprise when I returned from my wife’s funeral, only to find the locks changed and a sheriff’s deputy waiting to escort me off what was suddenly no longer my property.” He leaned close, staring into those wide, dark eyes. “The whole house got sold right out from under me, while COVID was drowning my wife in her own snot. Buried in a pauper’s grave because I couldn’t pay for a funeral.” He pushed her face away and took a step back, a sour expression on his face. “This is the only picture I’ve got left of my Abigail.”

“I – I know people at the bank,” she gasped, her mind racing. “I can get the sale reversed, I -”

“No, all you can do is sign pieces of paper which take people’s lives away. People don’t change, not really. I let you go now you’ll just do it again, and some other poor fool will end up where I did.” He slid the picture back into his wallet, then swapped the knife in his back pocket for the wallet. He flicked the blade open and her eyes went wide, her mouth hanging open as her words cut off mid-sentence as if he’d used the knife to cut out her voice.

“Every action has it’s consequences,” he said, moving the knife toward her groin.

The blade slid forward, found it’s target, sliced through as Vivian squeezed her eyes shut, certain she was about to die -

Lester yanked away the now-sliced panties and used two fingers to stuff them inside her mouth, puffing out her cheeks as she moaned through the ruined garment.

He leaned close and whispered into her ear, “What matters is finding a way to live with them.”
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