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Teaser: The sun blazed down on the crowded beach, a golden hue that painted everything in a warm glow. Sandra, an adventurous soul with a secret thrill for the illicit, lay on her back with her eyes shaded by a wide-brimmed hat. Tom, her husband, sat beside her, his eyes hidden by mirrored sunglasses, a knowing smile playing on his lips. They had a prime spot, tucked behind their oversized beach windscreen, next to the old seawall, offering all the privacy they desired.
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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.

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Title: Day at the beach
Author: Trio
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Day at the beach
— The old version —

The sun blazed down on the crowded beach, a golden hue that painted everything in a warm glow. Sandra, an adventurous soul with a secret thrill for the illicit, lay on her back with her eyes shaded by a wide-brimmed hat. Tom, her husband, sat beside her, his eyes hidden by mirrored sunglasses, a knowing smile playing on his lips. They had a prime spot, tucked behind their oversized beach windscreen, next to the old seawall, offering all the privacy they desired.

Their two kids, oblivious to the covert intimacy unfolding beside them, were absorbed in their task. With meticulous focus, they built a sandcastle, their tiny hands sculpting moats and turrets with the precision of miniature architects. The older one, a girl of about seven, directed operations with an air of authority, while her four-year-old brother added the finishing touches with a plastic shovel.

Tom had been applying sunscreen to his wife's body, enjoying the feel of her skin under his hands. As he worked, his thoughts drifted to the passionate moments they often shared in secret, the thrill of almost getting caught adding a spicy layer to their love life. Tom had his fingers glide over Sandra's thigh, his touch a silent declaration of his intentions. Her breath hitched as his hand moved up.

As the children's giggles filled the air, Tom's touch grew bolder, hidden by a small towel, his fingers exploring Sandra's folds with an ease that came from years of shared passion. The warmth of his hand against her skin sent shivers down her spine, and she bit her lip to stifle a moan that threatened to escape. She could feel her arousal building, a sweet crescendo that matched the rhythm of the waves hitting the beach.

Her eyes flicked to the side, watching her children play, ensuring they were still engrossed in their sandy world. The girl, with a head full of curly hair that matched her mother's, paused in her task to squint against the sun, her expression a perfect replica of Sandra's concentration. The boy looked up briefly, his cheeks red from the heat, and called out something unintelligible before diving back into his work. Satisfied, Sandra turned her attention back to Tom's ministrations, her breath hitching as his thumb found her clit and began to circle with maddening slowness.

A burst of laughter from a group of nearby teenagers shattered the momentary serenity. Tom's hand froze, and his eyes darted to the side, a flash of panic crossing his features. Sandra chuckled softly, the sound a blend of amusement and desire. "It's fine," she murmured, her voice thick with passion. "They're too busy with their own games to notice us."

With a deep breath, Tom composed himself and pulled his hand away, wiping it on the small beach towel, licking off what still remained. He glanced at the kids again, who remained oblivious to their parents' clandestine activities. The girl's tongue stuck out in concentration as she placed a tiny seashell on the highest turret, while the boy slapped wet sand onto the base with the enthusiasm of a miniature engineer.

"Maybe you should take them for some ice cream," Sandra suggested, her voice a mix of mischief and practicality. The idea served two purposes: it would give their children a much-desired treat, and it would offer a convenient break to let the tension between her and Tom simmer without boiling over in front of innocent eyes.

Tom's eyes lit up with understanding. "Great idea," he agreed, his voice low and gruff with restrained desire. He leaned down to give her a quick peck on the cheek, his hand lingering on her shoulder. Sandra felt a jolt of electricity run through her, and she had to fight the urge to pull him back onto her.

With a sigh, she rolled onto her stomach, feeling the heat of the sun soak into her back. The coolness of the breeze against her exposed skin made her shiver, and she felt Tom's gentle touch as he untied the strings of her bikini top. The fabric slipped away, the sensation was intoxicating, and she let out a small gasp of pleasure that she hoped was lost in the symphony of beach sounds.

Tom looked at the kids, standing up with an ease that contradicted his eagerness to return to his wife. "Alright, you two," he announced. "Ice cream time!" The children's heads shot up, their eyes lighting up with excitement. They didn't need to be asked twice. They jumped to their feet, brushing sand off their little bodies and allowing Tom to lead them away from the temptation of their half-finished sandcastle.

Sandra took a deep breath and closed her eyes, savouring the peace and quiet. The sun on her back was a warm embrace, and she let the tension melt away from her muscles. It was a perfect moment, the kind of stolen serenity that made her feel alive. She listened to the laughter and muffled conversations, not that far, but far enough to create a bubble of privacy around her. She drifted into a peaceful daze, the sound of the waves soothing her.

All that was shattered abruptly as she felt a firm push, a weight pressing her into the sand. She opened her eyes in alarm to see a shadowy figure looming over her, a hand clamped over her mouth. Panic set in as she realised she was being held down by a stranger. She tried to scream, but only a muffled sound came out, her voice trapped by the rough fabric of the towel he'd used to silence her.

Her attacker's other hand was busy at her waist, jerking her bikini bottoms aside. The soft fabric scraped against her sensitive skin, sending a bolt of fear through her body. She bucked and twisted, desperately trying to throw him off, but his weight was too much. His hard cock pressed against her back, hot and demanding, and she realised with a cold horror that she was still soaking wet. The sound of people and children playing nearby grew distant, swallowed by the thunder of her own fear.

The man's breath was hot and sour on her neck as he whispered something, but she couldn't make out the words over the roar in her ears. He pushed inside her in one swift, brutal motion. Sandra's eyes rolled back, and she let out a muffled scream, her body tightening around the intrusion. The shock was so intense that for a moment, she thought she might pass out, but the pain kept her conscious, a stark reminder of her reality.

He was rough, his movements erratic and desperate. Sandra's mind raced, trying to find a way to escape, to call out, but his hand was like a vice. She felt the tears squeeze from her eyes, and she could taste the salt of the sea on her lips. The scent of his sweat and the faint odour of sunscreen mixed with the briny air, making her stomach churn.

The man was relentless. His free hand played with her, squeezing her breast, teasing her clit in a parody of the gentle caress she'd just experienced with Tom. Each touch was a violation, a mockery of the pleasure she'd been on the brink of moments ago.

Against her will, she felt her body start to respond. The fear was still there, a cold, heavy weight in her stomach, but it was being overwhelmed by something else. Something primal. The heat of the stranger's body, the pressure of his cock inside her, the way he filled her completely, it was all too much to ignore. The fire Tom had kindled was being fanned into a full blaze by the intrusion of this unknown man.

He noticed the change in her immediately. His thrusts grew more deliberate as he felt her pussy twitch against him. His breathing more heavy now, and he murmured something into her ear, a question or a taunt, she wasn't sure. He slowed down, savouring the way she tightened around him. Sandra's mind reeled. This wasn't how it was supposed to happen. She was supposed to be fighting, to be terrified, not...this.

Her orgasm hit her like a sledgehammer, stealing her breath and making her body arch. She couldn't stop it, couldn't fight it. It was like a storm that had been building within her, and now it had crashed over her in an explosion of lightning and thunder. Her eyes squeezed shut, and she bit down hard on the hand that covered her mouth, muffling the cry of pleasure and pain that wanted to escape.

The man groaned in satisfaction, his grip on her tightening as he drove himself deeper. The waves of pleasure were almost too much. It was wrong, it was all wrong, but her body didn't care. It responded to him, to the violence and the passion in his movements, and she could feel herself slipping away, lost in a sea of sensation.

He leaned over her, his chest pressing against her back, his breath hot and ragged in her ear. His hand left her mouth to clamp around her neck, not too hard, but enough to remind her that she was his to do with as he pleased. The pressure grew as he began to fuck her in earnest, the slap of their bodies echoing in the quiet space around them.

The air was forced from her lungs with every thrust, leaving her gasping and choking. She could feel his cock sliding in and out of her, the sand acting as an abrasive lubricant that only heightened the intensity of the sensation.

Suddenly, he stiffened, his grip on her neck tightening almost painfully. He groaned, and she felt his hot seed spurt inside her, filling her with a sense of revulsion and, inexplicably, satisfaction. She bucked against him, her body reacting as nature intended, betraying her mind's horror. As the tremors of his climax subsided, he whispered in her ear, his voice a gruff taunt, "Thank you for letting me finish what your husband started."

With a swift, cruel motion, he reached around and yanked at the bikini bottoms. She heard the fabric tear. Sandra's eyes went wide with realisation and fear. He stuffed the flimsy fabric into her mouth, effectively silencing her. The material was hot and salty, tasting of her sweet arousal with Tom and the horror of the rape by a stranger . Her jaw clenched around it, her teeth digging into the softness as she struggled to form words, to scream for help. But all that came out was a muffled cry, lost in the cacophony of the beach.

The man had come prepared. He pulled out a small roll of duct tape from his pocket, the silver glinting in the sun. With a practiced efficiency that spoke of experience, he tore off a strip and slapped it over her mouth, sealing the fabric in place. The sticky tape clung to her skin, and she felt a brief panic as she struggled to breathe through her nose, the material of her bikini pressing against her tongue.

Sandra's mind raced as he held her down, his weight heavy on her back, his cock still buried deep inside her. How could he be so calm? So methodical? He was like a predator, finishing his meal before moving on to the next kill. The realisation was a cold, hard punch to her gut, stealing the last of her breath away.

With surprising speed, he reached for her wrists, his grip unyielding as he held them firmly against the sand. She felt the cold, sticky embrace of the duct tape as he wrapped it around her wrists, securing them together with a final, cruel rip. The sound echoed in her ears, and she realised with a sinking feeling that she was truly at his mercy.

With his both hands free now, he grabbed both of her breasts, the sudden pain of his pinching her nipples sending a jolt of fear through her. Her eyes watered, his grip was unyielding, his fingers digging into her flesh.

"I still have some spunk left," he whispered into her ear, his breath hot and moist. "Let's see if we can't plant it deep inside you, hmm?" His voice was a sickening blend of excitement and entitlement.

Sandra's instinct was to fight, to do anything she could to push this monster away from her, but his weight was like a boulder, crushing her into the sand. His laugh was low and malicious as he leaned in even heavier, forcing her to take his cock as it grew even harder.

The moment she felt him pull out of her pussy, she braced herself, but it was too late. His cock found her tight ass, and with no warning, he thrust inside her, ripping through her resistance. The pain was blinding, stealing her breath away in a sharp, piercing scream that was muffled by the fabric and tape. Her eyes squeezed shut, and she could feel the tears burning tracks down her cheeks.

Tom, where are you? The thought pounded in her mind, a desperate mantra. Her body felt like it was being split in two by the invader's brutal force. The children, oh God, the children. Panic flooded her chest, a cold, heavy weight that threatened to crush her. She couldn't let them see this, couldn't let them know their mother was being taken by this monster.

The man's thrusts grew more powerful, his grunts a rhythmic counterpoint to the sound of the waves. He was plowing into her ass with the relentless force of a jackhammer, each thrust a searing bolt of pain that made her vision swim. Sandra's mind was a maelstrom of fear and anger.

But amidst the chaos, there was something else. A memory, a ghostly echo of Tom's gentle touch, his tender kisses, and the sweet agony of his cock sliding into her ass. They'd done it countless times before, in the quiet of their bedroom, the darkness their only witness. He'd always been so careful, so attentive to her needs. He'd whisper sweet nothings into her ear as he penetrated her, his hands soothing her, his body worshiping hers. The contrast was stark, like a beautiful painting defaced by a vandal.

And as the stranger's cock invaded her, she found herself comparing. The pain was the same, but the pleasure... it was different. Deeper, more primal. It was as if her body was betraying her, responding to the brutal intrusion in a way she'd only ever experienced with Tom. Each time the man's hips met her ass, she could feel her orgasm building, a crescendo of pleasure and pain that seemed to feed on her fear. Her body tightened around him, her muscles clenching and releasing, trying to expel him even as they pulled him deeper.

He noticed her response and chuckled, his teeth digging into her shoulder as he whispered, "That's it, baby. Take it all." His voice was a dark symphony of desire and control, and Sandra hated herself for the way it made her wet. She could feel her orgasm approaching, a tsunami far on the horizon, and she knew she had no power to stop it.

With every thrust, she felt her body respond, her body dancing to the tune of his depraved symphony. The pain was unbearable, but so was the pleasure, a treacherous mix that had her hips moving against his willingly. His breath grew heavier, his movements more erratic, and she knew he was close. The thought of him finishing inside her, leaving his mark, filled her with a mix of fear and dark arousal.

The pain in her ass was exquisite, a symphony of agony and ecstasy that seemed to resonate with every nerve in her body. She'd never felt so alive, so alive and so terrified. Each time he plunged into her, she felt a jolt of pleasure that was almost too much to bear, her muscles tightening around him, her body begging for more even as her mind screamed no. Her clit throbbed, a beacon of pleasure that seemed to be in sync with the rhythm of the ocean.

He must have read her mind as his hand moved to her clit, his rough touch setting her nerve endings alight. The pleasure was intense, a stark contrast to the pain in her ass. Sandra's body was a battleground of sensation, her mind screaming in protest while her body betrayed her with every whimper and moan.

The man's grunts grew louder in her ear, his thrusts more erratic as he approached his own climax. Sandra could feel her own pleasure building, a crescendo that seemed to be reaching for the heavens. Her breath was coming in short, ragged gasps, and her body was trembling with the effort of holding back the screams that wanted to tear free. She knew she should be disgusted, should be fighting him with every fibre of her being, but the raw, primal need was too strong.

Her eyes squeezed shut as she felt her orgasm build. Each stroke of his cock in her ass was a bolt of lightning, sending shockwaves through her core. She could feel the muscles in her stomach tightening, her toes curling in the sand. The pleasure was so intense, so all-consuming, that she could hardly believe it was happening to her. It was as if she'd been struck by a divine hand, her body responding with an intensity she'd never known before.

The stranger's grunts grew louder, his breath hot and heavy in her ear. His hand released her neck, and she gulped in a much-needed lungful of air, her breath coming in short, desperate gasps. He leaned down and whispered, "You're going to come for me again, aren't you?" His words were a dark promise, a challenge she couldn't resist.

Sandra felt her body respond, her ass clenching around his cock in a way that she never had done with Tom. The pain had morphed into something else, something dark and delicious that she craved like a drug. Her orgasm grew closer, this one threatening to shatter her into a million pieces. She didn't know if she could take much more, but she didn't want him to stop. She needed this, needed to feel this alive, this free.

With each powerful thrust, the stranger brought her closer to the edge of oblivion. The pain in her ass had transformed into a white-hot pleasure that seared through her body, setting every nerve alight. She could feel herself losing control, her mind a haze of sensation. Her eyes rolled back in her head, and she arched her back, pushing her breasts into the sand. The pressure grew, a tight, coiling knot deep inside her that threatened to unravel at any moment.

And then it happened. Her orgasm hit her like a freight train, stealing her breath and making the world go dark around the edges. The pleasure was so intense, so overwhelming, that she could hardly believe it was possible. Her body bucked and convulsed, her muscles contracting around his cock in a vice-like grip. She could feel the man's excitement grow, his breath coming in short, sharp gasps as he pounded into her with renewed vigour.

The sound of the ocean was a distant hum, the cries of seagulls and the laughter of children playing, a haunting reminder of the world outside this bubble of pain and pleasure. But she couldn't focus on that. All she could think about was the cock inside her, the way it filled her, the way it made her feel. It was as if her body had been designed just to fit around it, for the brutal claiming of a stranger on a beach, surrounded by the scents of the sea and the warmth of the sun.

And then she felt him tense up, his body going rigid with the force of his climax. He groaned, a low, guttural sound that seemed to come from the depths of his soul, and she felt his cock pulse inside her. His cum shot into her, filling her up in a way that was both terrifying and exhilarating. She'd never felt so full, so used, and she hated it. But she also loved it, the dark thrill of it all. The feeling of being claimed, of being taken, it was something she hadn't realised she'd been craving.

As he pulled out, she felt a strange sense of loss, the emptiness inside her like a cold void. The duct tape was sticky on her skin, the fabric in her mouth wet and salty with her saliva. She lay there, bound and helpless, her body still trembling with the aftershocks of her own orgasm. The man leaned down and kissed her neck, his breath hot and moist, and she could feel his smile against her skin.

He used the tape to bind her ankles and her knees, leaving her totally immobilised. "Thank you," he murmured, his voice a dark caress. "That felt great." His words were a knife twisting in her gut, a reminder that she'd enjoyed what he'd done to her. She didn't know how she could feel anything but horror and disgust, but the truth was undeniable. Her body had responded to him, had craved the very thing that was now tearing her soul apart.

"I know where you live," he said, his tone casual, as if he were discussing the weather. Sandra's eyes went wide with terror as he held up her wallet in front of her, her driver's license dangling from his fingers. "Maybe I'll visit you again," he continued, his voice low and threatening. "Would you like that?"

Her heart raced, the panic setting in. He knew her name, her address. She was no longer a faceless victim on a beach. She was a conquest he could claim again. The realisation was a cold, hard slap in the face.

With a final, brutal slap on her ass, he stood, tucking his cock back into his shorts and adjusting himself with a smug smile. She tried to get a good look at his face, but his back was already turned, the sun glinting off the sweat on his broad shoulders.

Sandra lay there, her body still quivering from the assault, and watched as he casually strolled away, leaving her behind the large screen. His movements were unhurried, as if he hadn't just raped a woman in broad daylight in a very public place. The sight of him, walking away as if he hadn't just destroyed her. She felt a rage building within her, a rage so intense it threatened to consume her.

As the minutes ticked by, she could feel the sand sticking to her wet skin, the sun beating down on her, cooking her from the outside while the horror of what had happened seared her from within. She lay there, listening to the muffled sounds of the beach, the occasional giggle of children playing just at the other side of the windscreen.

Then, she heard footsteps, and her heart leapt into her throat. She recognised them instantly, the familiar shuffle of her husband's flip-flops in the sand. Tom's voice called out, "Honey, I left the kids with ... " His cheerful tone was a stark contrast to the fear that had taken hold of her. She struggled against her bonds, desperately trying to get free. But she was too late.

Tom appeared in her line of sight, his eyes wide with shock as they fell upon her. The colour drained from his face, and he dropped the ice cream cone he had brought her, the sound of it smacking on the sand a sad, pathetic echo of the moment. "S-Sandra?" He stuttered, his hand shaking as he reached out to help her. She could see the fear in his eyes, the disbelief. "What happened?"

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Someone had fun at the beach. Looking forward to summer. 😎

This is the updated version tell me what you think.
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I liked this story. You set the scene really well and the simplicity of it, the wife being left alone, the seclusion of the wind breakers. The sense of peace and safety flipped on its head.

The action was well described and mostly clear though at one point you mentioned her hands pressing into his chest, when she was on her front in the sand...?

A couple of mild criticisms - the opening moments with the husband, it felt like something was missing. You mention Tom sitting beside his wife smiling, and then the next time you mention his touch growing bolder, without introducing that he is actually touching her.

I loved that she kept having orgasm after orgasm even though she was being raped and then sodomised (though perhaps there were too many? I'm not sure).
I think more could have been made of the dichotomy of her being raped and yet enjoying it. She seems to embrace the pleasure and almost forget that she's being assaulted by a stranger. and also during the sodomy the pain-pleasure scenario could have made a good parallel to the psychological pain-pleasure of orgasm from rape.

I liked the stealing of the driving licence and the implication that he might come back for another fun time. Would she secretly look forward to it, having had so many orgasms from that first experience...? It would obviously play on her mind, but in what way? The sheer pleasure never before experienced or the sheer terror of him preying on her and perhaps putting her family at risk?
Thanks for sharing!
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Thx for the feedback. This the problem when you rewrite to story to many times. I thought I had all fault edited out.

I get that about maybe too many orgasms, but I am using my own experience, always consensual I promise. There was one woman who did not come easily, but when she came, they kept rolling in. It was fun, but you needed to mop up afterwards ;) I am using her as my muse for many of my story ideas. My ex was angry when I made her come, then she had lost control ... wonder why she is my ex 8-)
Nickamano wrote: Wed Jun 11, 2025 2:37 pm I liked this story. You set the scene really well and the simplicity of it, the wife being left alone, the seclusion of the wind breakers. The sense of peace and safety flipped on its head.

The action was well described and mostly clear though at one point you mentioned her hands pressing into his chest, when she was on her front in the sand...?
Is it this part?: Her bound hands trying to claw at his chest, but they were too small, too weak.

In my mind, he tied her hands on her back and was lying on top her, his chest on her hands. Maybe they would be to low? Maybe he tied them high, bound towards her shoulder blades? I get the confusion. I will try to be better next time.
Nickamano wrote: Wed Jun 11, 2025 2:37 pm A couple of mild criticisms - the opening moments with the husband, it felt like something was missing. You mention Tom sitting beside his wife smiling, and then the next time you mention his touch growing bolder, without introducing that he is actually touching her.

I loved that she kept having orgasm after orgasm even though she was being raped and then sodomised (though perhaps there were too many? I'm not sure).
I think more could have been made of the dichotomy of her being raped and yet enjoying it. She seems to embrace the pleasure and almost forget that she's being assaulted by a stranger. and also during the sodomy the pain-pleasure scenario could have made a good parallel to the psychological pain-pleasure of orgasm from rape.

I liked the stealing of the driving licence and the implication that he might come back for another fun time. Would she secretly look forward to it, having had so many orgasms from that first experience...? It would obviously play on her mind, but in what way? The sheer pleasure never before experienced or the sheer terror of him preying on her and perhaps putting her family at risk?
Thanks for sharing!
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Thoroughly enjoyed the scenario you depicted here! Wife, daughter and I often vacation at a family oriented spot on the Jersey shore (US) and there is no shortage of very attractive mothers clad provocatively. My imagination has sometimes wandered to a scene like this, somewhere in a sparsely attended section of the beach... who knows what could happen? You painted a compelling image of the attack. Not such a fan of the multiple orgasms, but that's just usually something not in my kink bag. Will say that Tom gets the award of understatement of the year with, after finding his wife bound, obviously raped and sodomized, he utters the immortal words, "What happened". Loved it.
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I find it hard to comment on this story. I really liked the opening scene you went for: Loving couple, two children, not your typical sexually inexperienced victim. I always like it when stories deviate from the sexually inexperienced young woman gets abused by methodical hunter rapist template. But the assault itself did little for me. I dislike the forced orgasm trope in general and the sheer frequency here killed any interest in the story I had. To make it work for me, a story needs to really earn it. But that is a personal preference. I'm not saying this is bad, I'm sure there are plenty of readers looking for exactly that trope or it wouldn't be so often used. It's just a massive turn-off for me personally.

Another thing I would change is the use of purple prose: I feel like the text hits me with strong imagery every second sentence. There are so many jolts and bolts of pleasure, fear and electricity hitting her body like thunder and lightning while she feels the freezing embrace of the duct tape and the sun kissing her skin that I just went numb to it while reading it. I think, less would be so much more here. If climactic moments were build up to only then be released with precisely placed moments of intense descriptions, I would have liked that much more.
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Thanks ... I will dim down the the multiple orgasms. I based that on a woman I dated once, when she was on a roll, she couldn't stop. A lot of fun, but very wet. ;)
joey wrote: Thu Jun 12, 2025 5:47 pm Thoroughly enjoyed the scenario you depicted here! Wife, daughter and I often vacation at a family oriented spot on the Jersey shore (US) and there is no shortage of very attractive mothers clad provocatively. My imagination has sometimes wandered to a scene like this, somewhere in a sparsely attended section of the beach... who knows what could happen? You painted a compelling image of the attack. Not such a fan of the multiple orgasms, but that's just usually something not in my kink bag. Will say that Tom gets the award of understatement of the year with, after finding his wife bound, obviously raped and sodomized, he utters the immortal words, "What happened". Loved it.
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Thank you very much for the feedback. I get it on the prose ... maybe just how I write. But you make a good point, I will take this up in my next stories.
Claire wrote: Fri Jun 13, 2025 1:28 pm I find it hard to comment on this story. I really liked the opening scene you went for: Loving couple, two children, not your typical sexually inexperienced victim. I always like it when stories deviate from the sexually inexperienced young woman gets abused by methodical hunter rapist template. But the assault itself did little for me. I dislike the forced orgasm trope in general and the sheer frequency here killed any interest in the story I had. To make it work for me, a story needs to really earn it. But that is a personal preference. I'm not saying this is bad, I'm sure there are plenty of readers looking for exactly that trope or it wouldn't be so often used. It's just a massive turn-off for me personally.

Another thing I would change is the use of purple prose: I feel like the text hits me with strong imagery every second sentence. There are so many jolts and bolts of pleasure, fear and electricity hitting her body like thunder and lightning while she feels the freezing embrace of the duct tape and the sun kissing her skin that I just went numb to it while reading it. I think, less would be so much more here. If climactic moments were build up to only then be released with precisely placed moments of intense descriptions, I would have liked that much more.
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I also write purple prose, I do not think that is bad, I have not read this story yet, it is just a question of different taste for different people though :) Same with the orgasms, I think once you get past the first one and you are multi orgasmic you can probably keep going. I will comment more specifically on this story later when I actually read it, just wanted to reflect on the comments as I saw them while scanning forum :)
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Thx for the feedback ... I have been writing for a while, but I did not let anybody read them. I am accepting all feedback. I still like the story, I am very visual in my thinking so I see it happening before my eyes. The prose puts it in context for me. Probably not for everybody.
Vela Nanashi wrote: Fri Jun 13, 2025 2:08 pm I also write purple prose, I do not think that is bad, I have not read this story yet, it is just a question of different taste for different people though :) Same with the orgasms, I think once you get past the first one and you are multi orgasmic you can probably keep going. I will comment more specifically on this story later when I actually read it, just wanted to reflect on the comments as I saw them while scanning forum :)
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Re: Day at the beach

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The sun blazed down, casting a golden hue across the crowded beach. The laughter of children and the distant crash of waves melded together in a soothing crescendo. Sandra, a woman with a zest for adventure and a penchant for the thrill of the unnoticed, lay on her back, her eyes shaded by a wide-brimmed hat. Her skin, kissed by the sun, was already starting to glisten with a light sheen of sweat. Her husband, Tom, sat beside her, his eyes hidden behind mirrored sunglasses, a subtle smile playing on his lips. They have a fantastic spot, behind their supersized beach windscreen, next to the old seawall, giving all the privacy they need.

Their two kids, oblivious to the covert intimacy unfolding beside them, were absorbed in their task. With meticulous focus, they built a sandcastle, their tiny hands sculpting moats and turrets with the precision of miniature architects. The older one, a girl of about seven, directed operations with an air of authority, while her four-year-old brother added the finishing touches with a plastic shovel.

As the children's giggles filled the air, Tom's touch grew bolder, hidden by a small towel, his fingers exploring Sandra's folds with an ease that came from years of shared passion. The warmth of his hand against her skin sent shivers down her spine, and she bit her lip to stifle a moan that threatened to escape. She could feel her arousal building, a sweet crescendo that matched the rhythm of the waves crashing against the shore.

Her eyes flicked to the side, watching her children play, ensuring they were still engrossed in their sandy world. The girl, with a head full of curly hair that matched her mother's, paused in her task to squint against the sun, her expression a perfect replica of Sandra's concentration. The boy looked up briefly, his cheeks red from the heat, and called out something unintelligible before diving back into his work. Satisfied, Sandra turned her attention back to Tom's ministrations, her breath hitching as his thumb found her clit and began to circle with maddening slowness.

A burst of laughter from a group of nearby teenagers shattered the momentary serenity. Tom's hand froze, and his eyes darted to the side, a flash of panic crossing his features. Sandra chuckled softly, the sound a blend of amusement and desire. "It's fine," she murmured, her voice thick with passion. "They're too busy with their own games to notice us."

With a deep breath, Tom composed himself and pulled his hand away, wiping it on the small beach towel. He glanced at the kids again, who remained oblivious to their parents' clandestine activities. The girl's tongue stuck out in concentration as she placed a tiny seashell on the highest turret, while the boy slapped wet sand onto the base with the enthusiasm of a miniature engineer.

"Maybe you should take them for ice cream," Sandra suggested, her voice a mix of mischief and practicality. The idea served two purposes: it would give their children a much-desired treat, and it would offer a convenient break to let the tension between her and Tom simmer without boiling over in front of innocent eyes.

Tom's eyes lit up with understanding. "Great idea," he agreed, his voice low and gruff with restrained desire. He leaned down to give her a quick peck on the cheek, his hand lingering on her shoulder. Sandra felt a jolt of electricity run through her, and she had to fight the urge to pull him back onto her.

With a sigh, she rolled onto her stomach, feeling the heat of the sun soak into her back. The coolness of the breeze against her exposed skin made her shiver, and she felt Tom's gentle touch as he untied the strings of her bikini top. The fabric slipped away, the sensation was intoxicating, and she let out a small gasp of pleasure that she hoped was lost in the symphony of beach sounds.

Tom looked at the kids, standing up with an ease that belied his eagerness to return to his wife. "Alright, you two," he announced. "Ice cream time!" The children's heads shot up, their eyes lighting up with excitement. They didn't need to be asked twice. They jumped to their feet, brushing sand off their little bodies and allowing Tom to lead them away from the temptation of their half-finished sandcastle.

Sandra took a deep breath and closed her eyes, savouring the peace and quiet. The sun on her back was a warm embrace, and she let the tension melt away from her muscles. It was a perfect moment, the kind of stolen serenity that made her feel alive. But it was shattered abruptly as she felt a firm push, the towel beneath her pushed deep the sand. Her eyes snapped open, only to be greeted by the shadowy figure of a stranger, his hand clamped over her mouth. Panic surged through her, and she struggled, her heart hammering in her chest like a wild animal trying to break free.

Her attacker's other hand was busy at her waist, jerking her bikini bottoms aside. The soft fabric scraped against her sensitive skin, sending a bolt of fear through her body. She bucked and twisted, desperately trying to throw him off, but his weight was too much. His cock pressed against her back, hot and demanding, and she realised with a cold horror that she was still wet. The sound of people and children playing nearby grew distant, swallowed by the thunder of her own fear.

The man's breath was hot and sour on her neck as he whispered something, but she couldn't make out the words over the roar in her ears. He pushed inside her in one swift, brutal motion. Sandra's eyes rolled back, and she let out a muffled scream, her body tightening around the intrusion. The sand bit into her skin as she was forced down, the coldness of it a stark contrast to the heat of his body. The shock was so intense that for a moment, she thought she might pass out, but the pain kept her conscious, a stark reminder of her reality.

He was rough, his movements erratic and desperate. Sandra's mind raced, trying to find a way to escape, to call out, but his hand was like a vice. She felt the tears squeeze from her eyes, and she could taste the salt of the sea on her lips. The scent of his sweat and the faint odour of sunscreen mixed with the briny air, making her stomach churn.

The man was relentless. His free hand played with her, squeezing het breast, teasing her clit in a parody of the gentle caress she'd just experienced with Tom. Each touch was a violation, a mockery of the pleasure she'd been on the brink of moments ago.

Against her will, she felt her body start to respond. The fear was still there, a cold, heavy weight in her stomach, but it was being overwhelmed by something else. Something primal. The heat of the stranger's body, the pressure of his cock inside her, the way he filled her completely, it was all too much to ignore. The fire Tom had kindled was being fanned into a full blaze by the intrusion of this unknown man.

He noticed the change in her immediately. His thrusts grew more deliberate as he felt her pussy twitch against him. His breathing hitched, and he murmured something into her ear, a question or a taunt, she wasn't sure. He slowed down, savouring the way she tightened around him. Sandra's mind reeled. This wasn't how it was supposed to happen. She was supposed to be fighting, to be terrified, not...this.

Her orgasm hit her like a sledgehammer, stealing her breath and making her body arch. She couldn't stop it, couldn't fight it. It was like a storm that had been building within her, and now it had crashed over her in an explosion of lightning and thunder. Her eyes squeezed shut, and she bit down hard on the hand that covered her mouth, muffling the cry of pleasure and pain that wanted to escape.

The man groaned in satisfaction, his grip on her tightening as he drove himself deeper. The waves of pleasure were almost too much, and she felt the beginnings of another climax building. It was wrong, it was all wrong, but her body didn't care. It responded to him, to the violence and the passion in his movements, and she could feel herself slipping away, lost in a sea of sensation.

He leaned over her, his chest pressing against her back, his breath hot and ragged in her ear. His hand left her mouth to clamp around her neck, not too hard, but enough to remind her that she was his to do with as he pleased. The pressure grew as he began to fuck her in earnest, the slap of their bodies echoing in the quiet space around them.

The air was forced from her lungs with every thrust, leaving her gasping and choking. She could feel his cock sliding in and out of her, the sand acting as an abrasive lubricant that only heightened the intensity of the sensation. Each movement brought her closer to the edge of another orgasm, one she didn't want but couldn't stop.

Suddenly, he stiffened, his grip on her neck tightening almost painfully. He groaned, and she felt his hot seed spurt inside her, filling her with a sense of revulsion and, inexplicably, satisfaction. Her own orgasm crested, a silent scream of pleasure muffled by the hand that again clamped over her mouth. She bucked against him, her body a traitor to her mind's screaming protests.

As the tremors subsided, with the man's cock still buried deep in her body, his hand remained over her mouth. His breath was hot against her ear, a harsh rasp that sent shivers down her spine. "Thank you," he whispered, his voice a gruff taunt, "for letting me finish what your husband started." The words were like a slap, bringing the horror of her situation into stark relief.

With a swift, cruel motion, he reached around and yanked the bikini top from under he. Sandra's eyes went wide with realisation and fear. He stuffed the flimsy fabric into her mouth, effectively silencing her. The material was cold and salty, tasting of the sea and the sweat of their earlier passionate encounter. Her jaw clenched around it, her teeth digging into the softness as she struggled to form words, to scream for help. But all that came out was a muffled cry, lost in the cacophony of the beach.

The man had come prepared. He pulled out a small roll of duct tape from his pocket, the silver glinting in the sun. With a practiced efficiency that spoke of experience, he tore off a strip and slapped it over her mouth, sealing the fabric in place. The sticky tape clung to her skin, and she felt a brief panic as she struggled to breathe through her nose, the material pressing against her tongue.

Sandra's mind raced as he held her down, his weight heavy on her back, his cock still buried deep inside her. How could he be so calm? So methodical? He was like a predator, finishing his meal before moving on to the next kill. The realisation was a cold, hard punch to her gut, stealing the last of her breath away.

With surprising speed, he reached for her wrists, his grip unyielding as he held them firmly against the sand. She felt the cold, sticky embrace of the duct tape as he wrapped it around her wrists, securing them together with a final, cruel rip. The sound echoed in her ears, and she realised with a sinking feeling that she was truly at his mercy.

With his both hands free now, he grabbed both of her breasts, the sudden pain of his pinching her nipples sending a jolt of fear through her. Her eyes watered, his grip was unyielding, his fingers digging into her flesh.

"I still have some seed left," he whispered into her ear, his breath hot and moist. "Let's see if we can't plant it deep inside you, hmm?" His voice was a sickening blend of excitement and entitlement.

Sandra's instinct was to fight, to do anything she could to push this monster away from her, but his weight was like a boulder, crushing her into the sand. Her bound hands trying to claw at his chest, but they were too small, too weak. His laugh was low and malicious as he leaned even heavier, forcing her to take his cock as it grew even harder.

The moment she felt him pull out of her pussy, she braced herself, but it was too late. His cock found her tight ass, and with no warning, he thrust inside her, ripping through her resistance. The pain was blinding, stealing her breath away in a sharp, piercing scream that was muffled by the fabric and tape. Her eyes squeezed shut, and she could feel the tears burning tracks down her cheeks.

Tom, where are you? The thought pounded in her mind, a desperate mantra. Her body felt like it was being split in two by the invader's brutal force. The children, oh God, the children. Panic flooded her chest, a cold, heavy weight that threatened to crush her. She couldn't let them see this, couldn't let them know their mother was being taken by this monster.

The man's thrusts grew more powerful, his grunts a rhythmic counterpoint to the sound of the waves. He was plowing into her ass with the relentless force of a jackhammer, each thrust a searing bolt of pain that made her vision swim. Sandra's mind was a maelstrom of fear and anger.

But amidst the chaos, there was something else. A memory, a ghostly echo of Tom's gentle touch, his tender kisses, and the sweet agony of his cock sliding into her ass. They'd done it countless times before, in the quiet of their bedroom, the darkness their only witness. He'd always been so careful, so attentive to her needs. He'd whisper sweet nothings into her ear as he penetrated her, his hands soothing her, his body worshiping hers. The contrast was stark, like a beautiful painting defaced by a vandal.

And as the stranger's cock invaded her, she found herself comparing. The pain was the same, but the pleasure... it was different. Deeper, more primal. It was as if her body was betraying her, responding to the brutal intrusion in a way she'd only ever experienced with Tom. Each time the man's hips met her ass, she could feel her orgasm building, a crescendo of pleasure and pain that seemed to feed on her fear. Her body tightened around him, her muscles clenching and releasing, trying to expel him even as they pulled him deeper.

He noticed her response and chuckled, his teeth digging into her shoulder as he whispered, "That's it, baby. Take it all." His voice was a dark symphony of desire and control, and Sandra hated herself for the way it made her wet. She could feel her orgasm approaching, a tsunami on the horizon, and she knew she had no power to stop it.

With every thrust, she felt her body respond, her muscles tightening and releasing around him in a dance of agony and ecstasy. It was as if she'd been split in two, one half repulsed and terrified, the other half craving more of this forbidden pleasure. The pain in her ass was a living, breathing thing, but it was the pain she knew, the pain she'd willingly given herself to Tom. The pleasure that came with it was a treacherous friend, whispering in her ear, telling her she liked it, she needed it.

Sandra's orgasm hit her like a tidal wave, stealing her breath and making her body arch against the sand. She could feel her pussy spasming around nothing, desperate for the fullness she'd had just moments ago. Her moan was muffled by the bikini fabric and tape, but the man took it as a sign of encouragement, his grip on her breasts tightening, his thrusts becoming more erratic. She could feel the tension in his body, his need to come, to claim her fully, and the thought sent a fresh wave of arousal through her.

The pain in her ass was exquisite, a symphony of agony and ecstasy that seemed to resonate with every nerve in her body. She'd never felt so alive, so alive and so terrified. Each time he plunged into her, she felt a jolt of pleasure that was almost too much to bear, her muscles tightening around him, her body begging for more even as her mind screamed no. Her clit throbbed, a beacon of pleasure that seemed to be in sync with the rhythm of the ocean.

The orgasms came one after another, each one more powerful than the last. Her body was a traitor, responding to the rough, unyielding force of the stranger's cock in ways she never thought possible. The sand bit into her skin, the fabric in her mouth was wet with her saliva, and her eyes stung with tears, but she couldn't help but love the feeling of being completely and utterly taken. It was as if all the pent-up desire and passion of a thousand lifetimes had been released in that one moment, and she was powerless to resist it.

The man's grunts grew louder in her ear, his thrusts more erratic as he approached his own climax. Sandra could feel her own pleasure building, a crescendo that seemed to be reaching for the heavens. Her breath was coming in short, ragged gasps, and her body was trembling with the effort of holding back the screams that wanted to tear free. She knew she should be disgusted, should be fighting him with every fibre of her being, but the raw, primal need was too strong.

Her eyes squeezed shut as she felt the beginnings of another orgasm, her body a live wire of sensation. Each stroke of his cock in her ass was a bolt of lightning, sending shockwaves through her core. She could feel the muscles in her stomach tightening, her toes curling in the sand. The pleasure was so intense, so all-consuming, that she could hardly believe it was happening to her. It was as if she'd been struck by a divine hand, her body responding with an intensity she'd never known before.

The stranger's grip on her tightened as he sensed her climax approaching. He whispered dirty words into her ear, his voice a seductive purr that made her skin crawl with desire. She hated the way he talked to her, the way he treated her like a whore, but the sound of his voice was like a drug, sending her spiralling into a vortex of pleasure that she never wanted to escape from. Her bound hands clawed at his chest, as she pushed back against him, silently begging for more.

The pressure inside her grew, the cock in her ass stretching her to the limits of what she thought she could endure. But instead of pain, she felt something else, something that was more than just physical. It was a deep, visceral need that seemed to come from the very core of her being. Each time he slammed into her, she felt her body respond with an intensity that was almost scary. Her orgasm built, a crescendo of pleasure that washed over her like a warm wave, and she knew that she was going to come harder than she ever had before.

The stranger's grunts grew louder, his breath hot and heavy in her ear. His hand released her neck, and she gulped in a much-needed lungful of air, her breath coming in short, desperate gasps. He leaned down and whispered, "You're going to come for me again, aren't you?" His words were a dark promise, a challenge she couldn't resist.

Sandra felt her body respond, her ass clenching around his cock in a way that she never had with Tom. The pain had morphed into something else, something dark and delicious that she craved like a drug. Her orgasms grew closer, each one threatening to shatter her into a million pieces. She didn't know if she could take much more, but she didn't want him to stop. She needed this, needed to feel this alive, this free.

The stranger's strokes grew more erratic, his breath hitching in her ear. She knew he was close, and she revelled in the power she had over him, even in this moment of complete and utter violation. Her body was a weapon, a tool for her own pleasure, and she wielded it with the skill of a master. She pushed back against him, taking him deeper, feeling every inch of his cock as he claimed her, as he made her his.

Her orgasms crashed over her, one after the other, like waves on the shore. They were monstrous things, stealing her breath and her sanity, leaving her trembling and helpless in their wake. Each time she came, she felt a part of herself shatter, only to be reborn in a fiery explosion of pleasure. The pain was there, a constant, throbbing presence, but it was nothing compared to the ecstasy that flooded her veins.

With every thrust, she felt her body give in a little more, her muscles relaxing around his cock. The sand beneath her was a rough caress, a reminder of the harsh reality of what was happening. But the pleasure was too intense, too all-consuming to ignore. Her thoughts were a jumble of fear and lust, each one fighting for dominance in her mind. She hated him, but she loved what he was doing to her. It was a contradiction she couldn't reconcile, but she didn't have to. All that mattered was the feeling of his cock inside her, the way her body responded to his brutal touch.

The orgasms grew stronger, each one more intense than the last. Her moans were muffled by the fabric in her mouth, but she could feel them resonate in her chest, a deep, animalistic sound that was more than just pleasure. It was a declaration of surrender, an acknowledgment that she was his to use and abuse. The thought of Tom and the children watching her in this state of debasement should have brought her back to reality, but instead, it only fuelled the fire burning in her core.

With each powerful thrust, the stranger brought her closer to the edge of oblivion. The pain in her ass had transformed into a white-hot pleasure that seared through her body, setting every nerve alight. She could feel herself losing control, her mind a haze of sensation. Her eyes rolled back in her head, and she arched her back, pushing her breasts into the sand. The pressure grew, a tight, coiling knot deep inside her that threatened to unravel at any moment.

And then it happened. Another orgasm hit her like a freight train, stealing her breath and making the world go dark around the edges. The pleasure was so intense, so overwhelming, that she could hardly believe it was possible. Her body bucked and convulsed, her muscles contracting around his cock in a vice-like grip. She could feel the man's excitement grow, his breath coming in short, sharp gasps as he pounded into her with renewed vigour.

The sound of the ocean was a distant hum, the cries of seagulls and the laughter of children playing, a haunting reminder of the world outside this bubble of pain and pleasure. But she couldn't focus on that. All she could think about was the cock inside her, the way it filled her, the way it made her feel. It was as if her body had been designed for this, for the brutal claiming of a stranger on a beach, surrounded by the scents of the sea and the warmth of the sun.

And then she felt him tense up, his body going rigid with the force of his climax. He groaned, a low, guttural sound that seemed to come from the depths of his soul, and she felt his cock pulse inside her. His cum shot into her, filling her up in a way that was both terrifying and exhilarating. She'd never felt so full, so used, and she hated it. But she also loved it, the dark thrill of it all. The feeling of being claimed, of being taken, it was something she hadn't realised she'd been craving.

As he pulled out, she felt a strange sense of loss, the emptiness inside her like a cold void. The duct tape was sticky on her skin, the fabric in her mouth wet and salty with her saliva. She lay there, bound and helpless, her body still trembling with the aftershocks of her orgasms. The man leaned down and kissed her neck, his breath hot and moist, and she could feel his smile against her skin.

"Thank you," he murmured, his voice a dark caress. "That felt great." His words were a knife twisting in her gut, a reminder that she'd enjoyed what he'd done to her. She didn't know how she could feel anything but horror and disgust, but the truth was undeniable. Her body had responded to him, had craved the very thing that was tearing her soul apart.

"I know where you live now," he said, his tone casual, as if he were discussing the weather. Sandra's eyes went wide with terror as he held up her wallet in front of her, her driver's license dangling from his fingers. "Maybe I'll visit you again," he continued, his voice low and threatening. "Would you like that?"

Her heart raced, the panic setting in. He knew her name, her address. She was no longer a faceless victim on a beach. She was a conquest he could claim again. The realisation was a cold, hard slap in the face.

With a final, brutal slap on her ass, he stood, tucking his cock back into his shorts and adjusting himself with a smug smile. She tried to get a good look at his face, but his back was already turned, the sun glinting off the sweat on his broad shoulders.

Sandra lay there, her body still quivering from the assault, and watched as he casually strolled away, leaving her behind the large screen. His movements were unhurried, as if he hadn't just raped a woman in broad daylight in a very public place. The sight of him, walking away as if he hadn't just destroyed her, filled her with a rage so intense it was like a living creature writhing inside her.

But before the anger could consume her, she felt the cold reality of her situation. The tape around her ankles. He hadn't just bound her wrists; he'd also taped her ankles together when he had finished with her, leaving her completely immobilised. The realisation brought a fresh wave of fear crashing over her, the taste of bile rising in her throat.

As the minutes ticked by, she could feel the sand sticking to her wet skin, the sun beating down on her, cooking her from the outside while the horror of what had happened seared her from within. She lay there, listening to the muffled sounds of the beach, the occasional giggle of children playing just nearby.

Then, she heard footsteps, and her heart leapt into her throat. She recognised them instantly, the familiar shuffle of her husband's flip-flops in the sand. Tom's voice called out, "Honey, I left the kids with ... " His cheerful tone was a stark contrast to the fear that had taken hold of her. She struggled against her bonds, desperately trying to get free. But she was too late.

Tom appeared in her line of sight, his eyes wide with shock as they fell upon her. The colour drained from his face, and he dropped the ice cream cone he brought her, the sound of it smacking on the sand a sad, pathetic echo of the moment. "S-Sandra?" He stuttered, his hand shaking as he reached out to help her. She could see the fear in his eyes, the disbelief. "What happened?"
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