That 70's Show: The Concert - Gang Rape Galore Contest

[LtBroccoli]

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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.
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Title: That 70's Show: The Concert - Gang Rape Galore Contest
Author: Lt. Broccoli
Chapter Tags: MF, MFF, MMF, oral, anal, FF, water, ncon
Content Warnings: Inappropriate use of copyrighted characters

This story participates in the Gang Rape Galore Story Contest.
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The girls go to a concert but the real craziness starts backstage...
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That 70's Show: The Concert - Gang Rape Galore Contest

All characters in this story are at least 18 years of age. Jackie and Donna are 18 while Laurie is 22.

That 70’s Show: Milwaukee, 1978




The girls couldn’t believe their luck. Donna had won 2 front row tickets to the Meat Loaf show in Milwaukee on Saturday night. She wanted to go with her boyfriend Eric but he was going out with Kelso, Hyde, and Fez to a wrestling show instead. Jackie was on board with going to the show as it would give her a chance to wear one of her new dresses. Eric’s sister Laurie invited herself for a free trip to Milwaukee so she could party down. As they arrived, Laurie scammed her way into the concert and up to the front row with them.

The show was packed. Donna was screaming her head off and signing along while Jackie swayed and danced along. Laurie scored some weed and a few beers, though she made some random guy buy her and the girls another round.

It was the last official song of the night as Meat Loaf belted out the last verse of “Two Out of Three Ain’t Bad”. Jackie and Donna were arm in arm singing their hearts out when Laurie was given something by one of the roadies. It was a set of backstage passes for her, Donna, and Jackie. Laurie thought for a second about trying to sell off the passes, but Jackie caught them out of the corner of her eye. The naive 18 year old freaked out upon seeing them, and passed the third one over to Donna. The three young women celebrated their apparent good fortune.

The trio made their way backstage past security, and it only took a moment before the three girls were waved on further past the press and road crew to a series of halls that led to locker rooms. On a normal night, this room belonged to the Milwaukee Admirals hockey team. Tonight, Meat Loaf and his band used this to hang out and party.

The girls weren’t prepared for what they saw. The locker room that normally fits 30 men instead had a small buffet set up in the corner with a full dining set for the 6 band members and 6 chaise lounges spread around the edge of the room. The center had a large bed in the middle in purple and red coverings. Another dozen women mingled with band members in various states of undress. Booze and drugs floated around like the air, seemingly emanating from another table in the opposite corner from the buffet, this time filled with everything from weed to coke to qualudes to pills of all colors.

Donna and Jackie looked at each other in stunned amazement. Before they could say anything, Laurie split from them and approached the drug table. She wedged her way into the crowd and snorted a line of coke while getting her ass slapped by the keyboardist.

From the back of the room, a naked man with long, flowing hair exited the shower. Jackie was the first to notice that this was the lead guitarist. Donna only noticed how naked he was and how three of the women followed him to the bed in the middle of the room. They stripped and climbed on top of the musician.

Donna looked to Jackie, then back to the action on the bed as the realization hit her like a Buick.

“Oh my God, we’re Groupies.”

Jackie was shocked, but couldn’t tear her eyes off what she saw. Two of the women were now sucking the lead guitarist's cock while he played with the tits of the third woman. A fourth and fifth woman joined them on the bed, kissing each other while stroking the guitarist.

“We’re groupies. Donna, what do we do?” Jackie asked her tall ginger friend before someone walked up behind the two young women, putting their arms around the two.

“What do you do? You join me on that couch over there and do what comes naturally.” The girls looked at the man between them. He was a tall man at 6 feet, even taller than Donna. He wore a ruffled tuxedo shirt paired with black pants held up with suspenders. He was drenched in sweat, his long hair hanging down to the middle of his back. He was a hefty man, easily making the two girls look tiny in comparison.

Donna looked at the man not believing who was holding her.

“You’re, you’re…”

“Yeah, I am.” Meat Loaf cut off Donna and passionately kissed her before she could respond. Jackie looked on. She couldn’t believe what happened, until Meat broke the kiss and planted one on her.

Meat led the two women over to a couch along the back wall, the petite brunette on his left and the tall redhead on his left. He took his turns kissing the two women as they alternated between unbuttoning his shirt.

Donna felt her t-shirt go over her head, and took off her bra along with it. She felt something come over her, a feeling of exhilaration as she stripped on the couch with this singularly charismatic man.

Jackie broke the last kiss just long enough to slip her dress off over her head, showing that she wasn’t wearing a bra. Her panties joined her designer shoes on the floor.

Meat slid his pants and underwear off in one move, sporting a hog and a half. Jackie and Donna couldn’t believe their eyes at first. The two girls looked at each other and smiled. Without saying a word, Jackie climbed on top of Meat Loaf, grabbing his cock and stroking it to it’s fullest length.

As Jackie mounted Meat’s cock, Donna looked around the room. Scenes of debauchery broke loose as she saw a dozen or so women jealously staring her and Jackie down. Here they were, two nobodies in this room and as soon as they walk back here, they’re taken back to Meat Loaf’s couch to fuck him.

Donna stood and peeled off her jeans as Jackie bounced up and down on the star. She sat back down and caressed Jackie’s back as her best friend ground her pussy on his cock. Jackie moaned as she felt fuller than she’d ever felt in her life, bouncing and grinding until she came. Donna moved her fingers down to her twat to play with herself to get ready for Meat’s meat.

Jackie climbed off, catching her breath for a moment as Donna took over. She’d never done anything like this before, but was so caught up in the moment she couldn’t help herself. A moment later, she had the singer’s massive cock buried up inside of her. Donna had to catch her breath before she got into a good rhythm, feeling the singer’s massive schlong fill her in ways no man has ever done. He hit her in places she could only dream of, and the raw sexuality of the moment urged her on. Within a couple minutes, she shook on top of the singer from a powerful orgasm.

While Donna kept fucking Meat Loaf, a few more women came over. They stripped down and joined the pair on the couch. Jackie, seeing that these women meant to scare her and her friend off, got back into the action by cupping Meat’s balls and playing with Donna’s ass as she rode the man to her second orgasm. Meat’s breathing got ragged as he neared his climax.

“Stand up.” Meat Loaf said to Donna, who climbed off of him. He stood up. She was a little unsure what was happening until Jackie pulled her down to a kneeling position next to her.

“Oh shit, oh shit, ooohhhhh!” Meat Loaf stroked his cock over and over until he erupted all over Jackie’s face, then turned to Donna, painting her with the next couple spurts. Jet after jet of cum painted the two high school seniors. Meat collapsed back onto the couch. “Someone wanna clean that up?” Before the girls knew it, two other women were on them, kissing and licking their faces while another two were working on cleaning up Meat’s cock.

As Jackie worked to clean the cum out of her eyes, someone handed her a drink. It tasted fruity and strong. Donna was given a similar one, along with a couple pills from the party table. The two women finished what they had and surveyed the room. The keyboardist, bassist, and the lead guitarist were in the middle of an orgy with half a dozen women. A few more men joined the fray, looking like friends of the band or even the opening act.

A warm wave of euphoria washed over Donna as she finished her drink. She felt a little wobbly and had to catch herself. Once she shook her head, she turned to see Jackie in a full-on tongue kiss with another woman! It took a moment for Donna to realize that this woman looked familiar. She was the backup singer and the woman from Paradise by the Dashboard Lights. And now, she grabbed Jackie by the hair and led her to one of the couches. Donna went to follow Jackie, but someone else grabbed her by her long red hair and tossed her down on one of the other couches. She didn’t recognize this man. He was good looking, looked like a rock star, but couldn’t place him. Before she could give any objections, he was already on top of and in her, fucking her with a long and skinny cock.

The backup singer kissed her way down Jackie’s body, all the way to her pussy and ate out the petite woman. Jackie came loudly before the other woman fisted her. As Jackie tried to gather her senses, the woman climbed on top of Jackie, forcing her into a 69 on the couch until another man joined them and fucked Jackie while she tried to eat out the singer.

Back on the couch, Donna heard a commotion by the drug table. A small fight broke out and Laurie was at the center of it. It ended with a couple of the girls fighting with Laurie, and she was eventually dragged back to the shower. Donna tried to look over, but had a hard time making out what happened between the mass of men and women walking around naked.

Jackie never saw the face of the man who came in her the first time that night, and missed the second one as well. By the time the singer climbed off of her face, she was sticky with sweat on the couch and the third man in a row was in her, fucking her without a care in the world. By the time this guy finished, she finally had a reprieve and made her way over to Donna, who was now in a curious position of her own.

Donna’s sexual experience before tonight was pretty straightforward. She’d blown her boyfriend a couple times and some regular missionary sex, nothing too crazy. But here she was, finding herself on all fours with a cock in her mouth and another in her pussy while the man behind her fucked her asshole with his thumb. She went as far as she could before the men were finished with her, blowing their loads in and on her.

As Donna and Jackie caught a break and grabbed another drink, they heard noises come from the shower. They tried to ignore it, but one of the voices sounded familiar.

They saw Laurie, stripped naked and held down on the floor by four people as peson after person used her like a cheap whore. Currently, she was on her back as one of the roadies fucked her and slapped her large tits around. He didn’t last long and was replaced by another tech who told the people holding her down to hold her legs up so he could look her in the face as he fucked her ass. Laurie screamed and tried to kick, but the techie soon had his cock up her ass. This went on for a few minutes until he came deep in her ass. As this went on, every so often someone would come in and piss on Laurie. Man, woman, fat, skinny, didn’t matter. In just the few minutes that Donna stood there watching, she counted 7 people pee all over Laurie.

Jackie pulled Donna over to the side.

“What do we do?” Jackie asked.

“I don’t know. Should we help her?” Donna asked.

Jackie shook her head emphatically. “Absolutely not. Laurie screwed up and got herself in trouble. If we help, we’re next in her spot.”

Donna looked around the room. The party was still going on, and it looked like some space was opening up on the bed with the drummer.

“Well, we could either risk getting our asses kicked by trying to help Laurie, or we can go fuck the drummer, see how things go after that.”

“Let’s fuck the drummer.” The girls said in unison.

They did, in fact, fuck the drummer. And the keyboardist and bassist and the lead guitarist before the night was over. They were spent and sore by the time the night wrapped up. They made their way to a cheap motel around 5AM and slept for a few hours before driving home.

As for Laurie, after being gang raped by the tech crew and roadies all night, she was dumped outside the arena. She made her way home by hitchhiking, though that wasn’t without it’s trials.

Donna and Jackie had the night of their lives. Laurie didn’t. Donna still remembers how great Meat Loaf’s cock felt in her, and Jackie never forgot the first time she did anything like that with a woman. Laurie is still a super bitch, even more so after getting back from Milwaukee after having to blow some trucker.

But as their favorite song says, “2 out of 3 ain’t bad.”
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In real life, Meat Loaf didn't play in Wisconsin during the Bat Out of Hell tour. The closest they came was Cedar Rapids and the Minnesota State Fair. But that would line up with the sequel and that shit was cancelled after two seasons so I'm not going there with that.

[RapeU]

1) What did I immediately feel after reading this
2) What I love about what I read
3) What would I change in the story to make it perfect (for me)
4) Did I get off on this and why

1) I know absolutely nothing about That 70's show - haven't seen a single episode, so I really don't understand the character dynamics here beyond the snapshot from this story. Essentially with that lack of knowledge I'm left scratching my head knowing I'm missing context here.

2) I assume Jackie and Donna don't like Laurie. Help someone you know or fuck a drummer? "Let's fuck the drummer." Yeah that was a funny line, I laughed.

3) I think, for the purposes of this contest, doing the story from Laurie's point of view, either as a detached narrator or as second person, would have worked better. The part detailing her gangrape felt too quick.

4) No, but I undoubtably would have if there were more of a focus on Laurie's gangrape.

[Claire]

I really liked the idea to set this at a concert. I think I would have made it clearer though that this actually takes place in the 70's. That you would interpret the theme as two of the girls having the time of their life and the third one experiencing a nightmare I did not expect. I think as far as implementing the theme goes, you currently have an edge over many of the other stories.

The story reads like you were in a bit off a rush though, quite a few typos. Then, as I said in the contest thread already, you didn't adjust the explainer text for the teaser. And third, I would like to ask you to either remove the throwaway reference to these girls being high school students or to add somewhere explicitly in the text that they are all 18. Unless I missed something, only one of the girls is explicitly mentioned to be 18.

[Shocker]

I never watched that seventies show either, but I think you captured the dynamics of unabashed sex with groupies rather well. Not sure Meat would have been up to this at the time as he hade to use an oxygen tent to even get through his performances.
Still I enjoyed the story, you made a nice distinction between the two who complied willingly and the one who got taken.

[LtBroccoli]

@RapeU , thanks for the feedback. Quick primer for the show, Jackie and Donna are best friends. Donna's more tomboyish and taller while Jackie is preppy and petite. Donna's played by Laura Preppon while Jackie was Mila Kunis. They were part of a friend group that included Eric, Kelso, Hyde, and Fez. Donna dated Eric and would eventually marry him while Jackie dated all of them (not sure how much she did with Fez) over and over, later settling down with Kelso. Kelso was played by Ashton Kuchter, and this show was where he and Mila met. Years later the two would reconnect and marry in real life. Laurie was Eric's older sister and was a bitch to everyone. I never liked her character.

@Claire I'll put a little disclaimer at the top clarifying all characters are at least 18 in the story. Also will take a couple minutes to check for typos. That's the problem with undiagnosed dyslexia, no matter how many times I read something I wrote, the words look different each time.

@Shocker Thanks. I'm not sure if groupies are still a thing nowadays. I hope so, because what's sex, drugs, and music without the sex? Also, Laurie's fate fits her character from the show. She often took every shortcut she could, only thought of herself and went out of her way to put others down. Her getting punished for breaking some unwritten rules of backstage life makes sense.

[Shocker]

@LtBroccoli I‘m sure groupies are still a thing, they might be called something else. But obsessive fans that will do anything to get close to their idols is not something tied to just one period of time, neither is men being offered sex willingly accepting it.

And as you said it’s sex, drugs and rock’n’roll. The stones didn’t call the album 40 licks without reason. Even the gayest looking boy band got slips thrown onto the stage, most of those still body warm.

[Lucius]

@LtBroccoli I don't know the TV series either, but, fanfiction or not, it's a good old backstage orgy! Thanks!

[chloevee]

Great story!

Unlike most (all?) of the other commenters, I'm a fan of That 70s Show so I had the advantage of understanding all the background context. (I've gotta admit, I'm relieved Donna and Jackie didn't get raped.) You did a great job writing the story in the style of the show. This line in particular:

“Let’s fuck the drummer.” The girls said in unison.

I could totally picture that in the show.

I suspect it would have been helpful for people who don't know the show if you had added a few bitchy lines from Laurie to set the scene. I think you tried to show that a little bit with her inviting herself along and scamming her way into the show? But I suspect that, for example, it's hard to understand why Donna and Jackie would abandon Laurie if you don't understand the true depth of her hateful bitchieness. Or for that matter, how she could have incurred the wrath of so many people so quickly.

But to me? Makes perfect sense. And I gotta say I wasn't sad for Laurie.

Content Warnings: Inappropriate use of copyrighted characters

That cracked me up.

[chloevee]

Also will take a couple minutes to check for typos. That's the problem with undiagnosed dyslexia, no matter how many times I read something I wrote, the words look different each time.

One thing that I've found helps a lot is to play the story back with a text-to-voice program. It won't catch spelling errors and the like. But it's made it lot easier to catch things like words in the wrong tense, missing words and duplicate words. Those are the kind of mistakes that I find hardest to catch when I'm reading the text with my eyeballs because I know what it's supposed to say.

There are probably easier ways to do it, but I've been saving a draft on my computer then opening it on my phone and using the builtin accessability feature to read the preview to me.

That reminds me:

Meat led the two women over to a couch along the back wall, the petite brunette on his left and the tall redhead on his left

I've heard of two left feet, but two left arms is a new one.

[Nickamano]

This is a tricky one for me. I feel like you were going for show-accurate characterisation (I haven't watched it either) so the reactions were probably correct for the show, but I feel like the characters (being young and naïve) should have been more shocked and nervous about the orgy.
This is a me thing and I'm not going to criticise you over it, but I generally don't like real people used in stories, so having members of the band and even Meatloaf himself engaged in the orgy was a little off-putting. I was half expecting the girls to find themselves in a side room with a bunch of security guys or roadies, rather than the actual band.
Still, I do feel it captured the feel of those drug and sexual fuelled celebrity after show parties well. And you really caught the theme well too. Good stuff. Thanks for adding to the list of contestants.