Seraphina's Flowering

[Vela Nanashi]

Title: Seraphina's Flowering [F37,F1000,M19,M23,M37,M43,M45,M60] [Bondage] [Creampie] [Fantasy] [Magic] [Breeding]

By: Vela Nanashi

Also posted on: reddit

Teaser: I feel hands caressing my naked skin, and cupping my breasts, pinching, even a caress of my pubic hair and a pair of calloused fingers caress between my pussy lips I moan and I almost protest with one of the colours, at first I want to signal yellow, but then those fingers feel really good and I signal red, and I am stopped, and pushed into a squat, the two fingers wet from my pussy rub against my lips and I kiss the fingers and then open my mouth licking them and I feel the stringiness of my own wetness and he sticks his middle and ring finger into my mouth and I suck his fingers, and my lips feel like my pussy lips my tongue like inside my pussy and as he pushes his fingers deeper and presses them up against my uvula I squirm and drool, and it feels like my clitoris being caressed in how much pleasure I get, but I also almost throw up, but I don't, I drool a lot though as he intentionally massages my uvula and I keep licking and sucking his fingers and moan into them, I signal red again, fingers are not quite satisfying enough to me I want more.

Disclaimer:
The author of this story has read and accepted the rules for posting stories. They guarantee that the following story depicts none of the themes listed in the Forbidden Content section of the rules.

All characters in this story are over the age of 18, over the age of consent for their species and cultures, all parties are consensual, very willing to do what they do in this story.

Characters:

Seraphina (F37): is a winged elf, she has violet eyes, naturally ruby red hair and ruby red feathers, fair skin with some gorgeous rare barely visible golden scale patterns that highlight her curves, she also has a gorgeous pattern of freckles, they shine golden with some iridescence depending on the light, they age like humans do in their first 18 years of life, when it comes to physical characteristics, mentally they mature faster than humans, they do not become interested in sex or capable of it before they flower and that happens at age 37, when they are culturally expected to leave their tribe and go explore the world and figure out what they enjoy sexually, and ideally find a mate and a different tribe to belong to, from age 37 forward they are going to look like they are in their sexual and physical prime, most only start to look older in their eyes after a hundred years old, and then every thousand or so years their bodies might age like a human does in a year, but it depends more on their mental health and state than actual time. Until their flowering they spend their time learning how to be an adult, learning at least three occupations to a master or higher level, and how to hone their bodies for maximum health and fitness, and learn to tap into their innate magic, learn how to use various kinds of weapons, for hunting and war. A magical ritual was performed by the ancient elves that prevent them from taking any harm from sex, and rarely experience any pain, just intense pleasure from it.

Nerissa (F1000): a black haired, violet eyed, nymph (with a few other blood lines too), that stopped counting her years after she got to a thousand, she is the mistress of the fey tavern, exotic dance club, brothel, keep, market, dungeon, caverns, the local trading nexus of the elven lands.

Rorg (M19): is a red orc, his species ages twice as fast as humans and live half as long, he is a general who has won three wars against the blue orcs, and rescued many elves from them, his right eye is golden and his left is green. He has shaved his head, and has many battle scars that look badass and has decorated some of them with bone piercings and tattoos, and he has had a magic tattoo artist capture the exact looks of each elven woman he has made love to, in full colour along his inner thighs, and since he ran out of space after eight he has added some on the inside of his upper arms, and he has run out of space there too, he is saving a spot for someone special over his heart.

Narl (M23): is a green orc, his species ages twice as fast as humans and live half as long, he is a thief, a rogue, a spy, an assassin, who has provided useful information to the elves about any of their people captured by his tribe, and helped several escape. He has no scars, or tattoos, and has shoulder length green hair.

Corwyn (M37): is an elf, ages same way as winged elves, he is almost 38 years old, he has been travelling and earning his keep as a bard, and enjoyed quite a few ladies, for his looks, wit, singing voice and he has long black hair, sapphire blue eyes. He was saved by Narl after he managed to pleasure the whole village of female orcs while the males were out raiding, luckily Narl was the first male to return to the village and got him out, he repaid Narl with many heroic songs about him.

Mark (M43): is a Caucasian human, he has long black hair with a bit of grey starting to show already, a full beard and is a merchant, he has helped the elves buy back some of their people that ended up in indentured servitude or slavery in the human lands, and is considered a hero for helping with that, back home they think he is a slaver, since they have seen him travel toward the orc wilds with the slaves he buys, but since none of them are humans they don't care.

Torg (M45): Troll from underbridge, lives under a well made stone bridge that leads into the elven lands, has been rewarded several apple trees that were planted by the elves and some fey, for helping protect their lands from raiders, and saving several of them. His favourite food is apples.

Berga (M60): deep dwarf, has midnight black skin that looks like it is the mineral rich black stone deep under the mountains, with veins of minerals and some gems sparkling when he enjoys sunbathing, he has shoulder length metallic platinum hair, and mithril eyes, his nails look like adamantine. According to his people he has gone insane and caught the surface sickness, as only an insane dwarf would ever be out under the open sky. He made the stone bridge that Torg lives under, and has made all the roads in the elven lands perfectly smooth to walk on and for wagons and horses, all who travel his enchanted stone work roads travel five times as far in the same time. He also is an expert on alloys, tools and weapons, his arrowheads are very popular with archer elves.

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Seraphina:

I awaken with my pulse racing and glazed in sweat, and my pussy is wet, I reach down and as I touch my clitoris my whole body trembles and I cry out and a splash of wetness coats my fingers, I gently touch my pussy opening and moan as I feel the need to have my pussy filled, but not by fingers, I gently probe my hymen covered opening and although the sensation of stretching it open with my fingers is intense it is pleasurable. Mother told me about this, I have entered flowering, I knew that would happen soon, it is the full moon after my birthday today. I slip out of my bed and walk over to my bath, I grab the bottle of moon oil, as I want to arouse men, I fill the tub with hot water and pour the whole bottle of moon oil into it and slip into the now pink coloured water that has the most amazing scent, I slip my whole head and wings into the tub it is a bit confined, but I want all of me to smell good, and I start to masturbate, and I make myself have a full body spasm and I moan and cry out the air from my lungs and then surface just my nose to inhale two lungs full and repeat, I stay in my tub masturbating and squirting until my whole body is helplessly trembling and it takes all my remaining strength with wings and arms and legs to pull myself to just have my face above the water and I lay there until the hot water gets cold, all the pink colour has faded from the water, and I know my body has absorbed the magical moon oil. I pull myself out of the water and let it drain and I can tell my scent is very potent, anyone can tell I am fertile and in heat now. I caress my ring of holding and command it to fuse into a very subtle golden and iridescent tattoo on my finger that looks a bit like my scale markings.

I walk out on my balcony and sit in the sun, letting the sun dry my wings and hair, I really need to find some men, but none of the men in my village appeal to me, sure they are friends, but they are of my tribe, and that won't do, I feel the need to meet new men from other tribes, I remember reading about a special fey site a few miles south from the mountain I live in, supposedly it is a tavern, though a tavern is not quite enough of a description, it is a trading outpost, an exotic dance club, and the actual fey site is below the club part, where you can gain the favour of the fey, more magical power, and the only price you have to pay is to allow the men who match your sense of worthiness be allowed to enjoy your body, more power is given if you allow them to breed with you.

I consider getting dressed now that I am dry, but the thought of even silk touching my skin right now feels wrong, I blush a bit, but I know I can get dressed later I have all the things that are important to me in my ring of holding, including a rather nice sum of coin so I can buy a house and furniture and everything I might need for a decade or more, when I find my new village.

I leap out into the air from my balcony and catch the updraft with my wings and glide at a nice steep angle to get more speed and I feel the wind in my hair and around my wings and body, I get goose bumps as I catch a bit of cold wind from the snow capped mountain that sparkles in the sunlight, I slam the air a few times to gain even more speed and to change my angle and I fly over the southern peeks of the mountains and then dive toward the island where the three mountain rivers meet, forming a lake that then falls down a waterfall into another smaller pool before becoming one river. I see the tavern on the island, three stone bridges crossing the three rivers and a larger stone bridge crossing the larger river, with the only path to the elven lands and our mountains that sit in the middle of them. I fly straight for the balcony on the tavern's tower, as I want to take the steps down to below the tavern, that the tower provides.

As I land, I see a nymph with black hair and violet eyes, I think it must be Nerissa, she is naked in a small pool at the top of the tower, she smiles as she sees me "oh I think I know what you want, but I have to make sure I know your exact limits before I let you go down there, join me and touch this sphere" she says and a glowing sphere of light appears in her right hand and I walk over and join her in the pool, and touch the sphere and she deeply interrogates me in there about exactly what kinds of things I desire to happen with me, and down to things I really would prefer not to, but will accept as long as I am rewarded well for it, with pleasure and other things. The scariest thing but also the most exciting for me right now is being restrained, having my sight and hearing taken from me with lenses and ear plugs, and not see what men make love to me. We negotiate safe telepathic colours, red means more please, green means perfect, yellow means please mercy gentler, and blue means stop right now I need to talk. She also asks me what things I would desire to get as boons for accepting this, and if I will accept being altered so I can breed with all species, and that for this ritual for the fey if I will accept being impregnated by all the men who give me their seed, magically picking the strongest traits from each and my own to create magically enhanced offspring. I know that we winged elves look down on most other races, but right now, I really am drawn to this my only conditions are that the men must be worthy in my eyes to be at least lovers, that I would feel no shame knowing who they are or that they saw me naked and fucked me, that my children must be able to fly at least as good as I can and that I will find them at least as gorgeous as me or as handsome as my father, and I am assured the men will be worthy in my eyes and I would not feel any shame knowing they saw me naked for fucked me, that my children will be better at flying than me, and that I will find them as gorgeous as me or as handsome as my father. With that I agree to the fey pact. I am overwhelmed by what I managed to negotiate with her, not just for me, the children I will have, but also for my tribe and my future tribe, ten years of prosperity and fertility, a short golden age.

Nerissa leans in and kisses me on my lips and as she does I feel a tingle around my neck, below my shoulders around my arms, above my elbows, around my wrists, at the tops of my thighs, below my knees and around my ankles and then I feel collars and cuffs appear there, I look down and I see they are made out of sun gold, moon silver and star metal, with magic enhancing violet gems I feel my ring tingle too as it is altered to be part of the cuffs and collars, she speaks in my mind 'you will get to keep these too, but for now your ring is a slave ring, I have the mistress ring, when we are done I will transfer the mistress control to your ring so you can fully control these and all they can do.'

I feel the massive amount of magical power invested in these, and they are not just collars and cuffs, but they have a bunch of other things in them too, and I think she must be crazy to say I get to keep them, moon silver, sun gold and star metal are very rare, extremely powerful metals that even a small amount, plating on a crown, would be fit for a king, who would make a slave collar from this, or cuffs, that is insane. 'Why?' is all my mind manages and Nerissa says in my mind 'you are my best friend's daughter's great great great great great great granddaughter, unbroken female line, you look just like her, I want you to have these, after the ritual you are worthy to have them.'

Then my vision goes away and I feel the lenses in my eyes, I am briefly shown what my eyes look like from Nerissa's perspective, my beautiful eyes show no sign of the lenses, other than that it looks like my irises are illuminated by the sun, but to me it is complete darkness. Then my hearing is taken away and I feel panic rising as if I can't see or hear, it feels like I am in a confined space, but I feel the wing on my wings still and feel her lips on mine 'calm yourself Seraphina, I promise no harm will come to you, but you will have a wonderful time, at least a full day of worthy men making love to you.'

She helps me out of the pool and grabs my hands she pulls them behind my back until my elbow cuffs meet and I feel them click and become as if created from a single piece of metal, I know I can't separate them, only the mistress ring can decide who can do that, and my shoulders and wings are now in an uncomfortable position and I can not fly like this, she then moves my wrists to hug my own hips and I feel the cuffs click as they attach to my skin, just as well as they did to each other. I moan at how helpless I feel, Nerissa gently caresses my wings, soothing me and then caresses my ears first in a calming, soothing way and then massages me to a crazy orgasm that makes me fall to my knees, she keeps going until I squirt and fall on my side, but she catches me and then grabs a ring on the collar and pulls me up on my trembling legs and feet, I feel a chain slip down from the collar between my breasts and she grabs that and pulls me, and I step blindly after her, I almost fall down the first stair, but then I start to feel with my feet where the next step starts and after a little bit with her deciding my direction, I manage to gracefully walk down the stairs, they are made out of wonderful polished stone.

I feel we pass into a place lit by fire, and I manage to suppress my panic as I hear her voice in my head again, from before, I will not be hurt, so my wings will not be burned by fire, she promised, I trust her completely, the panic almost entirely goes away, changing more into excitement. I know father and mother would be pissed if they saw me being treated this way though, taken into a confined place that has fire in it, that is no way to treat a winged elf, it can drive us insane.

I then feel the smell of ale and food and I am led in a very not straight way, and I feel hands caressing my naked skin, and cupping my breasts, pinching, even a caress of my pubic hair and a pair of calloused fingers caress between my pussy lips I moan and I almost protest with one of the colours, at first I want to signal yellow, but then those fingers feel really good and I signal red, and I am stopped, and pushed into a squat, the two fingers wet from my pussy rub against my lips and I kiss the fingers and then open my mouth licking them and I feel the stringiness of my own wetness and he sticks his middle and ring finger into my mouth and I suck his fingers, and my lips feel like my pussy lips my tongue like inside my pussy and as he pushes his fingers deeper and presses them up against my uvula I squirm and drool, and it feels like my clitoris being caressed in how much pleasure I get, but I also almost throw up, but I don't, I drool a lot though as he intentionally massages my uvula and I keep licking and sucking his fingers and moan into them, I signal red again, fingers are not quite satisfying enough to me I want more.

I smell a scent that is really nice, a strong musk of a man, and then I feel him slap my face, with hard hot rod wrapped in velvety softness, and my body instinctually knows that is what I want, his cock. I feel him rub his cock over my face and I kiss and lick clumsily around it, then he grabs my hair and moves me to his balls and I start to lick and suck on them, and I feel a drop of hot wonderfully scented fluid drop onto my forehead and along my nose, dipping into my left nostril before dripping to my lips and adding even more of his scent and taste to my mouth, than just his balls had, and they are stupidly large and heavy balls, he pulls me up along his shaft again and I kiss and lick and slightly nibble on his cock as I need more, and then I feel the soft tip of his cock, his foreskin kiss my lips and he releases my hair and I lick his foreskin clean and then kiss it and lick the part that starts to clear my lips, more precum flows into my mouth and I moan as I suck his huge cock head, it barely fits in my mouth fully, I start to pull back to let my lips slide over his cock head and then slide back in until his cock head fills the back of my mouth crushing my uvula and I squirm and move several more times and then I feel his cock jump and erupt into my mouth, hot delicious potent love, I hold it in my mouth and tighten my lips behind his cock head and I feel the pressure build in my mouth, then my ears pop, my eyes get glazed with tears as they feel a wonderful burning sensation and then I feel his hot love erupt out of my nose and out my lips too as I can't contain all that cum and some shoot down my throat too. He pulls me off his cock with my hair and shoots cum into my eyes that I have kept open even though I can't see, and then cums all over my face rubbing it over my face and ears, and I moan as this is both extremely hot for me right now, and humiliating, I blush and I realize a lot of people are seeing me, as I must be in the tavern. I feel my skin flush all over, and I feel tingles from what I realize I have just allowed to be done with me, I have no clue how many strangers have seen me, and I am sure word will go all the way back to my tribe of winged elves in the mountain, of what I did. Yet a huge part of me loves this. I feel him grab my hair now and use it to clean his cock and as he finishes I get a crazy impulse and I exhale my air through the cum in my mouth making bubbles and then swallow, then I inhale a little bit of air from my mouth and then inhale hard from my nose and I feel the cum touch my lungs and I cough the cum into my mouth and play with it with my tongue against the roof of my mouth.

I feel the chain pull me up now and I am led around the room in the same crazy slow indirect path, more hands all over me, I feel really humiliated and as if I might be blushing as red as my hair now all over, but I also am so turned on. Every breath is dominated by his scent though, the man who came in my mouth and over my face, I can't believe how huge his cock was, I want to feel it in my pussy, he would completely fill me out and stretch me really wonderfully. I lose count how many people grope me, before I am led down more stairs, I smell some fungal spores and the smell of wood, rich soil, flowers, finally I feel cool mist of water hitting my skin and I feel like I must be in a larger area, though I have no actual proof other than some air moving, the cool misting of water and the water under my feet on the polished stone path makes me think I must be in the cavern under the tavern, the books I read says that the waterfall forms one small window out of that place, and there is a small mushroom and regular forest tended to by mushroom people, dryads and an ent, and the fairies and fey that call it home too, and there is supposedly a ritual circle there, meant for powerful fey magic.

Nerissa let's me see myself through her eyes, my face and hair utterly coated in cum, and then she shows me what I imagined was there, she shows me the gorgeous mixed fungal and regular plant forest with its creatures working, fairy stones decorate the place, glowing crystals and mushrooms provide illumination to the plants that need light, as does the light from the waterfall curtain that almost is falling as smooth as a pane of glass most of the time with some ripples that throw out mist every so often disrupting the beautiful view. I really wish I could see it with my much better eyes than Nerissa's though, I am shown a stone circle next to some tables and in one of the standing stones is a circle of the same metals and gems like my collar and cuffs, and in the middle of it is a shimmering almost invisible plane, and a more opaque plane below it. I feel my wrist and elbow cuffs click and I hear Nerissa's voice in my head "crawl onto it and slide your upper body through the upper part" I watch myself as the chain from my collar pull back inside it, leaving no trace of where it went, and I stretch my wings a bit before I use her eyes to get myself into a crawling position and fold my wings to just barely fit them through the ring and as my head passes the surface of the ring I see my head appear beween and below my legs and I reach my hands and wings through to grab my legs and push against the ring gate, I keep going until I feel a nice curve to the lower plane that supports my head and Nerissa grabs my hands, She shifts them behind my neck, and she says 'interlace your fingers' and I do so, then I feel the cuffs click angling my arms so that my elbows are above my head, if I was standing, my wings are free to move below me as the surface decides what parts it wants to support and not, she next moves my feet back until my ankle cuffs click onto my elbow cuffs, and then I feel gravity change and I collapse against myself, my pussy being right in my face.

I feel Nerissa use magic to pull all the cum from my hair and face and I moan in protest, until she shapes it into a cock shape and pushes it into my anus and I moan as I relax my anus and let the cum dildo slip inside me and I feel a wonderful heat that arouses me and makes me moan "I need men to fuck me, please." Nerissa laughs in my ears and makes my knee cuffs press against my sides and click in place, I can see how they force me to stay in this angle 'you may pleasure yourself using your tongue and lips and nose, until the men have time for you' she says and the vision she is sharing goes away, then I feel a sting in my wings and moan as I feel ring piercings being added then I feel chains spread my wings fully in what I know is a gorgeous position, but also vulnerable and also straining position to hold them in. She reaches her hands to grope my breasts and then I feel a sting in each of my nipples as two nipple rings are put into my nipples, I feel three links slip between my breasts and then snap together with a central link and as it presses against my belly I can tell it is heart shaped, my breasts are pulled closer to each other, I feel a ring be placed above my breasts and below my breasts, and she then places a third ring against my lips 'lick through this ring' she says and I do so and I lick between my breasts, from the top and down, she turns the ring to its other side and I lick through it, from below to the top. She then moves that ring to click it to my right thigh cuff. I am not entirely sure what she plans to use those rings for, but it excites me.

I do as she told me to do, and use the little bit of motion my arms can help with to help support my head as I suck my own pussy lips into my mouth, and start to lick between them, my nose touches my anus that has a floral scent, like all elves, it is not quite like any other flower, there is also the wonderful scent of the cum that has coated my anus and nostrils, I lick my own clit and moan as I start to self discover how to give another woman good oral sex, I slip my tongue all the way into my pussy, taking advantage of how long our tongues are, licking my own cervix with the traces of cum from the man that came into my mouth and it just makes me more desperate to be fucked properly. I keep giving myself different variations of oral sex, figuring out what I enjoy. 'Good do not stop for anything, keep going, or the men will not come fuck you.' Nerissa says and I obey her, besides it feels good and soon I start having orgasm after orgasm, the restraints are a bit challenging, but also wonderful, I lose track of how many times I make myself orgasm, but I do notice how glazed I get in sweat, but it only enhances my scent thanks to the moon oil, my wings are trembling and I know that I have exhausted them so much that I won't be able to fly until I get a whole day of sleep, that is scary too, but also for some reason I relish my complete helplessness, I know there are many men just some stairs up who would relish fucking me, and if I can't even fly if I was free I know they can have their way with me, but also that I am safe, Nerissa and I have a pact, she will only let men I would respect and like have their way with me.

The rest of me gets reduced to a trembling mess too, I don't think I could walk right now, maybe not even crawl, my heart is racing as I make myself cum again and again, and I think this level of exhaustion should make me pass out, but I can feel the collar keeping me awake, and I should be thirsty from sweating this much, but I feel like I have had just enough water to keep going, I squirt on myself as I find a special place in my pussy and I keep licking it hard, and figure out an angle for my tongue to also lick past my clit as I do that and I lose track of all time.

Then I feel two big hands caress my sweaty hair and ears, I recognize the way two of those fingers feel against my ear and I moan "please mmm master" seems appropriate with me wearing a slave collar "take my virginity and make me a woman, put your seed in my womb and breed me, please master" I moan desperately.

He slaps my butt hard and kneads my stinging butt cheeks and then grabs my hips, his huge cock slides between my butt cheeks and he slides it down my lover back painting me with his precum and his balls slap against my pussy. I feel a sting in my clitoris hood and a ring piercing appear there, it gives me a shock and then goes cold until I shiver and it feels like my clit is going to be frozen into an ice cube, then it blossoms with wonderful heat that soon gets too hot, then that heat fades as another shock hits my clit and makes me sing out as another orgasm hits and I squirt, then it starts to vibrate intensely. My nipple rings start doing the same to me. He slides down and muffles my cries with his heavy balls and I suck one into my mouth and try to pleasure it as best I can and then the other, he slams his cock head against the skin just above my pussy and bounces into my anus and then pushes hard despite my anus being willing to let him in, I cry out from another orgasm as his cock head that is the size of my fist or bigger finally gets its ridge into my ass and he keeps pushing and I squirm a bit as his cock feels like it should be way too big to fit in there, but I feel the magic of my ancestors, making my body stretch to accommodate him and I feel no pain just stupidly intense pleasure, his balls finally slap my pussy lips hard as I squirt on them again, and all over my face and I kiss and lick his balls and then since I feel so good in my ass I want him to feel good there too, so I lick up from his balls and to his ass and he does not taste or smell floral, but I don't stop licking him, I even slowly push my tongue into his anus, dreading that he will taste even worse in there, but then I am pleasantly surprised that he is clean in there, there is even a bit of moon oil in there, and I feel his cock jump as I touch him in his ass and I keep licking there, feeling his cock weep hot precum into my ass, that just makes me need him to fuck me more. He starts to pull back and my tongue is dragged out of his ass and he pulls out of my ass and I feel it close up fully and he puts the tip of his cock against my lips and I softly purse my lips and let them slide over his cock's head and lick his cock head as his foreskin gets pushed back by my lips, this time he does not stop at my uvula or back of my throat, instead he pushes on and I feel his cock slide down my throat and push against the opening of my stomach, I don't understand how he could fit in there, but I feel really intense pleasure that just gets more intense as his heavy balls press against my nose and eyes. He stays there and I start to panic as I can't actually exhale and inhale right now, I squirm on his cock and I feel his cock jump from my struggle, and I drool, I try to pull free from my restraints, my wings thrum in the air and then I feel my body exhaust even its panic energy, yet I am still alive, still unable to breathe, but the collar is preventing me from getting hurt from lack of air.

When all the squirming has faded from my body he pulls out of my throat and I moan as I feel an intense orgasm explode out of me and I gasp for breath and then moan again and just as I am about to gasp in another breath he pushes back in and this manages to trigger even more panic, my lungs burn, every instinct in my body tells me I am going to die, I signal yellow, I don't want to signal blue even now, but he stays put as I squirm and burn off all that panic until I am trembling helplessly and he pulls back out of my throat and I gasp and cry out as the most intense orgasm yet hits me, and I squirt on him, then he slams his cock into my ass and fucks me hard his balls slapping me very hard on my pussy, making me cum from those slaps, my hair is fully entirely soaked with my own squirt juices and saliva, I signal red, and he pulls out of my ass slamming his cock down my throat slapping my face with his balls three times before he pulls out and slams it back into my ass again three thrusts, then he pulls out and slams his cock into my virgin pussy and I cry out as there is a brief sharp pain that turns into pleasure, I feel his cock head slam into my cervix as my body magically stretches to give him more space, I cum and squirt and squirm and scream out my pleasure for him, I desperately try to lick and kiss and suck on his balls as he buries his cock in my pussy and my pussy milks him, I taste my own blood on his balls, there is a slight stinging, but it turns into intense wonderful heat, he gyrates his cock inside me and I signal red again and he starts to fuck me hard in my pussy, giving me three more squirting orgasms before he pulls out and slams his cock into my throat again, then he alternates, ass, mouth, pussy, mouth, ass, pussy, then I feel his cock swell and jump, in my ass and erupts a hot blast of cum there, he pulls out slamming his cock into my pussy flooding me with his hot love, and as another insane orgasm blows my mind away I feel joy, I love him, I want to be his forever, to be fucked like this every day, do everything he wants, he makes me feel complete. He pulls out as his cock makes my pussy overflow with cum and slams his cock into my throat and forcing cum to flood into my stomach too, then he slowly pulls his cock out and let's me worship the head of his cock as the last few weaker blasts of cum erupt into my mouth, again he makes my nose erupt with cum, I feel his body tremble and he pulls out and rubs his cock over my face as a few last drops coat my face with cum, he dribbles some over my ears and then again dries his cock off with my squirt juice soaked hair.

I feel fey magic in my womb and ovaries and the cum in my pussy gets sucked up through my cervix and floods into my womb, I swallow and inhale the cum in my nose and swallow, I feel magic pull cum that s coating my face and pussy lips and butt and slide it up into my ass, I feel that heat go deeper inside me, that shining hot love.

Another pair of hands grab my hips, these are smooth, and he has a similar scent to the previous one, and almost as large a cock, he starts right away with alternating my throat, ass and pussy, shifting randomly from one to another after each orgasm he gives me, I try to pleasure his balls and ass and cock, but my heart is not quite as much in it, but then his cock explodes into my ass, then pulling out and burying himself in my pussy flooding me again, and I feel that same intense love and joy for him, but the love and joy for the first man does not fade, he then makes me shallowly suck on his cock as he floods my mouth and out my nose, before he paints my face and ears like his friend did. I feel so loved, can one die from too much love?

I am cleaned up again and then I feel the ring be pulled from my thigh cuff and I feel Nerissa's hands on my lips and I open wide for her and she presses the ring behind my canine teeth and forces my jaw to be painfully widely open, I lick between my breasts, some cum has dripped down there, and I lick myself clean. Lubricating my breasts with my saliva, from the top down. Then I feel an even larger cock slap my face and I panic briefly then I feel him push his cock through the ring, it slides between my breasts spreading them painfully my nipples getting tugged by the chain between my nipple rings and I cry out from a new intense pleasure, my tongue licks around his cock as he pushes forward and then reaches into my mouth and I feel his cock reach all the way to the back of my throat and then he struggles a little bit as my throat stretches even further for him and he finally gets himself just down far enough when his balls press against my nose and eyes that I feel the tip of his huge cock head force its way into my stomach. I squirm as he stays there, but he does not try to torment me as much with breath play as he pulls out and starts to fuck my breasts and throat and his heavy balls slapping against my face, his precum tastes of apples as does his sweat, he pulls out with a rope of cum erupting from his cock painting my throat and mouth and between my breasts and he slams it into my ass erupting twice before he pulls out and buries his cock in my pussy, making such a tight fit that the pressure deep inside me of his cum gets insanely high before cum manages to force me to stretch even more and erupt from my pussy, I manage to just barely stretch my tongue between my breasts and up to lick his balls and I feel cum drops fall onto my breasts and even into my mouth from spraying out of my pussy. He stays there as just the way his cock fills me makes me orgasm over and over form him, squirting. I have no concept of how many times, but I love him and want him to stay in me forever, but he pulls out and his cock drools some more cum all over my face and ears and unlike the other two he does not clean his cock with my hair, instead he coats my arms with his cum before he leaves. The magic cleans me again.

I feel four hands on me at the same time, and smell an elf male and a human, and I wonder what the other three were. I feel with my wings that I am rotated but my subjective gravity remains the same, then I feel a smaller cock, slip into my ass, and a slightly larger cock into my pussy, I guess the elf male is fucking my ass and the human my pussy. I then feel them shift a bit and I feel a strangely shaped cock rub against my face, it is shaped like a double sided hammer, and rock hard, and I try to remember from sex education about males, and I realize he is a dwarf, I at first briefly feel revulsion, but then I know I have a pact with Nerissa, somehow I would respect him enough for him to overcome how much we winged elves hate dwarven men for sex. So I just moan and signal green and he slips his cock between my breasts, and up into my mouth, letting me taste him. He tastes of mountain, stone, fungal bread, ale, pork, beans, and metal, and my body feels that revulsion, his balls press against my nose and eyes, he smells even more of those same things, but his balls are huge and heavy, I start licking his strange cock head and feel his precum start to flow and I feel even more revulsion, I even feel a bit sick and I signal yellow, I feel Nerissa caress my ears and as she does that sick feeling and revulsion fades as she soothes and pleasures me with my ears and I signal red, and he starts to fuck my breasts and mouth, he just barely hits my uvula when his balls hit my eyes a bit too hard for comfort but not enough to bruise me, The human's cock erupts in my pussy and he soon pulls out and the elf cums in my ass and then pulls out spraying my pussy lips and then shoving himself inside my pussy and his and the human's cum combined is enough to make me overflow again. Their cum feels more compatible with me than the other three, like I could normally have children with them, but not the first three men.

I feel myself be rotated again back to where I was and Nerissa moves under me, I feel as I am lowered a bit until my wings press against her breasts and the stone floor on the outer edges. The dwarven cock now starts to alternate fucking my ass, mouth, pussy, randomly, he manages to hammer some orgasms into me, but they feel wrong, then he erupts first in my mouth, his cum is cool, and lumpy, tasting bitter, stone, metallic, fungal, and of pork. I don't really want to figure out his cum in any detail, but I press the lumps up against the roof of my mouth with my tongue and they are springy but have a hard centre, I feel him move slamming his cock into my ass again erupting there and I start to shiver, and I signal yellow, but too late for him to have time to react as he slams his cock into my pussy and fills me with his cold, so very wrong cum, I start to convulse as my body strongly wants to reject him. Then I feel the warmth of Nerissa's magic and the toxic way his cum felt in me fades and my body becomes able to handle it, I feel the lumps melt in my mouth erupting with heat, yet feeling metallic still and I swallow, the same things happen in my pussy and ass and the magic draws his cum into my womb and it actually feels good, not as good as the others, but strong.

Then he pulls away and I signal green, just to make it up to him. Nerissa now let's me see with my own eyes and hear, I see a table in front of me with chairs and the men are sitting there naked eating and drinking, and she pulls out a ugly cute creature, looking like a flaccid cock with two big eyes for balls and tendrils under those eyes, a cockite symbiont, it coos to me and her and she coaxes it up to her pussy and it slips its tendrils and then eyes inside her and merges with her, taking on her skin tone as it becomes a cock and I watch as balls drop into her ball sack and she goes fully erect. She spends an hour fucking me harder and challenging me more than any of the men, before cumming in my ass, pussy and mouth.

The men take another turn each. The sun sets and rises several times, the men and Nerissa take turns sleeping, while some of them keep fucking me relentlessly, I do not get to sleep. I love every moment of it, but for a long while there I forget my name, and all my past and I just am this woman in the gate in the stone, made only for fucking, and that makes me feel intense joy and so loved, it is my true purpose.

After many days I am finally let free from the gate, but I don't want to, I start to cry. Nerissa has to soothe me with her skilled elven ear massage, and she shows me with magic the twins growing in my womb, a boy and a girl and they are gorgeous. I learn the names of the men, and get my other rewards, and feel like a princess, no an empress.

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[praetor3d]

1) What did I immediately feel after reading this
2) What I love about what I read
3) What would I change in the story to make it perfect (for me)
4) Did I get off on this and why

1) I love the story and the writing. My initial reaction though is that the paragraphs are way too long. Even the teaser itself has just too much info, and I wonder if that immediately turns away readers who just can't be bothered to dig in. Once I started reading, it felt like I had to peel layers to get to what I wanted. For instance, the lengthy character bios was something I skipped entirely. I would have preferred to learn about the characters as you go along. Or perhaps, since I'm so visually oriented, is to find some pictures that could help describe the characters and their personalities to reduce the wordcount.

2) omg, the concept of using magic to solidify cum into a dildo is pure genius to me. That was such a hot idea, that I kept thinking about it even when the plot went away from it. That entire idea is just stuck in my mind now, and made the entire story well worth the read just from that. The things you could do with that, my mind just keeps reeling on how it could be used in a noncon type of way.

3) I would love a noncon version of the magic turning cum into a phallus. The sheer shock value of it, and the despair from a victim going through that type of ordeal would know no bounds to me. Actually if the story were shorter and just focused on that very concept would have been enough for me.

Going back to this story, I think the paragraphs need to be broken up. The rhythm of these long passages, I think I would have divided using lines of more dialogue. And the few lines of dialogue I think could have been paragraphs themself. I think that could have drawn more readers to comment.

4) yes, on that magic cum thing again, but in a noncon way in my mind. I would love to take my own noncon writing of that idea if you wouldn't mind. Thank you for the brain food!

[Vela Nanashi]

Always feel free to take inspiration from my stories and write something with those inspirations @praetor3d but do please let me know if you do so I can read it

As for my long paragraphs, yeah guilty as charged, but at least I have learned how to do commas and periods slightly I am however rather incapable of breaking them up more, a huge flaw of mine I know I write in a flow state and my way of doing language is different (incorrect some might say).

I had to make this one consensual, for where it was primarily aimed to be posted, and also I prefer consensual myself though I have written a thing or two that is non con too

I have seen some hot things done irl with cum, like someone froze a dildo out of cum and used it, sadly I don't have a link for that, the magic left it liquid but holding together, but as it touched inside it coated all it touched with cum, but you can make variations of it in your story.

Also you could go for a cum ooze that somehow forms pseudopods/tentacles of cum as the cum's collective desire to impregnate women manifests thanks to wild magic in the area Maybe there is some magic going on in the water works of a brothel that preserves the cum instead of letting it die and it pools under the place and then from time to time gains critical mass to go find eggs and the wombs containing them

[praetor3d]

Thank you!

I would set it into a very paranormal theme to make it even remotely plausible, perhaps it's part of a ritual. And that way, all ideas are on the table.

Have I already said that I can't get it out of my mind! I'm already conjuring up ideas for animating this.

[Vela Nanashi]

You asking me for mercy to not inject more ideas into your head?

[praetor3d]

Perhaps I'm spellbound! Ultimately, it's a gem of a story

[Lucius]

More intergalactic hotness and weird sexiness from @Vela Nanashi! Now we know what she-elves are dreaming of...

I awaken with my pulse racing and glazed in sweat, and my pussy is wet...

Seraphina be rappin'.

I walk out on my balcony and sit in the sun, letting the sun dry my wings and hair, I really need to find some men, but none of the men in my village appeal to me, sure they are friends, but they are of my tribe, and that won't do, I feel the need to meet new men from other tribes

... and play the intergalactic field.

I consider getting dressed now that I am dry, but the thought of even silk touching my skin right now feels wrong, I blush a bit, but I know I can get dressed later I have all the things that are important to me in my ring of holding, including a rather nice sum of coin so I can buy a house and furniture and everything I might need for a decade or more, when I find my new village.

Damn elvish trustafarians!

The scariest thing but also the most exciting for me right now is being restrained, having my sight and hearing taken from me with lenses and ear plugs, and not see what men make love to me. ... my only conditions are that the men must be worthy in my eyes to be at least lovers, that I would feel no shame knowing who they are or that they saw me naked and fucked me, that my children must be able to fly at least as good as I can and that I will find them at least as gorgeous as me or as handsome as my father, and I am assured the men will be worthy in my eyes and I would not feel any shame knowing they saw me naked for fucked me, that my children will be better at flying than me, and that I will find them as gorgeous as me or as handsome as my father...

Let me get this straight -- so Seraphina can't see her partners and relies in full upon Nerissa choosing them?

She shifts them behind my neck, and she says 'interlace your fingers' and I do so, then I feel the cuffs click angling my arms so that my elbows are above my head, if I was standing, my wings are free to move below me as the surface decides what parts it wants to support and not, she next moves my feet back until my ankle cuffs click onto my elbow cuffs, and then I feel gravity change and I collapse against myself, my pussy being right in my face.

Are all she-elves supposed to be that supple?

I feel a ring be placed above my breasts and below my breasts, and she then places a third ring against my lips 'lick through this ring' she says and I do so and I lick between my breasts, from the top and down, she turns the ring to its other side and I lick through it, from below to the top. She then moves that ring to click it to my right thigh cuff. I am not entirely sure what she plans to use those rings for, but it excites me.

I do as she told me to do, and use the little bit of motion my arms can help with to help support my head as I suck my own pussy lips into my mouth, and start to lick between them, my nose touches my anus that has a floral scent, like all elves, it is not quite like any other flower, there is also the wonderful scent of the cum that has coated my anus and nostrils, I lick my own clit and moan as I start to self discover how to give another woman good oral sex, I slip my tongue all the way into my pussy, taking advantage of how long our tongues are, licking my own cervix with the traces of cum from the man that came into my mouth and it just makes me more desperate to be fucked properly. I keep giving myself different variations of oral sex, figuring out what I enjoy.

Or is Seraphina a knife-eared artistic gymnast?

I feel fey magic in my womb and ovaries and the cum in my pussy gets sucked up through my cervix and floods into my womb, I swallow and inhale the cum in my nose and swallow, I feel magic pull cum that s coating my face and pussy lips and butt and slide it up into my ass, I feel that heat go deeper inside me, that shining hot love.

Another pair of hands grab my hips, these are smooth, and he has a similar scent to the previous one, and almost as large a cock, he starts right away with alternating my throat, ass and pussy, shifting randomly from one to another after each orgasm he gives me, I try to pleasure his balls and ass and cock, but my heart is not quite as much in it, but then his cock explodes into my ass, then pulling out and burying himself in my pussy flooding me again, and I feel that same intense love and joy for him, but the love and joy for the first man does not fade, he then makes me shallowly suck on his cock as he floods my mouth and out my nose, before he paints my face and ears like his friend did. I feel so loved, can one die from too much love?

Seraphina is fond of the materiality of love concept, isn't she? You like to return to it -- do you plan to explore it further?

Then he pulls away and I signal green, just to make it up to him. Nerissa now let's me see with my own eyes and hear, I see a table in front of me with chairs and the men are sitting there naked eating and drinking, and she pulls out a ugly cute creature, looking like a flaccid cock with two big eyes for balls and tendrils under those eyes, a cockite symbiont, it coos to me and her and she coaxes it up to her pussy and it slips its tendrils and then eyes inside her and merges with her, taking on her skin tone as it becomes a cock and I watch as balls drop into her ball sack and she goes fully erect. She spends an hour fucking me harder and challenging me more than any of the men, before cumming in my ass, pussy and mouth.

Cockites! Yay! Seriously, a very cool idea.

[Vela Nanashi]

More intergalactic hotness and weird sexiness from @Vela Nanashi! Now we know what she-elves are dreaming of...

Seraphina be rappin'.

... and play the intergalactic field.

Damn elvish trustafarians!

Let me get this straight -- so Seraphina can't see her partners and relies in full upon Nerissa choosing them?

Are all she-elves supposed to be that supple?

Or is Seraphina a knife-eared artistic gymnast?

Seraphina is fond of the materiality of love concept, isn't she? You like to return to it -- do you plan to explore it further?

Cockites! Yay! Seriously, a very cool idea.

So I described in the character description a bit of my elves culture and how flowering works. The idea of not taking mates in your own tribe is that most of my elves are aware of their limited genetic diversity due to nearly going extinct in the past, so they know that they need to try to mix things up and thus during flowering their desires combine with their knowledge, knowing that they will have healthier children if they find a mate in another tribe. Also they don't always form a permanent family as a couple, but after their children become adults, and flower they sometimes split amicably to find another two tribes that are not their home tribe or the tribe of their partner, to start a new life again, often they settle in a third tribe after meeting, and that allows their children to find mates in that tribe, but that was not the case for Seraphina's family, winged elves have fewer places they can safely call home.

She is 37 years old, and has learned several professions by then, a whole bunch of skills, and earned a living using those, and knowing she is going to be leaving her tribe, she has been keeping most of the coin she has earned, as a nest egg for when she needs to set up in her new tribe, of course she also expects her mate to also have a nest egg.

Seraphina does not trust fey in general, she would be a fool to do that, but she also knows that if you make a deal or contract with a fey, they are bound by that, and they will use all their knowledge and skills to make sure to meet their end of the bargain, so yes after negotiating that deal she trusts that Nerissa will follow it, to the very best of her ability, and also knows that a nymph would know what a good man is, making sure they are healthy both physically and mentally, that they are worthy, and also that fey have supernatural knowledge about fertility and the result of their magic that dabble with mixing genetics (though they don't quite use those terms).

Nothing that Seraphina does in this story is extremely graceful or supple as you put it, nor do you need to be a gymnast to do it. I can easily do the things she does in this.

The ring gate connects the top part of itself to the bottom part, so getting into 69 with yourself is no harder than doing it with another woman, and interlacing your fingers behind your neck and then having your wrists touch your neck while you elevate your elbows is not hard either, sure it is not a position that is comfortable to hold for a long time, but when you get welded into that position the restraints will keep it for you. If you are in 69 with a woman it is not hard to get your feet up to her elbows in that position either.

Though her tongue may make a gecko envious, my elves do have some things I do not I would love a tongue like many of my elves have, for sure.

Everything else impressive is aided by magic, like portals and such.

That said though elves often are more graceful and agile than we humans are, most would be considered gymnasts even if they have not really trained that, though most spend the first 37 years of their life honing their bodies and minds to be as perfect as they can, and they get educated about what both sexes enjoy sexually before they even can feel that attraction, it is more coldly clinical then, they learn dances and acrobatics, for survival and fun and then once they flower they notice that some of those things are really sexy shit.

Materiality of love, interesting, this is the first time she has sex, as she is a virgin at the start of the story, and if you are willingly making love to or having love be made to you, like she is, or sex if you want, and you feel good, your body finally getting what it wants, and you notice that good feeling is at least related to cum in you and even on you, and the way it smells, well you may not perhaps think cum smells like flowers, but the way it feels makes the scent good, the way it feels good too, as you learn that is what your body wants. So you feel like a man giving his cum to you, that is him giving you his love, showing his love to you, and marking you with his cum as he wants to keep you, is that not a representation of his desire and how much he values you?

Yeah I love cockites Nerissa wanted to inject some fey into the mixed genetic pool to help with some of the beauty, magic and such aspects to fulfil her end of the deal, and also it feels good to enjoy having a cock and fucking a gorgeous woman with it, so just lots of reasons to do it besides her pet cockite needed to be fed anyway (via connecting to her blood stream while attached), so win for the cockite, win for Nerissa, and win for Seraphina and children, what is not to like

Anyway loved your comment and just wanted to respond to your questions in some detail

[Lucius]

Anyway loved your comment and just wanted to respond to your questions in some detail

Thank you for the detailed explanation, much appreciated!