Monroe Family Nightmare

[RSlice]

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The author of this story has read and accepted the rules for posting stories. They guarantee that the following story depicts none of the themes listed in the Forbidden Content section of the rules.

The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.
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Title: Monroe Family Nightmare
Author: RSlice
Content Warnings: This is a work of fantasy. Rape is a heinous crime that should be prosecuted to the full extent of the law. If you don't know the difference, get some help.
All places depicted are fake.
All characters are over the age of 18 in this story.
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A Lot of inspiration from Countmein, bob202, vile8r, susanhaynes, slimfatter, and sliceblue in all my storys. They are all inspirational.
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Monroe Family Nightmare


The Monroes were a normal American family. The father Steve (48), and the mom Susan (45) they lived off in a cul-de-sac and were well off to provide for their 2 daughters college cheerleader Melanie (21) and high school volleyball player Isabella (18). They didn't mind living in the suburbs but would rather be out at their summer cabin where the crime rate was lower. But to their unknowingly knowledge April 30th would change their lives forever in many ways.


It was about midnight at the Monroes when 2 men were opening up a window to climb through on their way to get some fun out of the night. You see Blu and Red they are some career criminals that not only liked to do home invasions but they would also rape any women they could. This time it had been a planned attack and not a random one, they had been watching the Monroes for a few weeks at this point, checking their social media. Turns out the Monroes were fixing up to go to their summer cabin for the summer and were gonna leave May 1st.

The two men broke in through an open sliding glass door that had been accidentally left unlocked after Steve went out for his evening smoke earlier in the night. Blu and Red make their way down the hallway to the master bedroom, Susan has gotten up to go to the bathroom for a midnight pee. As she is turning the bathroom light off Blu is right there and grabs ahold of her covering her mouth with his gloved hand as Red takes a pair of handcuffs and cuffs her ankles together and then another pair grabs her left wrist and cuffs it to her right wrist. Finally pulling a dirty rag out of his pocket Blu removes his hand and stuffs it in her mouth and plasters some packing tape over it. She is subdued and quieted seeing Red’s pistol and knife the whole time at his side. They drag her to the living room and sit her in front of the couch on the floor.

The two return back to the master bedroom, Steve is a heavy sleeper and has not heard anything going on up to yet as Blu picks up a flower vase and smacks it on his head really knocking him out cold, they cuff poor Steve the same way as his wife and drag him into the living room as well.

Next they each head to one of the two bedrooms Blu grabs Miss College girl Melanie and Red grabs Miss High Schooler Isabella and drag both of them to the living room where they cuff and gag both of them and turn the light on so they have a better look at their victims.

Once the light is on they see what they have. Red pulls his knife out and walks over to Isabella who is all tears right now flowing down under her black framed glasses, Red removes the glasses and takes his knife and cuts the top pj's off to reveal a nice set of 34C boobs, he licks one and then the other. He slices her pj’s bottom in two, and sees her white with blue flower cotton panties, he moves the middle to the side to see a nice blonde bush as he looks up to Blu and licks his lips and slices them off.

Blu pulls his knife out and walks over to Melanie who is a lot calmer than her younger sister wearing just a sports bra and sleeping shorts. Blu looks at the tag on the sports bra and reads the size out loud “Mmmm mmm we got us a pair of 36C tits here and they look nice and firm.” With that he takes his knife on the cross piece and slices upward, and does the same for the left strap and the right strap. Her tits dont even have much sag to them now but probably will when she is older. Blu slices off her shorts to immediately reveal a clean shaven pussy with a piercing in it; he gives it a quick licking and smiles.

Red goes over to momma and rips her pajama top off, her shorts and reveals a semi-sagging pair of 38DD boobs, and a half shaven blonde bush like her youngest daughter. Blu slices off Steve's pants and exposes his small dick for his family to see.

The whole family is now in a crying state well aware of what is possibly to come and not sure of what the outcome will be, will they be giving birth will these two creepy men spare Isabella? What are their plans for Steve? Will they just leave him naked or will they have an incentous plan for him?

To be continued....
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Please let me know if I should continue on with this story. Probably about 1 or 2 good writing sessions away from finishing it. Its a semi-short-medium story and recreation from one I like to read.

[Shocker]

Oh you should most definitely continue this story. Nothing like a good home invasion to bring things to a quick boil.

[bob202]

Please finish has a great start

[Claire]

I am not sure whether this is intentional, but the story reads more like a report or a documentary to me than a traditional story. It all feels very detached. I wonder whether this is going to change in later chapters.

[LaLia]

There's a lot you can do with the home invasion theme, and it definitely has potential. I see it the same way as Claire, but I'm still missing more emotion, thought, and detail. It seems a bit rushed...take more time with the individual moments and add more. For example, the moment in the girls' bedroom could have been much more interesting.

The setting is somewhat reminiscent of the Fansadox comic "The Black Van", if anyone knows it

[Blue]

I see it similarly to Claire and LaLia.
A story about a home rape usually has a lot of potential. Normaly, there are multiple victims who can then be humiliated and/or raped one after the other. Alone, in pairs, gang rape—anything is possible.
Here, I miss the description of the emotions of both, victim and perpetrator. The story is written very matter-of-factly and seems like a mere stringing together of facts. Almost like a police report.

[Vile8r]

Home invasion is a common trope of rape fiction, but also one of my faves! A couple of my most popular stories on the old RU involved home invasions, but unfortunately I can't post them as they feature underage characters.
It's a good start to your story so far, but I would like to see a bit more detail with your characters and their reactions. I look forward to more chapters!

[RSlice]

Home invasion is a common trope of rape fiction, but also one of my faves! A couple of my most popular stories on the old RU involved home invasions, but unfortunately I can't post them as they feature underage characters.
It's a good start to your story so far, but I would like to see a bit more detail with your characters and their reactions. I look forward to more chapters!

Yea Ive saved alot of your stories from RU. You could always just edit the ages of characters. This story I based off of used slight under but I just bumped ages to be whats allowed and am working with it.

Im in the process of writing more / finishing this story tho.

[LaLia]

Home invasion is a common trope of rape fiction, but also one of my faves! A couple of my most popular stories on the old RU involved home invasions, but unfortunately I can't post them as they feature underage characters.
It's a good start to your story so far, but I would like to see a bit more detail with your characters and their reactions. I look forward to more chapters!

Just change the age? I also have three or four stories where I have someone under 18, and I'd have to adjust those as well. For me, there aren't many stories where it makes a difference whether someone is 16, 17, or 18. Even an 18-year-old can be young, innocent, a virgin, etc.

[Blue]

In many stories involving teenagers under 18, the age can be changed relatively easily to at least 18. You just have to be careful not to just change the age, but also to adjust the descriptions of the victims in certain places to reflect their age. For example, when mentioning the type of school they attend.
Words like "teenager" and "young girl" also fit young women who are at least 18 years old.