Sororitas Defiled – A Tale of Violation in the 41st Millennium [Warhammer 40k]

[AdultUser7779]

Teaser: Nor had he even bothered to close your chamber door, you don't know how many people saw you like this, or how long this agony lasted. You grit your teeth through the tears as you reluctantly give in to your body's demands and become overwhelmed with pleasure. He was your first, and only.
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A bit of exposition is in order:
So, Titan Princeps are the pilots of the sacred God-Machines, the Titans. They are some of the most highly valued and important people in the Imperium, every resource will be expensed to save them. Due to the sheer will of Machine Spirits within Titans, Princeps slowly go insane throughout their service as Titan pilots.

You are an Adeptus Sororitas. A devout woman proud of her station and service in the name of the Emperor. One day, you are fighting on a front with the Legio Titanicus, and gain the attention of a Princeps. At first its tolerable, sure he leers a bit too long and he's a bit too close as you converse with him, but he is a highly valued member of the Imperium's war machine so you try not to give him much notice.
But as time goes on he gets bolder, when you are alone with him he touches you in places no other man has touched or even seen before, you notice there are fewer Sisters of Battle stationed at your post but you've been given no orders to relocate. Your only moments of repreive are when he's piloting his God-Machine. You grit your teeth and continue your duty, praying to the God-Emperor whenever you have a moment to be free of this torment.
Eventually, one night after so many, he takes what he wants from you. You remember it so vividly. Legs above your shoulders, hand on your breasts, his... thing, inside you. He didn't bother to restrain you, he knew you couldn't raise a malicious finger against him, even in such a compromised position. Nor had he even bothered to close your chamber door, you don't know how many people saw you like this, or how long this agony lasted. You grit your teeth through the tears as you reluctantly give in to your body's demands and become overwhelmed with pleasure. He was your first, and only.
You receive orders that you are to be assigned to his personal guard. You stop praying. It becomes more frequent, he soon drops any attempt at subtlety and gropes and uses you around others, you stay stoic in those torturous moments, not wanting to lose the last facade of dignity you cling to. Its the worst when he does it around your Sisters. A few attempt to comfort you, but he has them relocated.
You were an Adeptus Sororitas, a woman that proudly fought in the God-Emperor's name. Now you are a slab of meat, to use at his discretion. It gets worse over time, you notice his mind is slipping. He's more forceful, its hurts more.
Soon, he orders you to call him his God-Emperor. Before all of this you may have blasted him for heresy on the spot, but you've been worn down into a fine thing and scream that he is your God, your Emperor at the top of your lungs as he unleashes his load inside of you, day in and day out.
The worst is when he does it around his Tech-Priest attendants. He's always at his more feral with an audience, but that isn't the worst part. Its the mundanity of it all, they don't blink an optic at you as he uses you. Perhaps this is something all Princeps do. They find Sisters to break down and use.
You start praying again, for the first time in a while, but not for yourself, you can't find the heart to pray for your salvation. For everything he's done to you, how you didn't once try to resist him as he made you do the most heretical things.
After years of this, in a rare moment where you are separated from him, you hear that his Titan fell in battle. And like that, everythings over. The Mechanicus makes no attempt to keep you, they have no use for you. How could they? You're older, used up during the prime of your life. You were nothing compared to the Princeps. You are nothing to the Princeps, that was the whole point of it, you try to reason with yourself, to give it all some meaning.
You reassign yourself to an unfamiliar Order of the Sisters of Battle, you couldn't bare to face the shame and rumors that no doubt filled the halls of your former home about what you had become.
Even now, you can't seem to escape it. Your Sisters look at you for too long and whisper out of the corner of your eye. Maybe your debauchery spread to the entire organization. Maybe you would've been better off if you had fell in battle with him. That way you would've been useful to the Imperium til the end.
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Endnote: This is a reupload of my Sororitas Defiled story before it was wiped during the hack. You may or may not notice some differences between this version and the old one. I added an additional end paragraph to the old one compared to two ending sentences here. I did read through your wonderful critiques of my story previously and I greatly appreciate them. From what everyone said this seems like an outline to what could be a larger more fleshed out story. Unfortunately I'm not into 40k enough at the moment to delve into that, with the intrinsics of the lore and all, but in the future when I go through a 40k I may do that. Still, your critiques are greatly appreciated and I like hearing what you have to say about it, thanks.

[AdmiralPiet]

Nice! I shall repost my original comment with some edits:

@Claire thouht I would ahve a field day with this: Guess, so!
First of all I do agree with Claires original comment that the text hints at much more story, and it would be a lot more effective to pick one of those moments and flesh it out. Or several Moments. As it is it lacks impact, and does not use the unusual 2nd person view well.

If you enjoy the 2nd-person narrator you might even alternate between the two persons. When they first meet you are the Sororita, Second meeting you are the Princeps fantasising about her, first assault you are the Sororita again…

The format of flash fiction does not lend itself well to Warhammer 40k if your audience is not already familiar. The Warhammer lore is mostly not very deep, but extensive. Even if you explained the position of Princeps, it is still hard to imagine the Titan, or what a Sororitas is, or why she is called a Battle Sister, not to mention the God-Emperor, or Tech-Priests. Below I attached a picture. I wonder if that fits what others imagined.

Originally I was not sure if you are a Warhammer 40k fan, or just your friend you wrote this for. Now you made it clear.

Let me preface what I am about to write with this:

Warhammer 40k army backgrounds and fanstorys are about “your guys”. If there is official material that is only the baseline. Your Imperial Guard has a special quirk? Go for it. Every rule has a million exceptions and exceptions from the exception. Even the official stuff has wildly different interpretations.
Years ago I had a discussion with someone about a certain character from a Text-RPG not being compatible with Star Trek. I thought there was no way to fit a sadistic lesbian intelligence operative into Star Trek because she was too different from the setting. Today I know that is bullshit, and even more so with WH40k.

Also: All official material is part of the canon/lore, but not necessarily true.
Official position is: Only one Sororitas ever willingly (whatever that means) fell to Chaos. That would exclude any fanwork with fallen Sororitas. But it might well be a lie told by the Imperium to cover up the few that do fall.

For your story: I think there are a lot of ways to force, blackmail or trick a Sororita into such a position. Members of the Ordos Famulous are already implied to be concubines at times (like the Bene Gesserit from Dune that inspired them). Younger Members of Dialogis or Hospitaller might work very well too.
To do this with a Battle Sister though… Bit more tricky. Also you imply that this happens more or less in the open. Not that easy, as going against the Sororoitas means going against the Adeptus Ministorum. I can see that happening, but it needs more meat on the bones.

Likewise with her calling him “my God-Emperor”. Sororitas are religious zealots and fanatics, ready to die and suffer for their faith. Very out of character for a Battle Sister to let that blasphemy stand without some explanation why. Not sure if that is one of the parts you changed already. I think the original sentence was different...

What I do like very much however is the tech priests. They too might have some religious objection, as the God-Emperor is their Omnissiah, the physical manifestation of the Machine-God. But the idea that they would just stand passively by as he rapes a woman is very appealing. It would be in character for them. Raping raises his endorphine levels, this might help the neural implants he uses to connect with the titan. So, even if seemingly pointless, if that is what the weak flesh needs to function, then so be it. Not different than applying lubricants.

[AdultUser7779]

Nice! I shall repost my original comment with some edits:

Hello Ms. Piet (using "ms." because of your boobily big pfp), I am honored that you took the time to write back to me. For clarification, I consider myself well-acquainted with 40k lore, rather my interest in it eebs and flows like most things in my life and I'm in a "dry spell" regarding my interest in it atm. Here are my responses to your critiques.

The format of flash fiction does not lend itself well to Warhammer 40k if your audience is not already familiar.

Admittedly before my first posting I was sure this story would hit the short story threshhold but was proven mistaken.

Members of the Ordos Famulous are already implied to be concubines at times

I was not aware of the Ordo Famulous before your comment. I have since informed my 40k-loving friend about them. Speaking of her, when I first showed her the Sororitas Defiled story said it was too triggering for her to fully read through, which I oddly took pride in given I'm not a serious practicing writer all things considered.

Also you imply that this happens more or less in the open.

Think of it more like the Princeps is openly groping and treating her like his item rather than outright raping her in public. Beyond the Mechanicus' apathy, its generally an open secret that no one is high-ranking enough to do anything about.

Not that easy, as going against the Sororoitas means going against the Adeptus Ministorum.

I actually disagree here. If this was a more widespread phenomenon I could see the Ministorum taking issue, but given the sheer importance of Princeps and Legio Titanicus to the Imperium's war effort I have no doubt they'd turn a blind eye to one of their knights among trillions being turned into a sex slave by one of the most valued individuals in the Imperium. To play into the grimdarkness of the setting, I'd doubt they'd even notice just one of their grunt agents being Weinstein'd, which further plays into the helplessness of the protag Sororitas in the story. No one who could help her even cares enough to bother, and that's something found all the time in the real world.

Likewise with her calling him “my God-Emperor”. Sororitas are religious zealots and fanatics, ready to die and suffer for their faith.

You do have a point there. You could say her broken-in psyche is justifying it as not outright heresy, and the Princeps has spent so much time lording his position and authority over her to make her life hell for years that some part of her may actually believe he is her "God-Emperor", but that would be a sub-conscious line of thinking. And she's never fought back because, like a real world private in the military fighting back against a higher ranking superior, she'd be unilaterally punished for it as in the eyes of the Imperium the Princeps is incomprehensibly more valuable than one mere Sororitas. Even laying a finger to defend herself against one of the most important assets in the Imperium would be taken far more seriously than the Sororitas being raped thousands of times over, as was my intention to showcase in the story.

Very out of character for a Battle Sister to let that blasphemy stand without some explanation why.

My intention was for her zealotry and will to resist being broken down over the months and years of being repeatedly raped by the Princeps, like how you'd imagine a real world secretary being serially raped by a high-level official because she needs the job and speaking out would ruin her—reputation, socially, financially, blacklisted, and so on. Hence the "Before all of this you may have blasted him for heresy on the spot, but you've been worn down into a fine thing" line. Like an abused spouse, she's become so beaten down and submissive she can't muster the ability to resist after years of emotional, mental, physical, and sexual abuse.

Not sure if that is one of the parts you changed already. I think the original sentence was different...

No that part has stayed the same throughout. Most of the text has stayed the same.

Raping raises his endorphine levels, this might help the neural implants he uses to connect with the titan.

Never considered that before, but I like it. My line of thinking was that to the Mechanicus, the Sororitas was so insignificant she wasn't a factor in their duties of maintaining the Titan and Princeps.

That's all I got for now. Glad you responded. I appreciate it.

[AdmiralPiet]

Hello Ms. Piet (using "ms." because of your boobily big pfp), I am honored that you took the time to write back to me. For clarification, I consider myself well-acquainted with 40k lore, rather my interest in it eebs and flows like most things in my life and I'm in a "dry spell" regarding my interest in it atm. Here are my responses to your critiques.

Actually it is Mr. Piet. The nickname comes from the Star Wars Character, although written with only one t for reasons.
The pfp is a OC of mine. 40k in fact, however in this pic I had her depicted as a sexy businesswoman.

I was not aware of the Ordo Famulous before your comment. I have since informed my 40k-loving friend about them.

Not fully sure about the concubine thing. That might be my own takeaway from it by mixing some traits of the Bene Gesserit in.
But it wouldn't be much of a stretch to write it that way. Sisters Famulous serve Noble Houses as advisors but always with the interests of the Imperium in mind. If they can manipulate the young Lord of a noble house better by seducing him, why not?

Think of it more like the Princeps is openly groping and treating her like his item rather than outright raping her in public. Beyond the Mechanicus' apathy, its generally an open secret that no one is high-ranking enough to do anything about.

Yes, that is how I understood the situation.

I actually disagree here. If this was a more widespread phenomenon I could see the Ministorum taking issue, but given the sheer importance of Princeps and Legio Titanicus to the Imperium's war effort I have no doubt they'd turn a blind eye to one of their knights among trillions being turned into a sex slave by one of the most valued individuals in the Imperium. To play into the grimdarkness of the setting, I'd doubt they'd even notice just one of their grunt agents being Weinstein'd, which further plays into the helplessness of the protag Sororitas in the story. No one who could help her even cares enough to bother, and that's something found all the time in the real world.

Might be an issue of me not really grasping the timefrime because the text is so short.
What you wrote is definitely possible if set up right. If she is more or less alone and no higher rankers around: Yes.
On a shrine world the dynamic is completely different.

This is why I wrote:

I can see that happening, but it needs more meat on the bones.

It is all in the setup i.e. (dare I say my catchphrase) worldbuilding.
For me there is too little info here to decide if that setup was good.
But I agree with you that corruption of all kinds is widespread within the imperium, and among the right people a battle sisters life means nothing.

You do have a point there. You could say her broken-in psyche is justifying it as not outright heresy, and the Princeps has spent so much time lording his position and authority over her to make her life hell for years that some part of her may actually believe he is her "God-Emperor", but that would be a sub-conscious line of thinking. And she's never fought back because, like a real world private in the military fighting back against a higher ranking superior, she'd be unilaterally punished for it as in the eyes of the Imperium the Princeps is incomprehensibly more valuable than one mere Sororitas. Even laying a finger to defend herself against one of the most important assets in the Imperium would be taken far more seriously than the Sororitas being raped thousands of times over, as was my intention to showcase in the story.

My intention was for her zealotry and will to resist being broken down over the months and years of being repeatedly raped by the Princeps, like how you'd imagine a real world secretary being serially raped by a high-level official because she needs the job and speaking out would ruin her—reputation, socially, financially, blacklisted, and so on. Hence the "Before all of this you may have blasted him for heresy on the spot, but you've been worn down into a fine thing" line. Like an abused spouse, she's become so beaten down and submissive she can't muster the ability to resist after years of emotional, mental, physical, and sexual abuse.

Alright, that is new info. I was missing the timeframe again, but being broken slowly over years is a valid explanation.
Problem with the Sororitas here is the lore that states only one over was corrupted. Certainly not true, at least for me but one of the core traits of the Sororitas is their almost absolute faith and devotion.
In my opinion that should not be handwaved away.

That's all I got for now. Glad you responded. I appreciate it.