A to me unfamiliar setting, though it does look like people enjoy live shows, so maybe I would too, if it is a band I love.
Interesting scene backstage with food, drugs and women, I don't really know the characters all that well myself. However I think people who do will enjoy this more. I think that despite not knowing you have some hot stuff going on, just that the picture in my head is likely not accurate as I don't know them all.
Glad to see they are enjoying themselves Donna and Jackie
Not fun time for Laurie there.
Wise, though not compassionate to leave Laurie to her fate of the other gals, I guess they are not friends.
Hot if short story, good work
My usual whine about no first person present point of view and not really being particularly attached to the settings and characters as you relied a bit too heavily on people knowing them from the show, and I suspect echoing others saying it is too short too, but that is not your fault but what the story contest was about. Also I like it focused on the more happy sex, than the gang rape itself, though some may think that was not described quite as well as it could have been.