Seraphina's Flowering

[Vela Nanashi]

Yeah I know punctuation and breaking paragraphs are weaknesses of mine. Descriptions were important to be where they are though to give any kind of chance to readers to know what is going on, and I do enjoy both writing and reading descriptions of people and places, I guess that is rare though. Glad you enjoyed the story just like I enjoyed your comment

[AdmiralPiet]

@Vela Nanashi
As always: Imaginative, creative, wild and colourful.
Same problem as with Sorceresses: I struggle with the flow of the text and the sheer volume of craziness.

I know that wont change, but I would strongly advise not to use the character descriptions in the beginning.
Similar to introducing a character and then just rattling off their stats in the text.

In this case Seraphina can not see her partners, but maybe she can imagine them? Like:

As his cock slid in her mouth she wondered who the man behind it was. She heard a deep rumbling grunt and felt big and calloused hands on her tits. Might he be that red orc warrior she had seen entering the tavern earlier?

Would feel more natural I think. And to be honest: I skimmed over the descriptions and by the time they became relevant I had forgotten anyway.

I think the portal stuff goes overboard at times, but here I liked the one that allowed the "self-69"
Also appreciated the rim-job.
And at least I am not fully alone in enjoying some futa content.

[Vela Nanashi]

On Ao3 I put those descriptions in a spoiler, so people could choose to read them or not, I may do that edit here too, but that is all I would do but no Seraphina was blind and deaf so could not hear. Also the descriptions are nano stories for a few of the characters and world. But would not fit in first person from Seraphina's point of view.

All my stories go overboard with crazy and I am not heading in the direction of less of that in my storytelling but rather more

I enjoy my cockite symbionts yeah and you can also if you want see their counterpart in Natira's story the cock/cunt snatch at any rate thanks for reading and commenting