Monroe Family Nightmare

[Vile8r]

Home invasion is a common trope of rape fiction, but also one of my faves! A couple of my most popular stories on the old RU involved home invasions, but unfortunately I can't post them as they feature underage characters.
It's a good start to your story so far, but I would like to see a bit more detail with your characters and their reactions. I look forward to more chapters!

Just change the age? I also have three or four stories where I have someone under 18, and I'd have to adjust those as well. For me, there aren't many stories where it makes a difference whether someone is 16, 17, or 18. Even an 18-year-old can be young, innocent, a virgin, etc.

Yes, some of my stories can be easily modified by adjusting the ages, but there are a few where changing the age totally destroys the 'premise' of the story. Those ones I wouldn't change. But no worries! I have plenty of stories to work with.

[MarvThor]

Can't get enough home invasion stories. This story has massive potential.

[RSlice]

Part 2 (Hopefully this can be a push towards keeping Ravisment Academy open)

Red and Blu are ready to get down to the business now. Red pulls his pants down and out comes his 7 inch 1 inch round cock that is currently soft. He grabs a hold of it and spins it around a little for some stimulation, while laughing and looking at the three terrified women in the room, who at this point know somewhat of what's going to happen. Rape! He decides he wants a blowjob to start the party off but who? “I need a blowjob who wants to volunteer?” “Mom? Blondie? Maybe you young one?” None of the women attempt to make eye contact nor do they make a sound not wanting to suck on a cock and the smell is already permeating the room from where Red hasn’t washed in a week.

“Well then if no one wants to volunteer, Blu put your knife against the old man’s penis see if that will encourage one of his women.”
Blu walks over and puts his knife right at the base of Steve’s little 3 inch penis and looks over at Red who is now in a slight fuming state. “Alright you three fucking beautys you have 10 seconds to make a descision the 1st of you to just look at me and nod your head wanting to suck my cock gets to save daddy over there from losing his little penis.” “TEN, NINE, EIGHT, SEVEN, SIX, FIVE, FOUR, THRE….”At three Susan looks up and nods her head indicating she is now willing. “Now we are getting somewhere. Red heads over rips the tape of Susan’s mouth and says “Suck my cock get it nice and fucking hard glad we have figured out who the hell is in charge finally.”

Susan takes a deep breath as Red shoves his cock into her mouth. “Oh fuck yea lady this is real good havent had a good blowjob in a little while now.” Susan just could not get over the fact this was happening to her and her family, tears running down her face. She doesn't know what is in store for her, her hubby, or her 2 daughters if they will even get out alive. Red’s cock eventually grows to it’s full 6 inch long 2 inch wide monster sized dick inside of Susan’s mouth and he slows down the pace to not entirely choke Susan.
He pulls and looks down “Nice job sucking your a good cocksucker now watch what I’m about to do.”

Red walks over with his dick bouncing up and down, to Isabella who at this point is now crying hysterically from watching this nasty man make her mother take his dick in her mouth. She doesn't know what he plans but is sure it’s not gonna be fun at all. Red approaches rips the tape off Isabella’s mouth “What is your name? How old are you? What's your bra size? Have you ever had a boyfriend? You ever been fucked? 5 seconds to answer each bitch or your daddy gets it.” Blu still has his knife over at old dad.

“Isabell, Eighteen, 34C, no boyfriends, please don't hurt me, I'm still a virgin.”
“That’s what I thought you cunt I love little virgin white meat like you. You are very fucking pretty.” Red started to finger her pussy a little, there was a little bit of resistance to it. “Yep 100% purebred virgin just the way I like my girls.” Red proceeds to put his cock at her entry and with one hard thrust in it goes popping Izzy’s precious cherry, the blood is helping lubricate but the pain still exists. Isabella is now crying, her mom and sister try not to look but get threatened by Blu to watch under threat of the dad’s harm. A few hard thrusts back and forth out of Red and he moans as he lets loose the first of many hot warm loads of cum inside of Izzy. He pulls his cock out and its red with virginal blood with a mixture of white from his pleasure and hers. He walks over to Susan and says “Clean me up nice bitch, now.” Susan struggles but a gun to her face gets her to do as told. After cleaning Red and Blu high five each other and get ready for the next torment.

Dad at this point has now settled down and is no longer being needed to be held at knife point. Blu walks over to Susan and whips out his own 5 inch long 3 inch wide cock. He puts it to her vagina and being that Susan has had 2 kids it is very well stretched and easily slides on in. He’s fucking Susan at a steady pace now talking to dirty to her “Yea you like my dick in you? Better than hubbys right? You're still slightly tight but that’ll change.” Susan ends up having three orgasms before Blu moans and lets loose a huge torrent of cum inside her pussy and lets his dick go soft before pulling out. Now looking for a cleaner he looks at Izzy who is all but out at this point after losing her virginity so he looks over at Melanie. “Bingo! You brunette guess what fuckin time it is. That's right you missy are gonna clean my cock.”

Blu gags the mom to silence her and walks over to Melanie. Melanie has had a few boyfriends in the past but none as big as she is seeing now and she certainly has never sucked on a cock, she thinks it's nasty even though all her friends say it’s the best thing ever. But after watching her mother do it she has an idea. As Blu puts his cock inside of Melanie's mouth she very slightly bites down. “BITCH!” Blu slaps Melanie’s face hard leaving a red mark on her right cheek. “Do not ever fucking bite a cock like that you fucking hear me? Red show her the gun again will you?” Melanie sobs and shakes her yes at the sight of the gun being pointed at her. “Alright now suck and clean my and your mothers juices off me real nice and lady like.” Melanie sucks and cleans Blu’s cock this time with no teeth and when Blu pulls out she throws up as it was nasty. Blu slaps the duct tape back over her mouth and goes to sit on the couch. “Red how bout you give missy there a try. Also find out her name. I hate having to call my bitches missy.”

Red walks over and pulls the tape off not sure why Blu put it on but whatever. “Hey missy *laughing* What's your name?”
“It… it’s Melanie sir. Please don't make me suck another penis please, that was nasty and I didnt like it.” “That’s perfectly fine Mel Mel. Is it alright if I call you Mel Mel? Of course it is we make the rules anyways. I wont be fucking your mouth…. I’ll be fucking your pussy haha”

[Blue]

Why isn't Blu called Blue? *lol*

[RSlice]

Why isn't Blu called Blue? *lol*

Blu sounds like a more thug related name than Blue and it fits with the 3 letter name as Red does lol.

[Vile8r]

Happy to see this story being continued. I like the men using their weapons to coerce the women into cooperating.

[JTCK]

The documentary style just doesn’t work for me — honestly, not at all. Everything moves so fast that I barely have time to picture it in my head before the next thing happens.
Especially the part where a “volunteer” has to be found — that had so much potential! With a bit more time, more focus on the feelings, maybe even some thoughts leading up to the decision.

Anyway, that’s just how I see it. Seems like it works better for other readers. Thanks for posting anyway!