Late to the Party

[Claire]

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• Late to the Party (AO3)

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[Lucius]

The author is very good at the second-person narration, and here she shows her powers again. The messed-up thoughts, the jumbled feelings, the, uh, dynamics and mechanics -- it's all there.

Not Comedy, though.

[Claire]

The author is very good at the second-person narration, and here she shows her powers again. The messed-up thoughts, the jumbled feelings, the, uh, dynamics and mechanics -- it's all there.

The author appreciates the sentiment.

Not Comedy, though.

[Shocker]

Valid try at 2nd person, there might be something in the constant reevaluation of the names/roles but the thing that will stay with me is, a woman raped in the mouth might bite.

[Claire]

but the thing that will stay with me is, a woman raped in the mouth might bite.

I'm always happy to deliver the deep insights with my writing.

[Claire]

@Labaal Welcome to the Academy!

What would you like to see in a sequel? A direct continuation of where the story ends or are you interested in what happens after that night?

Thanks for the rating! If you like a story a lot, you can give it up to 3 points. Don't worry about running out of points, they regenerate every 12 hours.

[Lucius]

Having just witnessed Bleeding-Dick's predicament, surely the narrator isn't morally (immorally? ) ready for oral?

[TromboneDalek]

I appreciate the switching of adjectives/nicknames throughout and how the main character is acutely aware of their hypocrisy the entire time. Kept me captivated and unable to switch away!

[Claire]

@TromboneDalek Thanks, it's nice to hear that the name gimmick worked for you. Enjoy your first reputation points. The more you get, the higher your own reputation power will rise.

[sinfulwords]

It’s funny I just read LATE Satisfaction and now I’m reading LATE to the party

This was a very fun read! 2nd person isn’t a mode u see too often, but of course you pulled it off very well.

I liked the descriptions of the party, very fun, you painted the chaotic frivolity of a frat party in full swing quite well

It’s funny when u introduced the Vietnamese exchange student as Nice-ass-girl I inherently interpreted that as “she’s super nice” cause it’s common slang to use the formula of adjective-ass-noun to take the place of the word “very” it took me a second to register he was literally describing her booty and not her demeanor

Speaking of those nicknames, the ever pupating monikers were a very creative literary device. It was fun to read the Narrator’s interpretation of the characters around him with the changing names.

It was EXTRA clever to use it in the final line where ‘You’ was transitioned into ‘Rapist’ and the girl was changed into ‘opportunity’….that ending was equal parts hot and chilling

Gotta comment on the American slander

As the culturally ignorant American that you are, you have of course no idea how to pronounce her name properly

MALICIOUS stereotypes who needs culture when u have liberty

You couldn’t find Vietnam on a map

Uhhh excuse me! We def know where Vietnam is it’s one of the few places we can point out cause of the war we lost against them…which we actually won cause of freedom

I’m just kidding of course razzing u up a little

The rape bits were brutal and ever so hot too! It was an INSIDIOUS touch making her a virgin and having her bleed all in all I enjoyed the evocative descriptions and dialogue! The panty-stuffing-roofie-technique was also quite inspired very beastly; charmingly vulgar if u would

I also liked how the narrator was trying to resist his obvious predatory nature. In the beginning when he was nuturing his foot fetish he had to convince himself that what he was doing wasn’t that bad. Which in retrospect it wasn’t compared to what the diversity squad ended up doing, but those mental gymnastics carried on throughout his time cosplaying as R-Kelly being trapped in the closet…

Wonder how he’d end up convincing himself he’s not such a bad guy after he’s done “having his way” with ruined-girl when he was supposed to be getting help something tells me he’d find a way tho

Cool story fam! 10/10