Record Chaser

[Lucius]

I can't help but marvel how enfleshed Claire the Character and Mark are. @Claire the Author possesses fine descriptive powers and can make all that viciousness arousing.

[Claire]

@Claire
The long wait was truly worth it. In my opinion, this is the best chapter of the story.
Even if it treats the act of repeated rape rather incidentally. The dialogue and Mark's thoughts are much more interesting.
And what a humiliation for Claire to let him kiss her while he stares into her eyes and fucks her. In my opinion, a moment like that cannot be surpassed, no matter how cruel the rape.

Glad to see you enjoyed it. I wonder where I myself would rank the chapter. Definitely not first, that would still go to chapter 5 in my book. But I coud see it being second or third. I have to think about that for a while to see where I would rank it.


@Lucius Hopefully, one day the author-Claire will be an enfleshed character, too!

[Vela Nanashi]

Too long a wait for this part. I have forgotten a lot of the story, do those 26 hours of awakeness include her time with her friends, or is it from when she woke up from the drugs?

Ouch, not a good situation for Claire, though it is probably good for her physical health that her body has stopped resisting, as that will just keep injuring her more, than the wearing out she is getting from this insane repeated rape from Mark, I know sort of how being that worn out feels, mentally more so than physically, and also her reflection on how it must be meaningless to Mark, given how he can't even get hard properly anymore. Seven orgasms in 9:32h, makes me wonder if he will be able to achieve what he wants in 24 hours.

He is pathetically desperate to get reactions out of her, that is why he has coated her in cum and now that kiss. Though the kiss gave him that reaction he wanted, though I guess she resisted more than he expected, trying to take his tongue (well no that was not actually her goal).

He he had an idea -> He had an idea ?

I am glad Claire remains unbroken mentally, and still resisting.

Mark's dialogue while spanking her is very cruel.

Sorry for not commenting more inline, got swept into it. This was a rough chapter to read. But it also was very well written, good work on it and I hope the next chapter happens quicker than this one took. It is not really my cup of tea though, but you are good at writing.

[Claire]

@Vela Nanashi I know this chapter is rough, not as bad as chapter 5 I think, but definitely rough. This is the traditional "All seems lost" moment in the story when the protagonist hits her lowest point. That is why it's so rough.

I have forgotten a lot of the story, do those 26 hours of awakeness include her time with her friends, or is it from when she woke up from the drugs?

So Claire woke up around 7am, had a normal day, went to meet her friends in the evening and wanted to go home around 9pm. Mark abducts her on her way her home. Technically, she is now asleep for a bit but I guess that getting knocked out like that is not healthy sleep that helps you actually recover. She wakes up around 11pm in the basement. Her first rape begins at midnight. Chapter 8 begins around 9am, so 26 hours after she woke up the day before. She genuinely falls asleep briefly after her first rape, but gets woken up soon after by Mark in chapter 7.

Seven orgasms in 9:32h, makes me wonder if he will be able to achieve what he wants in 24 hours.

Yeah, that's a question I struggled with. He's aiming for 13+ but if you actually tried something like this, what would be the best strategy for a man? Try to come the first few times very quickly or try to pace yourself with equal gaps between orgasms from the start? I ultimately decided to write this as the orgasm frequency being high in the beginning and the gap widening the more often he has come. That made sense to me intuitively but I admittedly didn't do any research on that. But maybe there is some benefit if he early on waited a little longer between orgasms than he strictly needed? I really don't know.

well no that was not actually her goal

Oh she absolutely would have bitten his tongue off if she could.

He he had an idea -> He had an idea ?

Thanks, will be fixed!

Mark's dialogue while spanking her is very cruel.

Thanks, I started to feel a little bad while writing it... made me uncomfortable, too.

Alway love your running commenary, Vela! Much appreciated.

[Vela Nanashi]

I have seen virile young men cum several times in an hour, especially if they actually are excited and more so if they get some help, though some of the later times sounded like they were about 50% pain 50% pleasure, and extremely intense But we might have to ask the men here what is most realistic and most likely to work best for that type of record breaking.

There was also a reverse gang bang movie I saw once with a lot of women and one man and he seemed to cum for each of them or at least each pair, but it started to look not so fun for him after a while, or maybe just a strain/intense.

I do not think 13+ in a day should be hard to achieve for a healthy young virile man, but maybe for someone older it can become a bit difficult. Then again I don't know if being snipped that I seem to recall him being has a negative effect on things or not.

Exhaustion for Claire is rough, I know since I frequently am awake 24+ hours, and not while doing that level of physical activity, as even laying there dead fish will probably consume a lot of energy.

To me Claire being defeated somewhat in this part was worse in some ways than the previous worst chapter, but if she can reframe things in next part it will be alright.

[Claire]

I have seen virile young men cum several times in an hour, especially if they actually are excited and more so if they get some help, though some of the later times sounded like they were about 50% pain 50% pleasure, and extremely intense But we might have to ask the men here what is most realistic and most likely to work best for that type of record breaking.

I mean sure, yeah. Of coure I know that's possible. My question is whether it makes sense to start wih such a high frequency ifyou truly want to maximize the number of prgasms. And I doubt that the men will be of much help here since most will have never tried to optimize orgasm frequency for sport essentially. But to summarize my question maybe: I wonder whether trying to cum as often as possible should be treated like a long distance run, try to maintain a consistent pace throughout. Or whether it makes sense to go all in early on because that gives you more recovery time later on when coming actually becomes difficult. I'm sure Mark would have looked into this but I just went with what I thought tells the better story.

I do not think 13+ in a day should be hard to achieve for a healthy young virile man

I think you're underestimating how difficult that actually would be. But here the men might actually be helpful with their personal experience. But from what I know anecdotally, I think 13 is a lot for one day.

To me Claire being defeated somewhat in this part was worse in some ways than the previous worst chapter, but if she can reframe things in next part it will be alright.

Well, I can tell you this much. The title of the next chapter will be "Record" and it will contain the answer to the central narrative question that defines what the story is about since chapter 6.

[JTCK]

When I saw that there was a new chapter, I first wanted to go back and reread the earlier ones to really get back into the story… But then I was so curious that I just had to read the new one right away

There are two things I really like about the new chapter: the description of him having trouble to cum after so many times – funny enough, I don’t think I’ve ever read that in a story like this before. And the forced kissing is extremly hot, too.

Still, I can’t quite warm up to this chapter, which is also the reason why I’m only commenting now. I feel like he isn’t as determined as he was at the beginning of the story. The dialogues aren’t as sharp anymore, and the spanking scene doesn’t have that same ruthless I-take-what-I-want mentality. Would he really wait that long to get what he wants? Or wouldn’t he be much more brutal to get it faster? I know he uses the time to humiliate her, but for me that feels like a break in his character, which kind of spoils the fun of the chapter.

I still think the story is great, but in my opinion that wasn't the best chapter so far . Nevertheless, I’m of course very curious about the next chapters and the promised resolution what’s behind it all.
And I’m extremely grateful that you’re finishing the story!!!

And now my answer to the big question: 13 times? No way. Maybe technically possible for a man in his prime, but certainly incredibly painful...

[Vela Nanashi]

Congratulations on becoming the third Accomplished Writer with this Popular Story, now hurry up and write the next part please @Claire.

[Claire]

Congratulations on becoming the third Accomplished Writer with this Popular Story, now hurry up and write the next part please @Claire.

Thy will be done. Thank you!

[Blue]

@Claire
Can Mark really climax 13 times? Maybe he can get hard 13 times with Viagra. But cumming 13 times? That would be a record. And actually way too much for one story, and it gets boring after a while