Record Chaser - New Chapter!

[Lucius]

I can't help but marvel how enfleshed Claire the Character and Mark are. @Claire the Author possesses fine descriptive powers and can make all that viciousness arousing.

[Claire]

@Claire
The long wait was truly worth it. In my opinion, this is the best chapter of the story.
Even if it treats the act of repeated rape rather incidentally. The dialogue and Mark's thoughts are much more interesting.
And what a humiliation for Claire to let him kiss her while he stares into her eyes and fucks her. In my opinion, a moment like that cannot be surpassed, no matter how cruel the rape.

Glad to see you enjoyed it. I wonder where I myself would rank the chapter. Definitely not first, that would still go to chapter 5 in my book. But I coud see it being second or third. I have to think about that for a while to see where I would rank it.


@Lucius Hopefully, one day the author-Claire will be an enfleshed character, too!

[Vela Nanashi]

Too long a wait for this part. I have forgotten a lot of the story, do those 26 hours of awakeness include her time with her friends, or is it from when she woke up from the drugs?

Ouch, not a good situation for Claire, though it is probably good for her physical health that her body has stopped resisting, as that will just keep injuring her more, than the wearing out she is getting from this insane repeated rape from Mark, I know sort of how being that worn out feels, mentally more so than physically, and also her reflection on how it must be meaningless to Mark, given how he can't even get hard properly anymore. Seven orgasms in 9:32h, makes me wonder if he will be able to achieve what he wants in 24 hours.

He is pathetically desperate to get reactions out of her, that is why he has coated her in cum and now that kiss. Though the kiss gave him that reaction he wanted, though I guess she resisted more than he expected, trying to take his tongue (well no that was not actually her goal).

He he had an idea -> He had an idea ?

I am glad Claire remains unbroken mentally, and still resisting.

Mark's dialogue while spanking her is very cruel.

Sorry for not commenting more inline, got swept into it. This was a rough chapter to read. But it also was very well written, good work on it and I hope the next chapter happens quicker than this one took. It is not really my cup of tea though, but you are good at writing.