Divergent Limit - Chapter 7 posted

[Vela Nanashi]

Love the nice friendship and cute silliness I am not entirely sure what the numbers are good for, are they mappings to moves, or sequences of moves? If the latter that would make a fighter too predictable I think, but I am not an expert

Nice to see Elijah is a nice person for Eleanor also probably good he is leaving so Victoria and Eleanor can properly speak alone.

Of course it makes sense for Victoria to believe Eugene and Eleanor would make a couple.

Victoria of course detected the stared daggers lol Also useful loyalty yeah heh. Also viewing people as useful etc, yeah, clearly not compatible with how Eleanor wants to view the world.

Interesting first question to pick

Also answer makes sense for Victoria

Interesting question and answer about Anthony.

Nice to have Victoria show some genuine emotions there I think.

Interesting on the media training Also I like that she puts that offer there, to help, and to use what she can do etc, as for Gardner name, I suppose that makes sense as she has weight. I am glad she trusts her mom to help with the things she can help with.

Also good Victoria realized that even if maybe you think you don't have to say it, you probably should anyway, with the I love you. Yeah I think that was important, even if Eleanor only managed "thanks."

Another good chapter and it was nice to see more of Victoria, and for her to show she has a human side in there too not just a dragon.

[mcpa1597]

Well, that was touching. I can't think of anything more to say as of this writing.

[Claire]

@mcpa1597 Thank you!

@Vela Nanashi

I am not entirely sure what the numbers are good for, are they mappings to moves, or sequences of moves?

It's just a game she's playing to focus and maybe to train precision and control:

1 = stomach
2 = chest
3 = head

You tell her: "3, 2, 2, 1, 3" and she has to remember the sequence, translate the numbers into body parts, and execute the movement. But I don't consider that to be part of her training, just an exercise she likes to do that combines mental and physical components. A bit like a rhythm game maybe?

Victoria of course detected the stared daggers lol Also useful loyalty yeah heh. Also viewing people as useful etc, yeah, clearly not compatible with how Eleanor wants to view the world.

I think we talked a few weeks ago in Discord about that scene when I hadn't written it down yet. I think it shows nicely where mother and daughter clash.

Another good chapter and it was nice to see more of Victoria, and for her to show she has a human side in there too not just a dragon.

Thanks! Yeah, that was the biggest challenge. I needed to show that "My daughter was raped by my old high school classmate" affected Victoria without depicting her way of caring in a way that would make her unrecognizable.