Men at War

[RapeU]

Popular status is well deserved. Laughing while being horny was quite an interesting feeling when I read this the first time.

[MadChris]

What a great story , loved the comedy side of it .
Hope you keep writing more stories like this .
Thanks

[Claire]

What a great story , loved the comedy side of it .
Hope you keep writing more stories like this .
Thanks

@MadChris Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I remember you reading this one on RavishU already. It's nice to see that it still holds up even a year later!


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[Claire]

@JTCK, @RapeU, @Vela Nanashi, @Mister X

Thank you all!

[SoftGameHunter]

Terrific tale. I can't say I laughed out loud as a comedy, but then I usually use the tag for absurd or light-hearted tales myself. But as I thought back over it, I tried to imagine it being acted out live, with voice rather than just text. The scene of Jacob breaking down because his beaten rape victim claimed to want his cum, that's laugh-out-loud absurdism right there. If this appeared in an Anime style production, I can hear the over-the-top deliveries loud and clear.

Extra kudos: Jordan Peterson masks. The philosophy here is as ridiculous as his own, but not as pretentious.

Worst pet peeve: The dollar sign comes first! $25000, not 25000$.

[Claire]

@SoftGameHunter Thanks for pointing out the $-sign issue. I wish more readers would help fix smaller issues like that when they notice them. Fun fact: I genuinely didn't realize that this is common practice in English. I must have seen that hundreds if not thousands of time in my life by now that but it never registered in my brain in a way that I thought: "Interesting that the Americans put the $-sign before the number and not after. What is that about?" I fixed it immediately after I saw your comment yesterday, thanks again!

I agree wth you that the comedy tag might not be 100% fitting. I actually thought about creating a satire tag which fits the story better than comedy I think. But I didn't want to create tags that then maybe only 1 in 1000 stories actually use. So I used comedy and left it at that.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

edit:

If this appeared in an Anime style production, I can hear the over-the-top deliveries loud and clear.

If we ever see one of the stories here turned into a hentai, I think we've achieved all we could hope for!

[Mardenia]

Lol the Jordan Peterson mask killed me. Instead of choosing one of the dozen overtly misogynistic, far right grifters, you chose the old man who is most famous for writing a book about lobsters.

[Claire]

Lol the Jordan Peterson mask killed me. Instead of choosing one of the dozen overtly misogynistic, far right grifters, you chose the old man who is most famous for writing a book about lobsters.

Like everything in this story it's meant to be a bit silly and over the top. Peterson was ideal in my view because he feels perfect as an idol for a group of men who try to hide their misogyny behind a veneer of pseudo-intellectual musings and a worry over the decline of western civilization. Say about Peterson what you want but he is - or at least was for a while - very effective in how he addressed men.

I hope you had fun with the story.

[AdultUser7779]

I haven't fully read through Ch 3 so I'll focus my post on Ch 2.

I find it humorously ironic that *Men at War* seeks to effectively correctively rape women to align them with their worldviews, yet also ban users on their stream for saying things they don't like. It humanizes them in a way that beneath their bravado of a higher goal they ultimately are insecure thugs using the virtue signaling of traditional values to rape women.

Aside from that, I like the gender traitor/collaborationist aspect you introduced to the story with Lydia. Nothing eloquent to add, wanted to say I enjoyed that part of the story.

[Claire]

@AdultUser7779 Been a while since anybody commented on this story.

I like the moment of Jimmy protecting Jacob from chat because of the absurdity. Jimmy is of course right with what he says there. To me, what's funny about that moment is, that men who would be so understanding and accepting of their vulnerability as Jimmy is here would likely never do something like that to a woman like Elizabeth. I just like the contrast between the vulnerability and compassion the Men at War guys have for each other and their total lack of empathy for Elizabeth.

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