Bob and the Mean Girls, Redux

[peterfrisk]

I don’t romber this story being this good. Nice work!
Did you rewrite/change a lot? Not only the age of the girls I mean.

[LtBroccoli]

I don’t romber this story being this good. Nice work!
Did you rewrite/change a lot? Not only the age of the girls I mean.

Thanks. The modern day stuff is new, wrote that about a year or so ago when I loaded the story onto The Black Van. I wanted a way to explain the events while tying other parts of the story in. Bob tacitly acknowledged that he lied to the room full of lawyers when Cammy is about to call him out on the ages. She's one of his lawyers and had the birthdates of everyone involved with her, but getting called out like that would just make an unnecessary scene.

Aside from that, only other changes were a little proofreading. It's amazing, I've written this and read it at least a dozen times, but I still find typos or grammatical errors. Every so often I might update an element that doesn't fit with future lore. Didn't have to do any of that with this story, but a good example was Pharma. Originally the story was set a couple years after Sam joined the Club, but after writing later chapters and his own tale, I changed his first escapade with the boys as a couple months before he meets James.

[peterfrisk]

Well I didn’t see or notice any typos or grammatical errors in your story but an explanation for that could be that I was “knee deep” in the story OR the simple fact that I invented a new word in my attempt to write “remember”

Anyway thanks for the insight in to your works.