The Red Rose Rapist

[RapeU]

@RapeU

Chapter one

Myes a crime mystery I’m a bit of an old-film fan so having the detective-work film-noir vibes was super appealing to me ^.^ can’t go wrong with a good ole police chase after a depraved lunatic to increase the captivation factor

Leaving the single red rose is giving V for Vendetta for me “scarlet Carsons” idk if you’ve ever seen that movie or read the graphic novel but both r decent if u don’t mind the amplification of Anarchist politics

This story originally started as a request from a user on RapeBoard who had specific ideas done in a certain way. I haven't seen the movie yet, but if that's what happens there it somewhat explains the part of the request where after each rape a rose is left in the woman's crossed arms.

With a flick of a switch light illuminated the living room. Her eyes grew as big as saucers when she saw a single red rose lying on the living room table.

"Jim" Rose called out, "Jim please no more roses!"

I was IMMEDIATELY suspicious of her husband I was like damn, the rapist was living right under her nose! Which would’ve been a SCANDALOUS direction to take the investigation all the same I enjoyed the clue the flowers provided nonetheless even tho Jim didn’t turn out to be the rapist

The fun part about the original story was writing it in small increments. So seeing a rose on the living room table was the end of the first post. It was about a day or two before readers got to see the rest

Both the rapes in chapter one were well detailed and DELICIOUS! I was nice and entertained in the most twisted way possible for both scenes ^.^ I also feel like the mystery-factor of who the rapist was heightened the first rape, but the lack of that mystery didn’t diminish the second one. The second one had some extra elements of brutality that I enjoyed: the bloody sodomy for example was a nice addition I also
Like how the rose rapist likes forcing pleasure on his victims. He seems to like making his prey enjoy their torment to some extent

Sometimes I go back to these scenes to get back into the vibe of what I wrote because I enjoy them too with one exception. I actually don't like the multiple forced orgasm route and think it's unrealistic. But, multiple forced orgasms was part of the request to write the story.

If I were to rewrite this story (again) I'd probably focus more on other parts of the sex instead of the weird Literotica rule where the female body has to enjoy it.

Excited to read the next chapters and find out why Harry is compelled to pose his victims with roses ….and also stoked to read more depraved rape scenes

chapter 2

Ooooo okay now we’re thinking it’s the boss….cant blame dear old rose for that one bosses are usually such evil little turds who can choke on a whole bag of dicks! A WHOLE BAG

“…And it's pronounced Violeigh!"

Rose after he said that shit:


Maybe violet has less of a Mr. Hyde situation going on and more of a Haunted Strangler thing going on where’s @Lucius I know he’ll get that Boris Karloff reference!!

“…Oh, and as for my eye, I was attempting to stop a fight between a friend and a stranger. I got in the way and got hit. The stranger had a knife but luckily it only grazed my side. I didn’t even bleed.”

Jim is back on my radar

BUT I THOUGHT IT WAS THE FLORIST now, after this violet Violeigh chapter I think u might be intentionally writing it so we think we know who the rapist is and yet…we don’t I’m on to u

Indeed. The story request was specific in some areas, but unspecific in others. Interestingly enough, I actually told the requester no at first because I had written so much that I ran out of steam. Then the "write it in a whodunit" format came to me and I asked if they still wanted the story written. They said yes.

Why ain’t anyone taking the DNA tests like I get why whoever’s guilty wouldn’t wanna take one but why would the innocent refuse? I’m starting to think we got a rape brigade or perhaps a metaphor: we are ALL the red rose rapist

Hmm, a story where a rapist is actually multiple people. Interesting idea.

I like how the chapters are essentially rape sandwiches we get one at the top and one at the bottom

chapter 3

I’m in love with the Roses R Red poem guiding the names and themes of each chapter Let’s see what Dr. Sugar has to say… *Sugar by System of a Down begins playing softly*

I agree, it was one of my better ideas to weave the well known poem into the story.

Security Guard Sweet has the hottest rape yet I loved the victim was a nurse-Jackie-slinging-dope-type-beat and I also loved how she had weapon of her own it’s always fun when peeps fight back ^.^

At this point I’m now convinced the “rapes” are projected hypotheticals in Rose’s head and we still don’t know who the rapist is…I MUST KNOW

Loving this commentary as you're reading.

Chapter 4

…..….raping a biddie in a wheelchair is DIABOLICAL well, at least we know the red rose rapist isn’t ablist im in orbit

And I know Allie had to be written as a paraplegic too cause there ain’t no other way an American would ever be over powered by the British if she was at full freedom capacity she woulda dumped his ass over like some crates of tea into the Boston harbor!!! Lmaoooo i joke ofc…or do I? ….

The pain was back and more intense than ever. It was as if someone shoved a porcupine in her pussy.

not the porcupine pussy

Oh no Allie died thats not good!! now I’m sad

Yeah, I didn't like doing that either. But there needed to be some type of escalation to get a somewhat over the top police response and that's the best I could come up with.

Her eyes filled with tears and her heart crumbled into pieces as she looked upon the eyes of her now former lover Jim. Jim, the Red Rose Rapist.

I FUCKING KNEW IT BRUUUUUUH!!!!! at long last the mystery is revealed!!!!

I sometimes still get goosebumps diving into Rose's head and re reading that part. I probably could have made the mystery more mysterious and made the story a little longer, but the main intent was forced fantasy that I think was accomplished well in the story.

…also, on my mama, dr. Sugar needs his doctor license revoked violating patients is not appropriate behavior!

Thrown in jail and disgraced forever. But there's more than one rotten apple. I've got it in my head the hospital had deep corruption issues where Dr. Sugar and the security guard Sweet weren't the only ones doing dirty deeds. No idea if that will ever make it into a story though.

Epilogue

Ooooooo ok I see why they all dodged the dna test! Damn! Londons professionals are all a bunch of scallawags! From flower merchants to police men, they all dippin their pens in the inkwells of sin, child.

Oh shit Rose moved to Texas!!! Aside from that it sounds like she got a happy ending I hope her and Melinda have a good life

Yeah Rose does just fine.

Melinda...pretty much causes her own demise, and it's not pretty.

Super fun story fam! it had a lot of alluring things going on. it was a feast of rape scenes which ofc I loved!! The mystery pushing the story along was also waaay up there! I couldn’t wait to find out who the red rose rapist was, and I was extra jazzed cause I had a hunch about Jim the entire time

10/10 friend!

Thanks! The rest of the series does deep dives into more complex and complicated plots the further along you read. It would be interesting to see your thoughts as you read through it, and I'd even be ok with harsher criticism of the older stories. The complexity of the plot along with hiding much of it from the reader would be written much differently today versus back then.