Chester County Police Department: George's Intro and the Stephanie Taylor Case

[LtBroccoli]

I enjoyed this part of the story. Well written, good characterisation, believable procedures. Written the way you chose to write it, there wasn't much you could have done to make it more erotic. Unless you had switched from a dialogue account of Stephanie's rape experience - to a full on flashback from her POV or a third person POV. That might have worked, though it could well have thrown out the balance of the story.
All good stuff though, very enjoyable read.

Thanks Nick. If you haven't had a chance yet, check out The Club: New Membership for what happened to Stephanie.

[RapeU]

This is an excellent story that compliments your Chester County Club stories perfectly. We all know what is going on and know that the police will get close to the truth, but never fully arrive there. Even though this story isn't wanking material per say, I still feel like I want more of things like this where police investigate The Club without knowing what they're really investigating.

[Shocker]

This is an excellent story that compliments your Chester County Club stories perfectly. We all know what is going on and know that the police will get close to the truth, but never fully arrive there. Even though this story isn't wanking material per say, I still feel like I want more of things like this where police investigate The Club without knowing what they're really investigating.

I’m essentially on my second read through of this mega epic, and Pharma in all its massive storytelling, was in the process of unraveling things. RU collapsed to early for the full conclusion of the story.

[peterfrisk]

I feel the same way. I always liked the whole harbor universe and especially the adventures of the club but I found myself getting more and more interested in the non erotic aspects. Wanted to know if the police would ever catch them and how would “pharma” end? More like the way you want to have an ending in a good book/movie. Not many authors have gotten me so interested in “the end of it all ” that I would have gladly accepted a non erotic continuation if that was the only option moving forward. When RU went down I felt almost robbed of the conclusion but thankfully I gotten a second chance now

[LtBroccoli]

Thanks everyone. This support is like the word plethora, it means a lot. I'm wrapping up Vinny and Bob's stories this week, and after posting a one-off or two will likely start posting Pharma this week or early next week. There's a couple other stories I'll get into as well for the HCU, but there's still a long way to go.

I spent the last couple days reading Lake Hiawatha, doing some edits and seeing what I want to add or change. There's one thing I've modified as far as dates go because I've something big planned for an upcoming character. I've also got a couple sections/episodes I wanted to do highlight how dangerous the family really was.

There's still a lot left with Pharma, a lot of it dealing with the aftermath of the cabin party and then the next mess they dive into. I have to do a rewrite/edit on another story called Purity which is pretty damn big, too. Another square peg/round hole situation to make it work with the rules, but there's a ton of stuff planned for that story. After Purity and the tale end of Pharma my next planned story is called "Sins of the Parents." NGL, there's times I just want to write a fun story and the porn feels like it's just there to make it fit the boards.