Bankrupt

[JTCK]

In your reply to LaLia's comment you wrote (it seems I cannot quote it directly):

"I could have extended the story past this end, but I liked the idea of keeping everything that happens contained to the one location. Also the fact that you kept wondering what might happen next, proves that I stimulated your imagination. The possible continuations that happened in your mind, all beat the story I could have written, as you know all the right buttons to push for you."

That's true, I understand what you mean by that. But still, it would have been great for us readers to see WHAT you would have made of this story, and HOW you would have written it in your wonderful storytelling style...

Normally, I don't really like short stories. But this one is truly a good one!

[Shocker]

In your reply to LaLia's comment you wrote (it seems I cannot quote it directly):

"I could have extended the story past this end, but I liked the idea of keeping everything that happens contained to the one location. Also the fact that you kept wondering what might happen next, proves that I stimulated your imagination. The possible continuations that happened in your mind, all beat the story I could have written, as you know all the right buttons to push for you."

That's true, I understand what you mean by that. But still, it would have been great for us readers to see WHAT you would have made of this story, and HOW you would have written it in your wonderful storytelling style...

Normally, I don't really like short stories. But this one is truly a good one!

Thank you, slavery is a recurring my theme in my stories, I find it much more appealing of making a victim vanish into a life of sexual abuse and slavery, than having to write snuff. Some of the experiences a victim just doesn’t walk away from.

[RapeU]

Great concept. Love that the lawyer on the other side completely blind sighted her. I could see this being a realistic scenario in an alternate society. The revenge angle and woman scorned angle are always good avenues to explore and you did it masterfully.

[Shocker]

Great concept. Love that the lawyer on the other side completely blind sighted her. I could see this being a realistic scenario in an alternate society. The revenge angle and woman scorned angle are always good avenues to explore and you did it masterfully.

thank you RapeU. Among the best things Stephen King has ever written Horror wise are the long walk and running man. Because the horror is based on the society that has dramatically drifted away from what was considered normal. Looking at modern reality TV, he was rather prophetic.