Unhappy New Year

[Lucius]

I've always been thrilled by the stories where we see 'the beauty of the universe so peaceful and serene in seconds turn to violence and screams' (Spooks; still think Ming Xia should've had a much better career!) The description of the shift in the atmosphere preceding the violations was very important for me.

I've been to Cologne, and I think, as @Claire said, that it helps with immersion. A sense of time and place is what I desire as well when I read stories.

[HumiliationInc]

I really liked this story and the first person victim perspective is quite effective. Some people don't like forced BJs in non-con stories due to realism, (is a guy really going to risk getting his dick bit off?) but I think a little bit of suspension of disbelief is warranted in this case. I love that the description of actually feeling one of the assailants grow harder in the narrator's mouth. I'm not a huge anal fan, but found the "anal deflowering" line really erotic.

Of course, now I'm very curious about Johanna's experience. I'm a sucker for shared experiences where two or more victims go through the ordeal at the same time.

[joey]

Damn!! How in the heck did I miss this story? Evokes the Lara Logan incident in Tahrir Square and is to me an extremely erotic description of a victim being dehumanized by a crowd that has gone berserk (unfortunately highly probabley in a premeditated fashion). Hot and sad at the same time.

[LaLia]

Damn!! How in the heck did I miss this story? Evokes the Lara Logan incident in Tahrir Square and is to me an extremely erotic description of a victim being dehumanized by a crowd that has gone berserk (unfortunately highly probabley in a premeditated fashion). Hot and sad at the same time.

thx, yes, unfortunately, that was a very sad real incident. That's why it was a bit of a fine line to write something about it. I don't think it would have come across well in any other way than in the me version.

I really liked this story and the first person victim perspective is quite effective. Some people don't like forced BJs in non-con stories due to realism, (is a guy really going to risk getting his dick bit off?) but I think a little bit of suspension of disbelief is warranted in this case. I love that the description of actually feeling one of the assailants grow harder in the narrator's mouth. I'm not a huge anal fan, but found the "anal deflowering" line really erotic.

Of course, now I'm very curious about Johanna's experience. I'm a sucker for shared experiences where two or more victims go through the ordeal at the same time.

Luckily, I can't really judge that, but I don't even know if that would really be the case with a forced blowjob!? Yes, it might prevent your own rape, but you also risk being killed. And whether you get your penis bitten off...probably not. There have been enough oral rapes, and as a victim, you're either paralyzed in the moment or choose the lesser evil. But it's hard to say.

And forced anal sex, especially when it involves deflowering, has something to it...anal sex in particular is something many people don't like, which already hurts and is therefore probably even more humiliating than a "normal" rape. It's often a theme in my fantasies.

[Writers_Bloque]

This story. It embodies all the emotions of being a stranger in a strange land. The rapes was well written, almost too realistic, but that is not a problem at all. It made it feel real.

[LaLia]

This story. It embodies all the emotions of being a stranger in a strange land. The rapes was well written, almost too realistic, but that is not a problem at all. It made it feel real.

In this case, I definitely take "too realistic" as a compliment. I think I'm most successful in writing short stories in the first person, focusing on the actual rape.

[RapeU]

There's just something about movies and stories based on real events that make them more satisfying when watched or read. This story is no exception to that. Overall great concept. I would suggest when translating stories to double translate them, German to English then English to German to see if the general meaning wasn't lost through translation. It takes a little more work of course, but it reduces translation errors.