CHAPTER 3:
True to their word, the work crew kept Rachel very busy. They were going through booze like it was going out of style. Rachel was glad a few of the tables in her section eventually cleared out, so it lessened her workload a bit. The crew guys were enough as it was!
After a few rounds at their table, they got up and meandered into the pool room. For a Friday night, the pool room was not that busy, which surprised Rachel. Usually, it was right full of people.
It made a little more work for Rachel as she had to keep travelling back and forth between the pool room and her other section. Carson and his boys were not slowing down in their drinking. Rachel didn’t mind. She figured after a couple of hours she had already made about $200 in tips from them.
Rachel came walking into the pool room to see if the men needed another round. She already knew they probably would. They needed another round every time they saw her.
“Another round?” she asked.
“Damn right, sweetie!” answered Bruce.
“And bring more shooters too!” yelled Carson.
“What I really need is a hot piece of ass,” Tad smirked.
Rachel looked over her shoulder as she walked back to the bar.
“Sorry,” she shrugged, “I really can’t help you there!”
Rachel left the room and Tad grabbed his crotch.
“Oh, I think you could, honey,” he said.
“Mmmm, what I wouldn’t give to spend a few minutes with her!”
Rachel was back in a few minutes with a fresh round of drinks and more shooters.
The men were just racking up the balls for another game of pool.
“Hey, why don’t you have a game of pool with us?” asked Owen.
“I’d love to,” replied Rachel, “but my boss would have a fit. I’m pretty busy right now.”
“Oh, come on,” chuckled Derwin.
“Yeah, we’re playing doubles. You can be my partner,” said Tad.
“I’m not really that good,” said Rachel.
“Bah, neither is Bruce, but you look a whole better than he does,” joked Tad.
“Hey, watch it pal!” Bruce shot back. He shook his fist good-naturedly.
“Maybe another time,” said Rachel, “but I gotta get back to work.”
Back at the bar, she paused for a minute to have a drink of cold water.
“Whew, those crew guys aren’t giving me a moment’s rest,” she said to Andy.
“Yeah, they’re liking you! Keep up the good work and they’ll keep spending money!" he beamed.
“Well, you won’t believe it! As busy as I am, they just asked me to play a game of pool with them.”
“Go ahead then!” said Andy.
Rachel gave him a weird look. This was unexpected!
“You….want me to?” asked Rachel. “But who’s gonna look after my tables?”
Andy gave a a dismissive wave of his hand. “Ah, shit, the bar’s died down a bit. Brooke can handle your section until you’re back. You’ve been givin’ ‘er all night. Take a little break. If it’ll keep those boys happy if you play pool with them, then go for it!”
“Okay, but Brooke ain’t gonna like it,” said Rachel wistfully.
“Ah, fuck that moody bitch,” snarled Andy. “She won’t complain if she knows what’s good for her.”
Rachel set her tray down, grabbed herself a can of Pepsi from the cooler, and headed to the pool room.
“Hey, girl!” yelled Tad as he saw her enter the room.
“Good news!” said Rachel. “My boss told me to take a break so I’m coming to play pool with you.”
“All right,” said Derwin. “We’ll start a new game.”
The men handed her a pool cue and re-racked the balls.
“Ladies first!” said Tad. “You break!”
“Like I told you, I’m not very good,” said Rachel nervously.
She held the cue awkwardly and lined up on the cue ball. She hit the balls and they scattered around the table.
“See, that wasn’t too bad,” said Carson.
Not that any of the guys were paying attention to the shot she made. They were admiring how the fabric of her shorts stretched tight across her ass as she bent over.
The other men all took their turns then it was Rachel’s again. She was struggling to get lined up on the cue ball.
“Here, sweetie. Let me help you,” said Tad.
He came around the table and stood alongside Rachel. Tad was over six feet tall and towered over the petite girl. He reached down to help show her the proper technique of holding the cue. His right arm was across her back so he could move her right hand and his left arm was down holding her left hand. Tad was able to look right down inside Rachel’s blouse and see the curve of her breasts inside her bra. He felt his cock stirring.
It felt so good, pressing against her warm firm body. Tad breathed in the fragrant scent of her perfume and her silky soft hair brushed his arm. He could just imagine what it would be like to have this gorgeous girl underneath him with his cock buried deep inside her.
He helped Rachel take the shot and she let out a little squeal of glee as she watched the ball she had been aiming at disappear down the pocket.
“I did it! I sunk a ball!” she squealed as she gave a little hop.
Owen and Derwin smiled to each other as they watched her small perky tits bounce under her shirt.
“Nice!” Derwin whispered.
The game continued, with Tad insisting on giving Rachel assistance with each shot she made. Rachel couldn’t help but notice, his body seemed to press a little harder and his hands roamed a little more, with each time he was close to her. And the other guys too, Derwin and Owen, seemed to be taking a few liberties, as well, doing things that caused them to “accidentally” rub and bump against her.
Rachel was beginning to feel a bit uneasy. It reminded her of things the boys used to do to her in school. Rub against her in the hallway, give her little pinches on the butt, snap her bra, juvenile stuff like that.
She always kind of figured it was the price she paid for being a cute girl. But she had hated it too! It also disgusted her to notice that Derwin was wearing a wedding ring. What the hell was he doing trying to flirt with her?
They played a couple of games. She and Tad beat Owen and Derwin both times.
“All right, my girl!” said Tad as he high-fived her.
“Well, I really have to get back to work,” said Rachel, glancing at the clock on the wall. They had been playing for nearly a half hour.
“See ya, Rachel! Thanks for the game,” said Derwin.
Rachel hurried back to the bar. She ran into Brooke.
“You done playing pool with your boyfriends?” she sneered.
“I’m sorry I took so long,” Rachel apologized. “But Andy told me to take a break.”
“Yeah, well, now that you’re done giving out blowjobs in the pool room, you can get back to work!”
Before Rachel had a chance to respond to Brooke’s sarcastic remark, she had turned and walked away. She knew taking that break to play pool would cause nothing but trouble with Brooke. Brooke already didn’t like her because, well, as far as she was concerned Rachel was just a little too curvy, a little too perfect, a little too perky. Rachel also knew that Brooke considered her as Andy’s little pet and that he let her get away with stuff that the other waitresses couldn’t.
Oh well, let her think what she wants, thought Rachel. It’s no skin off my butt!
Back in the pool room, the guys were still talking about Rachel.
“Goddamn, she is one hell of a cutie!” said Owen.
“Yeah, I’m sure glad we came here tonight,” said Bruce. “A little shithole town like Rutler, you probably don’t get to see cunt like her too often!”
“I sure wouldn’t mind partying with her,” said Tad.
The other men smiled at him knowingly. They had all worked away from home enough over the years to know what that meant.
Carson suddenly got up from the stool he was perched on.
“I’ll be back in a few minutes, boys. Keep the party going!”
Carson walked up to the bar and motioned to Andy to come over. He extended his hand out.
“Hello sir, the name is Carson Matlin. You’ve seen my boys in here tonight partying, I take it?”
Andy shook his hand.
“Pleased to meet you. I’m Andy Rouse. I own this place, and yeah, I saw your guys tonight. You’re working out on the new overpass, I hear.”
“Yeah, we are. Gotta say, ya got yourself a nice little establishment here. Me and the boys are quite enjoying ourselves.”
“That’s good to hear, Mr. Matlin,” said Andy. “I’m glad to see you came in tonight.”
“I was wondering if you and I could talk a little more privately?” said Carson.
“Sure,” replied Andy.
He motioned Carson over to the door of his private office and they stepped inside.
“Is there a problem?” asked Andy with a look of concern. “I hope you’ve been getting good service!”
Carson smiled. “Oh, no need to worry about that, Mr. Rouse. Your waitress, Rachel, who’s been serving us, she is something else!”
Andy smiled back. “Oh yeah, she is! She’s one of my best girls.”
“Well, it’s her I’ve come to talk to you about,” said Carson. “I’m sure you’ve likely noticed my boys have taken a bit of a shinin’ to her?”
“Yeah, I noticed,” said Andy. “Everybody who comes in here usually takes a shining to her!”
“My guys have been out working now for several weeks. Working damn hard too! They deserve a bit of a…..reward. I wanna give ‘em one. Not only that, Mr. Rouse, but you look like a guy who likes to make money.”
Carson reached in his pocket and pulled out a large wad of bills. He peeled several off and set them on Andy‘s desk.
”That’s $1000, sir! It’s yours, if you can get Rachel into coming over to our motel tonight for a party after she gets off work.”
“A “party”, huh?” asked Andy. “Now, this party wouldn’t happen to involve you boys all banging her, would it?”
Andy chuckled to himself. He had dealt with this sort of thing many times before in his years of operating a bar. Usually, when a bunch like this wanted a girl, or girls, to come back to their motel with them, it was for one purpose and one purpose only. To fuck the shit out of them!
He cleared his throat. “Are you proposing I prostitute my waitress out to you boys?”
“Well, you don’t have to say it quite that way,” said Carson. “Just ask her if she’ll come party with us. Tell her it’ll be good PR for the bar. You can split that money with her! I could just ask her myself, but I got a feeling she’d listen to you better, seeing as how you’re her boss.”
Andy looked at Carson and then at the pile of bills on his desk. A grin formed on his face. Carson could tell from the look in Andy’s eyes that the wheels were in motion. Andy was thinking an evil thought.
Instead of being offended and telling this guy to get lost, it aroused Andy, the thought of five strange men banging the hell out of his cute waitress. Then he realized to himself, this could be IT! This could be HIS ticket to finally getting between Rachel’s heavenly thighs!
“I, um, have an even better…… proposition….. for you, Mr. Matlin,” said Andy slowly.
“And what would that be?” asked Carson.
“You make it $2,000, and I will let you and your boys do Rachel right here in the bar! I’ll get her to stay late to close, I’ll lock the doors and shut off the surveillance cameras, and the place is yours for the night! How does that sound? And little Rachel will be all yours to do whatever you please with!”
Carson’s eyes lit up.
“Seriously? You’d do that?”
“Damn straight, I would. Like I say, for 2 grand! And you and your guys can help yourselves to some free booze while you’re here!”
Carson held out his hand. “Andy, you have got yourself a deal!”
He reached into his pocket and pulled out some extra bills to put with the rest on the desk.
“Now, there’s just one little condition,” said Andy.
“And what is that?” asked Carson.
“I get a turn on her too!”
Carson let out a snicker. “Ah, the dirty old boss wants a piece of ass too, huh?”
Andy gave a sheepish smile. “Fuck man, you don’t know what it’s like working with that girl. I walk around with a constant hard-on! I’ve wanted to fuck her since the day I hired her!”
“Well, we’ll help you get rid of that hard-on tonight,” said Carson, clapping Andy on the shoulder.
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Excellent continuation and increase in tension. This is a game of pool I’d love to join.
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I agree...well structured, and I'm excited to see what happens next. One small thing: paragraphs are important, but there can also be too much. I found there was a bit too much scrolling here, but that's a comment for the B grade. And I think you forgot the headline. And please remember to update the index.Shocker wrote: Fri Apr 25, 2025 4:01 pm Excellent continuation and increase in tension. This is a game of pool I’d love to join.
Maybe that's what's intended, that you feel sorry for the victim!?Nickamano wrote: Mon Apr 21, 2025 9:28 pm Seriously enjoying this one so far. Like the characterisation and the varying ages of the characters. Interested to see how the NC action takes shape. I'll certainly be keeping my eyes open for updates.
Thank you for sharing.
Oh and this one runs the risk of making like the main character so much that I cringe a little when she gets throw in into the NC action. Its funny really, I've experience that a few times with rape stories. when the characters are written to be so likeable that when they are busy getting assaulted I find myself sympathising rather than enjoying that action... Hmmm... Feels like I'm kinda missing the point lol.

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Great story vile8r. Can’t wait for you to post the rest - and your other stories too.
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I'm really hoping Brooke is going to get involved with helping these guys get what they want.
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Sorry, I've been away for a bit! I had a few things to deal with. But I'm back! Here is a new chapter of my Rachel story.
Chapter 4:
He turned and left the office. Andy stuck the money in a drawer of his desk and headed back out to the bar. He saw Rachel and waved her over to him.
“You know that raise you were asking for earlier tonight?” he asked.
“Yeah.”
“I’ve got a way for you to earn it.”
Rachel gave Andy an impatient stare. Really? As busy as she and the other waitresses were, and Andy was playing his dumb little games again?
“Okay, I’ll bite. How can I earn my raise?”
“I want you to close up tonight,” said Andy.
Rachel’s face lit up. Well, what do you know? He wasn’t playing his sick games. He was serious!
“You want me to close up?” she said , as though she hadn’t heard him properly the first time.
“Yeah, it’s starting to die down, I’m gonna let Angie and Brooke go home soon and I’ll get you to close up. You’ve helped Angie do it before, I think you can handle it yourself. You do a good job and I’ll give you the raise, okay?”
“Um, yeah! For sure, Andy! I can do it. And, uh, thank you!”
“Well, if you do have any problems, I’ll just be upstairs and you can call me.”
Rachel went back to work, feeling very self-satisfied. It felt good that Andy was finally giving her more responsibilities and also that she was finally getting her raise. More money meant she’d be able to get out of Rutler that much quicker and back to school!
She quickly phoned her parents and told them she would be home a bit later. They worried about her working night shifts, so she would always phone them if she happened to run a little late.
In the pool room, Carson had just explained to the men about the deal he had made with Andy.
“Sonuvabitch! For real?” asked Bruce.
“Damn right, for real!” said Carson. “I figure the way you boys been working, you’ve earned it!”
Tad slapped him on the back. “Boss, you’re the best! I can’t believe we’re gonna get to fuck that little blonde fox!”
“And we can do ANY thing we want?” asked Derwin. “In ANY hole we want?”
“You got it!” said Carson. “I gave Andy two grand. After this bar closes, she’s all ours!”
The men quickly shut up as Rachel brought them another round of drinks. If only Rachel could know the twisted thoughts going through the minds of the five men as she set their drinks on the table.
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It was now almost closing time. The bar had cleared out except for a few stragglers here and there. And the crew in the pool room. For them, it seemed the party was just kicking into high gear. They had ordered several rounds for last call and showed no signs of slowing down.
Andy sent Angie and Brooke home early, which didn’t bother them. Rachel was busy cashing out and doing all the closing up activities. She had helped close up before and was familiar with the routine. She had just never had to do it all herself.
Andy told her he was going to bed. He lived in an apartment above the bar, so he wasn’t too far away if she needed him.
Finally, Rachel was finished and was ready to turn the lights out and lock the doors. She had already shut off the “OPEN” sign. But there was one last job to do. Get Carson and his men out of the bar!
Andy told her earlier, that seeing as how they were spending so much money in the place, to let them party right up until she was ready to leave. He didn’t normally let people do that.
She walked back to the pool room where they were still hanging out. She could hear the hooting and hollering long before she got to the doorway.
“Hey Rachel!” Tad whooped as he saw the blonde hottie enter the room. “Come back to party with us?”
“No,” she said firmly. “I came in here to tell you guys it’s time to pack it up and get out. I’m ready to lock the doors.”
“Oh come on,” whined Owen. “We still have a few drinks left!”
“Well, you’ve had more than enough time to finish them,” said Rachel. “Now come on, you got two minutes to get out of here. I’m tired and I want to go to bed!”
“We were hoping you would have another game of pool with us,” said Carson.
“Yeah, but this time we thought maybe we’d use your holes!” said Derwin with a sick laugh.
Rachel began to feel a bit uneasy. The five large men were forming a semi-circle around her.
“Come on, Rachel, just one little game,” said Bruce, licking his lips.
“Okay, that is enough!” snapped Rachel as she began to back towards the doorway. She felt herself getting flustered. “You guys had better get out of here before…..before….”
“Before what, honey?” asked Carson.
Rachel gathered her composure and tried to make herself as tall as she could.
“I’ll call Andy down here!” she said defiantly.
“Your fat-ass boss? We ain’t scared of him!” Bruce sneered.
“Nope, but I think you oughtta be scared of us,” said Owen with an evil chuckle as he grabbed at his crotch.
Rachel didn’t like this. This was a situation she had always been warned about by the other waitresses. And one of the reasons there was always two people doing closing! Rachel considered it odd she was asked to close up by herself, but didn’t think too much of it. She knew Andy would be around if she needed help. Like now!
“Get ‘er boys!” said Carson.
With a panicked look on her face, Rachel spun around to run from the room. Her right ankle twisted and the heel on her shoe broke, sending her sprawling on the floor. The men were on her like a pack of dogs.
Tad was the first to reach her. He pulled her to her feet, squeezing her breasts through her shirt.
“Mmmmm, those babies feel really good!” he said.
He lifted her like a rag doll and tossed her to Carson, who caught her and shoved a rough hand between her legs. Rachel squealed as he squeezed her crotch.
“LET ME GO! STOP IT!”
“I wanna bury my cock in that tight little snatch!” Carson hissed in her ear.
“NOOOOOOOOO!”
Carson pushed her over to Bruce. The large man wrapped his thick arms around Rachel and carried her to the pool table. She kicked and flailed furiously. As he threw her down on her back, Derwin and Owen grabbed her arms and pinned them down.
“ANDYYYYYYYY! ANDYYYYYYY! HELP ME!” Rachel screamed frantically.
Tad grabbed the front of Rachel’s blouse and ripped it open, the buttons flying in all directions. Tad continued to pull on it, the thin fabric tearing completely away from her body. Tad reached in and grabbed the large wad of bills Rachel had tucked inside her bra.
“Holy crap, girl! You made pretty good on tips tonight,” he said, admiring the large roll of money. He set it on a table.
“Don’t worry, you can have it back after we’re finished.”
While that was happening, Bruce yanked open the snap on her shorts. Rachel was a fighter and she was kicking like crazy, making it hard for him to get her shorts down.
“Tad! Give me a hand!” he yelled.
Between the two of them, they started yanking and pulling on her shorts, getting them down past her hips. Their hearts raced as they glimpsed the tops of her silky smooth thighs.
‘NOOOO! NOOOO! LET ME GO!” Rachel bawled.
As they got her shorts to her knees, they both yanked as hard as they could and the shorts just ripped in half. Bruce tossed the tattered garment on the floor. Tad had grabbed her white lacy panties and separated them from her with a couple of hard tugs. The sound of the tearing panties was loud in the room as they came off her in two pieces. She screamed loudly again.
“ANDYYYYYY!”
“Heh, heh! Nobody here to help you, little girl!” Carson gloated as he watched his men strip the helpless girl on top of the pool table.
“Sonuvabitch, she’s got a sweet body!” said Derwin.
“Gonna have a lot of fun fucking this honey!” said Bruce.
The guys were all checking out Rachel’s sweet, shaved pussy as Tad unsnapped the front of her bra and pulled the cups away from her size 32 breasts.
“Oh, man, those are nice!” he said.
The bra joined her panties and the rest of her torn clothes on the floor. Carson began to unbuckle his pants.
“It’s time for some fuckin’!” he said.
STAY TUNED FOR MORE ACTION IN CH. 5!
Chapter 4:
He turned and left the office. Andy stuck the money in a drawer of his desk and headed back out to the bar. He saw Rachel and waved her over to him.
“You know that raise you were asking for earlier tonight?” he asked.
“Yeah.”
“I’ve got a way for you to earn it.”
Rachel gave Andy an impatient stare. Really? As busy as she and the other waitresses were, and Andy was playing his dumb little games again?
“Okay, I’ll bite. How can I earn my raise?”
“I want you to close up tonight,” said Andy.
Rachel’s face lit up. Well, what do you know? He wasn’t playing his sick games. He was serious!
“You want me to close up?” she said , as though she hadn’t heard him properly the first time.
“Yeah, it’s starting to die down, I’m gonna let Angie and Brooke go home soon and I’ll get you to close up. You’ve helped Angie do it before, I think you can handle it yourself. You do a good job and I’ll give you the raise, okay?”
“Um, yeah! For sure, Andy! I can do it. And, uh, thank you!”
“Well, if you do have any problems, I’ll just be upstairs and you can call me.”
Rachel went back to work, feeling very self-satisfied. It felt good that Andy was finally giving her more responsibilities and also that she was finally getting her raise. More money meant she’d be able to get out of Rutler that much quicker and back to school!
She quickly phoned her parents and told them she would be home a bit later. They worried about her working night shifts, so she would always phone them if she happened to run a little late.
In the pool room, Carson had just explained to the men about the deal he had made with Andy.
“Sonuvabitch! For real?” asked Bruce.
“Damn right, for real!” said Carson. “I figure the way you boys been working, you’ve earned it!”
Tad slapped him on the back. “Boss, you’re the best! I can’t believe we’re gonna get to fuck that little blonde fox!”
“And we can do ANY thing we want?” asked Derwin. “In ANY hole we want?”
“You got it!” said Carson. “I gave Andy two grand. After this bar closes, she’s all ours!”
The men quickly shut up as Rachel brought them another round of drinks. If only Rachel could know the twisted thoughts going through the minds of the five men as she set their drinks on the table.
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It was now almost closing time. The bar had cleared out except for a few stragglers here and there. And the crew in the pool room. For them, it seemed the party was just kicking into high gear. They had ordered several rounds for last call and showed no signs of slowing down.
Andy sent Angie and Brooke home early, which didn’t bother them. Rachel was busy cashing out and doing all the closing up activities. She had helped close up before and was familiar with the routine. She had just never had to do it all herself.
Andy told her he was going to bed. He lived in an apartment above the bar, so he wasn’t too far away if she needed him.
Finally, Rachel was finished and was ready to turn the lights out and lock the doors. She had already shut off the “OPEN” sign. But there was one last job to do. Get Carson and his men out of the bar!
Andy told her earlier, that seeing as how they were spending so much money in the place, to let them party right up until she was ready to leave. He didn’t normally let people do that.
She walked back to the pool room where they were still hanging out. She could hear the hooting and hollering long before she got to the doorway.
“Hey Rachel!” Tad whooped as he saw the blonde hottie enter the room. “Come back to party with us?”
“No,” she said firmly. “I came in here to tell you guys it’s time to pack it up and get out. I’m ready to lock the doors.”
“Oh come on,” whined Owen. “We still have a few drinks left!”
“Well, you’ve had more than enough time to finish them,” said Rachel. “Now come on, you got two minutes to get out of here. I’m tired and I want to go to bed!”
“We were hoping you would have another game of pool with us,” said Carson.
“Yeah, but this time we thought maybe we’d use your holes!” said Derwin with a sick laugh.
Rachel began to feel a bit uneasy. The five large men were forming a semi-circle around her.
“Come on, Rachel, just one little game,” said Bruce, licking his lips.
“Okay, that is enough!” snapped Rachel as she began to back towards the doorway. She felt herself getting flustered. “You guys had better get out of here before…..before….”
“Before what, honey?” asked Carson.
Rachel gathered her composure and tried to make herself as tall as she could.
“I’ll call Andy down here!” she said defiantly.
“Your fat-ass boss? We ain’t scared of him!” Bruce sneered.
“Nope, but I think you oughtta be scared of us,” said Owen with an evil chuckle as he grabbed at his crotch.
Rachel didn’t like this. This was a situation she had always been warned about by the other waitresses. And one of the reasons there was always two people doing closing! Rachel considered it odd she was asked to close up by herself, but didn’t think too much of it. She knew Andy would be around if she needed help. Like now!
“Get ‘er boys!” said Carson.
With a panicked look on her face, Rachel spun around to run from the room. Her right ankle twisted and the heel on her shoe broke, sending her sprawling on the floor. The men were on her like a pack of dogs.
Tad was the first to reach her. He pulled her to her feet, squeezing her breasts through her shirt.
“Mmmmm, those babies feel really good!” he said.
He lifted her like a rag doll and tossed her to Carson, who caught her and shoved a rough hand between her legs. Rachel squealed as he squeezed her crotch.
“LET ME GO! STOP IT!”
“I wanna bury my cock in that tight little snatch!” Carson hissed in her ear.
“NOOOOOOOOO!”
Carson pushed her over to Bruce. The large man wrapped his thick arms around Rachel and carried her to the pool table. She kicked and flailed furiously. As he threw her down on her back, Derwin and Owen grabbed her arms and pinned them down.
“ANDYYYYYYYY! ANDYYYYYYY! HELP ME!” Rachel screamed frantically.
Tad grabbed the front of Rachel’s blouse and ripped it open, the buttons flying in all directions. Tad continued to pull on it, the thin fabric tearing completely away from her body. Tad reached in and grabbed the large wad of bills Rachel had tucked inside her bra.
“Holy crap, girl! You made pretty good on tips tonight,” he said, admiring the large roll of money. He set it on a table.
“Don’t worry, you can have it back after we’re finished.”
While that was happening, Bruce yanked open the snap on her shorts. Rachel was a fighter and she was kicking like crazy, making it hard for him to get her shorts down.
“Tad! Give me a hand!” he yelled.
Between the two of them, they started yanking and pulling on her shorts, getting them down past her hips. Their hearts raced as they glimpsed the tops of her silky smooth thighs.
‘NOOOO! NOOOO! LET ME GO!” Rachel bawled.
As they got her shorts to her knees, they both yanked as hard as they could and the shorts just ripped in half. Bruce tossed the tattered garment on the floor. Tad had grabbed her white lacy panties and separated them from her with a couple of hard tugs. The sound of the tearing panties was loud in the room as they came off her in two pieces. She screamed loudly again.
“ANDYYYYYY!”
“Heh, heh! Nobody here to help you, little girl!” Carson gloated as he watched his men strip the helpless girl on top of the pool table.
“Sonuvabitch, she’s got a sweet body!” said Derwin.
“Gonna have a lot of fun fucking this honey!” said Bruce.
The guys were all checking out Rachel’s sweet, shaved pussy as Tad unsnapped the front of her bra and pulled the cups away from her size 32 breasts.
“Oh, man, those are nice!” he said.
The bra joined her panties and the rest of her torn clothes on the floor. Carson began to unbuckle his pants.
“It’s time for some fuckin’!” he said.
STAY TUNED FOR MORE ACTION IN CH. 5!
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I think I would have added the next part here if I were you. I generally love cliffhangers, but this one felt like it was too short. The mood and situation were well described, but you should have either expanded on it more or included more action here.
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CHAPTER 5:
Rachel screamed wildly as he approached the pool table.
“HELLLLP!!!! SOMEONE HELLLLLPPP!” Rachel continued to wail.
This was like a nightmare, something from a movie. But it was all too real!
Carson grabbed her left ankle and pulled off her shoe.
“I like bitches to be totally naked when I fuck ‘em! That includes the shoes,“ said Carson.
He grabbed her other shoe and pulled it off too.
“Now get ‘er legs spread!”
Tad and Bruce grabbed her ankles and pulled her legs wide apart. Derwin and Owen kept hold of her wrists.
Rachel’s face was twisted up in terror as she watched Carson climb onto the pool table between her outstretched legs. His large erection jutted from between his legs, the head gleaming with pre-cum.
“Man, oh, man, this is gonna be good!” said Owen.
Carson gripped Rachel’s slender hips and lined himself up at her pussy entrance. With a savage buck of his hips he was inside her!
“AAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! AAAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEE!”
“Whoa, she’s a screamer!” chuckled Tad.
Rachel was not a virgin. She had lost her cherry years ago to a smooth-talking boy in high school.
During her time at college she had hooked up a few times with hot guys. But she had not had sex since she moved back home to Rutler five months ago.
Oh sure, a few guys she had went to school with, and who were still hanging around town, had hit her up for dates when they found out she was back at home. But she had politely turned them down. Rachel was not interested in getting involved with ANY of the guys in Rutler.
So now, having sex forced upon her, was proving to be very painful! It had been a while since Rachel had had a cock inside her. And especially not one being driven into her by a large brutal man!
Rachel continued to scream as Carson laid his weight onto her, her pussy struggling to stretch around his rock-hard shaft. She felt his hot, alcohol-laden breath against her face. The other men cheered him on, exhorting him to fuck her harder.
Carson’s hips worked back and forth, his body slapping loudly against the cute blonde girl. His big hands were wrapped around her tiny waist, pulling her back against him with every thrust.
Carson looked down at Rachel, admiring her sweet, curvy body. God! She looked good! He couldn’t recall being this excited in a long time to fuck a girl this pretty.
As a younger man, travelling around the country and working construction jobs, he had participated in many gang rapes. Going into a small town, hitting on the local girls, inviting them out to a party. Many of the dumb little sluts had thought it exciting to have these rough and tumble strangers coming to their sleepy little towns.
That is, until they had one of these girls pinned down and laying the hot cocks to her!
It had eventually caught up to Carson. He spent 5 years in a state prison for a gang rape he was involved with in Kansas. He was 30 when he got out and was 36 now.
Carson could feel his nuts swelling and knew a big load was on its way. Cum on her belly or let loose inside her? Carson decided it was going inside! There was no feeling in the world like a tight pussy clamping down on his cock when he let loose.
Rachel saw the look on his face as he sped up his thrusts. She knew what he was getting ready for.
“NO! NOT IN ME! PLEASSSSSSSE!”
“Too late, darlin’,” he said as his whole body shuddered in the midst of a powerful orgasm.
“OH FUCK!” he yelled out as his dick went rigid inside Rachel and a torrent of cum shot into her.
Rachel let out a wild scream. What a nightmare to have this horrible man rape her and then cum inside her as well! Carson quickly pulled out of her and wiped his slimy dick using a piece of Rachel’s ripped blouse.
“I’m next!” yelled Tad.
“Uh, uh!” said Carson sternly. He pointed to Bruce.
“He’s senior guy on the crew after me. He goes next!”
“All right!” yelled Bruce.
Carson took over holding Rachel’s leg and Bruce dropped his pants exposing his thick hard-on.
“UUUHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” he grunted as he impaled Rachel with his rape tool and began a solid pounding of her cunt.
Bruce was 32, just a little younger than Carson. He was married, but no way was he going to say ’NO’ to fucking a girl as young and hot as Rachel. His wife had been a looker back when he married her 10 years ago, but now having popped out a couple kids, she’d sort of let herself go. Anytime he had a chance to dig into some fresh meat, especially someone as sweet and delectable as Rachel, well, he was going for it! He didn’t give a shit what his wife said.
“Jesus…..Christ……you’re……tight……girlie!” he said as he fucked her.
He was slamming in, pulling back and slamming in. Just a rough, brutal fuck!
His callused hands kneaded and groped at her soft tits.
“ANDY! FOR GOD’S SAKE HELLLLLLLPPPPPPPP!” Rachel called out again.
She couldn’t understand where the hell Andy was. Surely he could hear her screams and her calls for help. When he was upstairs in his apartment, sometimes he would complain to the waitresses that the jukebox was too loud. And Rachel knew he wasn’t a very sound sleeper. He HAD to be able to hear what was going on! And he’d also be able to see what was going on with the video surveillance cameras in the bar which were linked to a computer in his apartment so he could always see what was going on downstairs. So why the hell wasn’t he coming to help her?
Well, probably because Andy was busy. Little did Rachel know, Andy was very intently watching what was going on downstairs! He was sitting in a chair at his computer desk, his fat cock in his hand, furiously stroking as he watched his hot waitress being assaulted on a pool table.
“Sonuvabitch,” he muttered to himself, a small trickle of slobber on his chin. “This is better than any fuckin’ porno I’ve ever seen!”
First, he had excitedly witnessed Rachel being forcibly stripped of her clothes. That right there had almost caused him to blow a load, getting to see for the first time, Rachel in all her naked glory! She was everything he had ever expected and more. Rachel wasn’t the only one of his waitresses he had ever seen naked, but she was, by far, the best!
Now, Andy was watching as first Carson, and now Bruce, slammed their raging cocks into her tight cunt. Soon he knew, it would be his turn! His heart pounded with the anticipation.
Downstairs, Bruce was just pulling out of Rachel. He had spent a large load of spooge into the sobbing girl and now climbed off the table, sweat running down his face.
“Fuckin’ awesome!” he panted.
“Owen, you’re up!” said Carson.
Bruce took hold of Rachel’s arm and Owen quickly climbed on the pool table, his grubby blue jeans down around his knees. The 29 year-old guided the head of his swollen rod up to Rachel’s pussy lips. Rachel’s tortured pussy was forcibly stretched open again as Owen penetrated her.
“Cock-teasin’ little bitch!” he growled. “Gonna fuck you good!”
He proceeded to make good on his promise as he lowered his wiry body onto her, his hands slipping under her ass and lifting her up. The table shook as Owen thrust in and out, his cock making squishing noises inside her.
All night, he had been dreaming about his cock ploughing inside her tight depths, now it was happening! She was a great fuck!
He came sooner than he wanted. Her pussy felt so good, squeezed around his turgid shaft. He gave her one…two…..three more powerful thrusts and then came, the wonderful sensation of semen racing up his shaft and exploding from the tip of his cock. Owen held himself inside Rachel, his dick throbbing and pulsing.
“Just for you sweetie,” he panted breathlessly.
He leaned down and kissed her on her lips. She spit back at him.
“G-get off me, pig!” she said.
Owen cocked his hand back to slap her, but Carson grabbed him.
“NO!” he snapped. “There won’t be any of that shit!”
“But Carson!” Owen protested. “You seen what she did! We don’t put up with that shit from no bitches!”
“I saw exactly what she did,” said Carson. “But we don’t beat women. You wanna get revenge, you do it with your cock!”
A smile crept across Owen’s face as he climbed off Rachel. He pointed at her with a menacing finger.
“Yeah, what he said! I’ll get my revenge on you, you little slut! With my cock!”
Carson then directed for Derwin to have his turn. He and Owen switched places and Derwin pulled down his pants, showing off his thick, heavily veined cock.
“Pl-please……..no……n-no…….more!” Rachel whimpered.
Derwin just ignored her as he climbed on the pool table. He was going to fuck her and frankly, the more she protested the hornier he got. He got himself settled between her thighs and slowly pushed into her, grinning as he watched his schlong disappear between her pussy lips.
Derwin, like Carson, had also spent time in jail for the crime of rape. He went to jail when he was 21. He had gotten in with a bad gang in the city and one night they robbed a fast food joint. A really cute 18 year-old girl had been working behind the counter on the evening shift.
The leader of Derwin’s gang, pissed because they hadn’t gotten a lot of money from the tills, took the cute girl with them.
He said he was taking her in trade. They had taken turns that night, four of them, raping her over and over in the backseat of their car. It was a night Derwin would never forget. Just like tonight!
He had gotten married when he got out of jail a year ago, to a girl he’d known since high school. But Derwin was not a loyal husband. Working away from home, when Derwin found some fucking, he took it! Married or not!
Rachel was just the kind of girl he liked, young and hot! He raped her with reckless abandon, his cock working in and out of her like a piston. He was vaguely aware she was crying, but he didn’t really care. Like he cared whether or not he was hurting her or not? All the money he’d spent in this place tonight, getting drunk? Fucking the hot waitress was something he deserved!
He marveled at her tightness, it felt so fucking good! A lot of times, it was some loose old bar skank they ended up banging after the bar closed. But to get a prime piece of meat like this……wow!
Derwin was going to make it last. Well, try anyways! But as her tight pussy wrapped around his cock, he realized he could no longer control himself. It was like she was milking him and soon he had to give into his animal urges. He let out a loud groan of pleasure as his balls poured their contents into the poor girl. It seemed like his cock would never stop spurting, but finally it did.
Derwin pulled out, a large gob of jizz still hanging from the tip of his dick. Carson tossed him some of Rachel’s clothing to wipe himself.
“All right! My turn!” whooped Tad. He let Derwin take hold of Rachel’s leg he was holding. Tad dropped his pants and had his cock out in a flash. He stroked it slowly, smearing the pre-cum around the head.
“Oh, I’ve been waiting for you, Rachel,” he snickered. “I haven’t been fucked in about 3 weeks and I’m long overdue!”
Tad crawled onto the pool table, sliding his hands along Rachel’s smooth thighs. He rubbed the head of his dick across her red, swollen pussy lips before plunging into her.
“AAAAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” Rachel squealed.
The 22 year-old began a hard, powerful fuck, driving his cock in and out of her forcefully. He was making sure all eightinches of his fuck weapon were buried in her with each thrust. His balls slapped against her ass.
“UUUHHHHH……UUUHHHH…..UUUUHHHH….UUUHHHH!” Tad’s grunting and huffing drowned out Rachel’s crying and whimpering.
He dug his hands into Rachel’s butt cheeks and pulled her up against him. It felt awesome, her firm stomach pressed against his as he powered his cock in and out of her. It was such a shame, he thought! If circumstances had been different, he could have just taken her back to his motel room and the two of them could have had a session of wild fucking. But Rachel had to play the uppity little bitch and so now, she was gonna get it hard!
Tad had a girlfriend back home, a pretty girl by the name of Amy. Rachel sort of reminded him of her. Amy was great in the sack, and Tad certainly couldn’t complain about the quality of sex he got from her. But like he had said earlier, it was three weeks since he had last been fucked!
He felt a little twinge of guilt about not being loyal to Amy, but screw it, he thought.
He was a man and a man had urges that just couldn’t be ignored. When he got home, he would make sure Amy got all the attention she deserved. But tonight……he was being selfish and satisfying himself.
Tad’s powerful cock hammered Rachel’s. He couldn’t recall fucking a girl this hard in a long time. The walls of her cunt were wrapped around him like a glove, his cock filling her completely.
“UUUUNNNNNHHHHH……..UUUUNNNNNNHHHHHH!” he groaned with satisfaction as he finally came. Rachel stared vacantly at the ceiling as she felt more wetness inside her. It terrified her, the horrible prospect of one of these brutes getting her pregnant.
CONTINUED IN CH. 6!
Rachel screamed wildly as he approached the pool table.
“HELLLLP!!!! SOMEONE HELLLLLPPP!” Rachel continued to wail.
This was like a nightmare, something from a movie. But it was all too real!
Carson grabbed her left ankle and pulled off her shoe.
“I like bitches to be totally naked when I fuck ‘em! That includes the shoes,“ said Carson.
He grabbed her other shoe and pulled it off too.
“Now get ‘er legs spread!”
Tad and Bruce grabbed her ankles and pulled her legs wide apart. Derwin and Owen kept hold of her wrists.
Rachel’s face was twisted up in terror as she watched Carson climb onto the pool table between her outstretched legs. His large erection jutted from between his legs, the head gleaming with pre-cum.
“Man, oh, man, this is gonna be good!” said Owen.
Carson gripped Rachel’s slender hips and lined himself up at her pussy entrance. With a savage buck of his hips he was inside her!
“AAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! AAAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEE!”
“Whoa, she’s a screamer!” chuckled Tad.
Rachel was not a virgin. She had lost her cherry years ago to a smooth-talking boy in high school.
During her time at college she had hooked up a few times with hot guys. But she had not had sex since she moved back home to Rutler five months ago.
Oh sure, a few guys she had went to school with, and who were still hanging around town, had hit her up for dates when they found out she was back at home. But she had politely turned them down. Rachel was not interested in getting involved with ANY of the guys in Rutler.
So now, having sex forced upon her, was proving to be very painful! It had been a while since Rachel had had a cock inside her. And especially not one being driven into her by a large brutal man!
Rachel continued to scream as Carson laid his weight onto her, her pussy struggling to stretch around his rock-hard shaft. She felt his hot, alcohol-laden breath against her face. The other men cheered him on, exhorting him to fuck her harder.
Carson’s hips worked back and forth, his body slapping loudly against the cute blonde girl. His big hands were wrapped around her tiny waist, pulling her back against him with every thrust.
Carson looked down at Rachel, admiring her sweet, curvy body. God! She looked good! He couldn’t recall being this excited in a long time to fuck a girl this pretty.
As a younger man, travelling around the country and working construction jobs, he had participated in many gang rapes. Going into a small town, hitting on the local girls, inviting them out to a party. Many of the dumb little sluts had thought it exciting to have these rough and tumble strangers coming to their sleepy little towns.
That is, until they had one of these girls pinned down and laying the hot cocks to her!
It had eventually caught up to Carson. He spent 5 years in a state prison for a gang rape he was involved with in Kansas. He was 30 when he got out and was 36 now.
Carson could feel his nuts swelling and knew a big load was on its way. Cum on her belly or let loose inside her? Carson decided it was going inside! There was no feeling in the world like a tight pussy clamping down on his cock when he let loose.
Rachel saw the look on his face as he sped up his thrusts. She knew what he was getting ready for.
“NO! NOT IN ME! PLEASSSSSSSE!”
“Too late, darlin’,” he said as his whole body shuddered in the midst of a powerful orgasm.
“OH FUCK!” he yelled out as his dick went rigid inside Rachel and a torrent of cum shot into her.
Rachel let out a wild scream. What a nightmare to have this horrible man rape her and then cum inside her as well! Carson quickly pulled out of her and wiped his slimy dick using a piece of Rachel’s ripped blouse.
“I’m next!” yelled Tad.
“Uh, uh!” said Carson sternly. He pointed to Bruce.
“He’s senior guy on the crew after me. He goes next!”
“All right!” yelled Bruce.
Carson took over holding Rachel’s leg and Bruce dropped his pants exposing his thick hard-on.
“UUUHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” he grunted as he impaled Rachel with his rape tool and began a solid pounding of her cunt.
Bruce was 32, just a little younger than Carson. He was married, but no way was he going to say ’NO’ to fucking a girl as young and hot as Rachel. His wife had been a looker back when he married her 10 years ago, but now having popped out a couple kids, she’d sort of let herself go. Anytime he had a chance to dig into some fresh meat, especially someone as sweet and delectable as Rachel, well, he was going for it! He didn’t give a shit what his wife said.
“Jesus…..Christ……you’re……tight……girlie!” he said as he fucked her.
He was slamming in, pulling back and slamming in. Just a rough, brutal fuck!
His callused hands kneaded and groped at her soft tits.
“ANDY! FOR GOD’S SAKE HELLLLLLLPPPPPPPP!” Rachel called out again.
She couldn’t understand where the hell Andy was. Surely he could hear her screams and her calls for help. When he was upstairs in his apartment, sometimes he would complain to the waitresses that the jukebox was too loud. And Rachel knew he wasn’t a very sound sleeper. He HAD to be able to hear what was going on! And he’d also be able to see what was going on with the video surveillance cameras in the bar which were linked to a computer in his apartment so he could always see what was going on downstairs. So why the hell wasn’t he coming to help her?
Well, probably because Andy was busy. Little did Rachel know, Andy was very intently watching what was going on downstairs! He was sitting in a chair at his computer desk, his fat cock in his hand, furiously stroking as he watched his hot waitress being assaulted on a pool table.
“Sonuvabitch,” he muttered to himself, a small trickle of slobber on his chin. “This is better than any fuckin’ porno I’ve ever seen!”
First, he had excitedly witnessed Rachel being forcibly stripped of her clothes. That right there had almost caused him to blow a load, getting to see for the first time, Rachel in all her naked glory! She was everything he had ever expected and more. Rachel wasn’t the only one of his waitresses he had ever seen naked, but she was, by far, the best!
Now, Andy was watching as first Carson, and now Bruce, slammed their raging cocks into her tight cunt. Soon he knew, it would be his turn! His heart pounded with the anticipation.
Downstairs, Bruce was just pulling out of Rachel. He had spent a large load of spooge into the sobbing girl and now climbed off the table, sweat running down his face.
“Fuckin’ awesome!” he panted.
“Owen, you’re up!” said Carson.
Bruce took hold of Rachel’s arm and Owen quickly climbed on the pool table, his grubby blue jeans down around his knees. The 29 year-old guided the head of his swollen rod up to Rachel’s pussy lips. Rachel’s tortured pussy was forcibly stretched open again as Owen penetrated her.
“Cock-teasin’ little bitch!” he growled. “Gonna fuck you good!”
He proceeded to make good on his promise as he lowered his wiry body onto her, his hands slipping under her ass and lifting her up. The table shook as Owen thrust in and out, his cock making squishing noises inside her.
All night, he had been dreaming about his cock ploughing inside her tight depths, now it was happening! She was a great fuck!
He came sooner than he wanted. Her pussy felt so good, squeezed around his turgid shaft. He gave her one…two…..three more powerful thrusts and then came, the wonderful sensation of semen racing up his shaft and exploding from the tip of his cock. Owen held himself inside Rachel, his dick throbbing and pulsing.
“Just for you sweetie,” he panted breathlessly.
He leaned down and kissed her on her lips. She spit back at him.
“G-get off me, pig!” she said.
Owen cocked his hand back to slap her, but Carson grabbed him.
“NO!” he snapped. “There won’t be any of that shit!”
“But Carson!” Owen protested. “You seen what she did! We don’t put up with that shit from no bitches!”
“I saw exactly what she did,” said Carson. “But we don’t beat women. You wanna get revenge, you do it with your cock!”
A smile crept across Owen’s face as he climbed off Rachel. He pointed at her with a menacing finger.
“Yeah, what he said! I’ll get my revenge on you, you little slut! With my cock!”
Carson then directed for Derwin to have his turn. He and Owen switched places and Derwin pulled down his pants, showing off his thick, heavily veined cock.
“Pl-please……..no……n-no…….more!” Rachel whimpered.
Derwin just ignored her as he climbed on the pool table. He was going to fuck her and frankly, the more she protested the hornier he got. He got himself settled between her thighs and slowly pushed into her, grinning as he watched his schlong disappear between her pussy lips.
Derwin, like Carson, had also spent time in jail for the crime of rape. He went to jail when he was 21. He had gotten in with a bad gang in the city and one night they robbed a fast food joint. A really cute 18 year-old girl had been working behind the counter on the evening shift.
The leader of Derwin’s gang, pissed because they hadn’t gotten a lot of money from the tills, took the cute girl with them.
He said he was taking her in trade. They had taken turns that night, four of them, raping her over and over in the backseat of their car. It was a night Derwin would never forget. Just like tonight!
He had gotten married when he got out of jail a year ago, to a girl he’d known since high school. But Derwin was not a loyal husband. Working away from home, when Derwin found some fucking, he took it! Married or not!
Rachel was just the kind of girl he liked, young and hot! He raped her with reckless abandon, his cock working in and out of her like a piston. He was vaguely aware she was crying, but he didn’t really care. Like he cared whether or not he was hurting her or not? All the money he’d spent in this place tonight, getting drunk? Fucking the hot waitress was something he deserved!
He marveled at her tightness, it felt so fucking good! A lot of times, it was some loose old bar skank they ended up banging after the bar closed. But to get a prime piece of meat like this……wow!
Derwin was going to make it last. Well, try anyways! But as her tight pussy wrapped around his cock, he realized he could no longer control himself. It was like she was milking him and soon he had to give into his animal urges. He let out a loud groan of pleasure as his balls poured their contents into the poor girl. It seemed like his cock would never stop spurting, but finally it did.
Derwin pulled out, a large gob of jizz still hanging from the tip of his dick. Carson tossed him some of Rachel’s clothing to wipe himself.
“All right! My turn!” whooped Tad. He let Derwin take hold of Rachel’s leg he was holding. Tad dropped his pants and had his cock out in a flash. He stroked it slowly, smearing the pre-cum around the head.
“Oh, I’ve been waiting for you, Rachel,” he snickered. “I haven’t been fucked in about 3 weeks and I’m long overdue!”
Tad crawled onto the pool table, sliding his hands along Rachel’s smooth thighs. He rubbed the head of his dick across her red, swollen pussy lips before plunging into her.
“AAAAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” Rachel squealed.
The 22 year-old began a hard, powerful fuck, driving his cock in and out of her forcefully. He was making sure all eightinches of his fuck weapon were buried in her with each thrust. His balls slapped against her ass.
“UUUHHHHH……UUUHHHH…..UUUUHHHH….UUUHHHH!” Tad’s grunting and huffing drowned out Rachel’s crying and whimpering.
He dug his hands into Rachel’s butt cheeks and pulled her up against him. It felt awesome, her firm stomach pressed against his as he powered his cock in and out of her. It was such a shame, he thought! If circumstances had been different, he could have just taken her back to his motel room and the two of them could have had a session of wild fucking. But Rachel had to play the uppity little bitch and so now, she was gonna get it hard!
Tad had a girlfriend back home, a pretty girl by the name of Amy. Rachel sort of reminded him of her. Amy was great in the sack, and Tad certainly couldn’t complain about the quality of sex he got from her. But like he had said earlier, it was three weeks since he had last been fucked!
He felt a little twinge of guilt about not being loyal to Amy, but screw it, he thought.
He was a man and a man had urges that just couldn’t be ignored. When he got home, he would make sure Amy got all the attention she deserved. But tonight……he was being selfish and satisfying himself.
Tad’s powerful cock hammered Rachel’s. He couldn’t recall fucking a girl this hard in a long time. The walls of her cunt were wrapped around him like a glove, his cock filling her completely.
“UUUUNNNNNHHHHH……..UUUUNNNNNNHHHHHH!” he groaned with satisfaction as he finally came. Rachel stared vacantly at the ceiling as she felt more wetness inside her. It terrified her, the horrible prospect of one of these brutes getting her pregnant.
CONTINUED IN CH. 6!
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CHAPTER 6:
This chapter will contain non-consensual rape, anal rape , and forced oral sex.
Tad had waited until his dick stopped spasming and started to pull out of Rachel. She suddenly caught movement out of the corner of her eye, near the doorway of the pool room. It was Andy!
“Well, well, looked who’s joined us?” asked Carson. “It looks like your boss, Rachel. He’s gonna be mad at you, finding you laying down on the job!”
All the men laughed.
“AAANNNNNDDDYYYYYYY!” she called out. “HELLLLLLP!”
Andy’s cock was hard as granite as he entered the room and saw Rachel stretched out on the top of a pool table, still held down by four guys. Tad was just finishing up and climbing off her.
“Oh, I’m here to help, all right,” he said with a sick grin. “You fellas just keep holding her right there. Ol’ Andy’s about to get what he’s been waiting for!”
The look on Rachel’s face was priceless as she suddenly realized what Andy was there for. He wasn’t going to help her! He was going to join the rest of these animals!
Andy stood at the end of the pool table and dropped his pants, showing a fat, thick cock standing at attention. It had a large purple head the size of a golf ball and veins stood out along the length of the shaft.
Andy told Carson and Derwin to let go of Rachel’s legs. He grabbed her by the hips and pulled her to the edge of the table so her legs were dangling over the edge. Owen and Bruce continued to hold her arms.
“Oh Rachel, baby,” Andy said, licking his lips as he gazed down at her reddened and swollen pussy lips. Her abused cunt still looked damn good, even after being savagely fucked by the five other men. Cum and a small bit of blood oozed from it.
“I have waited for this moment since the day you walked into my office! Been dyin’ to get inside that sweet little hole of yers!”
Using Rachel’s ripped shorts, Andy wiped away some of the excess cum dripping out of her and smeared on her inner thighs. Then with his large sweaty hands, he lifted her legs up and placed them on his shoulders.
“NO! A-Andy! Please! NO!” Rachel begged as she shook her head from side to side.
It was bad enough being raped by these other men, but now for it to happen from the one man she thought could help her…..! She always knew Andy was a sexist pig, but it had always seemed so harmless. She had never imagined he would actually go through with something like this!
Rachel’s eyes rolled into the back of her head and she screamed as Andy’s thick shaft penetrated her. He pushed in about halfway and then pulled back. Then shoved in again, even harder. He let out a grunt of pleasure as his thick rod bottomed out.
“God……damn!” Andy exclaimed. He was doing it! He was fucking Rachel!
He began to slowly rape the object of his masturbation fantasies, his big hands wrapped around her thighs. His flabby ass cheeks shook and jiggled, as he worked his nasty fuck tool in and out of the blonde girl. Rachel lay there, her eyes tightly closed, her mouth wide open, letting out gasps of pain as the thick shaft stretched her open.
Andy’s fat gut pressed against her and she felt small droplets of his sweat fall on her. He was so repulsive! In and out……in and out……in and out…..! His fat dick sawed back and forth inside her, the purple head like a small fist pounding her insides.
He was so out of shape, Andy would have to slow down after every 5 or 6 thrusts and catch his breath, just holding himself inside her. Then, slowly, he would start up again. He didn’t care, though. It felt so great having his cock buried in her, he didn’t care if he was at it all night long!
FWAP!…. FWAP!……FWAP!….. FWAP!
Andy’s fat, flabby body was quite a contrast to the more wiry, muscular bodies of the construction workers.
But soon, his balls were ready to release their seed. Unlike the others, Andy had no intention of cumming inside her. He loved spraying loads on a girl’s stomach. And that was exactly what he did as he pulled his slimy dick out of Rachel and furiously stroked it.
He grinned as he watched a thick stream of spooge shoot forth and deposit itself on Rachel’s tummy. Andy continued to stroke himself, milking all the cum out of his balls that he could.
He backed away from Rachel, admiring the gobs and streaks of cum stuck to her smooth tummy. The other men released her arms and she slid off the table into a heap on the floor.
“Damn, that was some of the best fucking I’ve had in a long time!” said Andy.
“You and me both,” said Carson, slapping Andy on the back. “You laid into her good!”
“Well, like I said, I been waitin’ fer that fer a long time!” Andy replied.
“So what’s next?” asked Bruce. “We ain’t done with her yet, are we?”
“Shit, no!” said Carson. “But let’s take a break and have ourselves a drink first!”
Andy had pulled his pants back up and he went to the bar and came back with a tray of free beers for everyone.
“It’s on the house!” he chuckled.
The men sat at a table as they plotted their next move.
“I think we oughtta get some mouth action from her,” said Owen.
“Fuck yeah!” agreed Derwin. “Nothing better than some hot bitch’s mouth wrapped around a cock!”
“Hey Andy,” said Tad suddenly. “You see the mess Rachel left on your pool table? She’s left a hell of a fuckstain on it!”
Andy looked over and scowled at the large puddle of semen pooled in the middle of the table.
“You messy bitch!” he snarled at her. “A good whore would know how to keep all that inside her. Those pool tables are expensive to get re-covered!”
“I say make her lick it up!” Tad snickered.
“Good idea!” said Andy as he pulled Rachel to her feet and pushed her onto the table. “Start licking up your mess….all of it!”
“N-no……I-I c-can’t…..” she whimpered.
“You can…..and you WILL!” snapped Andy.
Rachel closed her eyes as she slowly began to lap at the slimy mess. It tasted horrid!
“Look at that ass!” said Carson as he watched her on her hands and knees. “She’s been wiggling that at us all night long! Getting us all hard as hell!”
“Then let’s do her ass!” Tad shouted out.
“Yeah!” said Carson. “ We’re gonna teach her a lesson of what happens when you shake that cute little thing around!”
“All right!” whooped Tad.
He was forever trying to get some anal action from Amy, but she would have nothing to do with it and would get quite mad at Tad every time he asked.
“Who gets her first then?” asked Bruce.
“Me, of course! I’m the boss!” snapped Carson.
“Oh, quit pulling that shit,” said Derwin drunkenly. “You got her pussy first, I think one of us should get to break in her ass!”
“Hey fellas, don’t get in a fight!” said Andy. “I’ve got an idea of what you can do. Hold on a sec.”
Andy went back to his office and came back with a large beer mug, some small scraps of paper and a pen. He handed out the scraps of paper and got each of the guys to write their names on them. Then the papers were folded up and tossed in the beer mug.
Andy closed his eyes and drew out a piece of paper. He unfolded it and read out the name.
“Derwin!”
“Hot damn! I get her first?” he exclaimed.
“Yes, you do!” said Andy.
“All right!” Derwin said as he was on his feet in a flash.
Rachel was still licking at the puddle on the pool table. Her tongue was coated in gross cum and she felt like retching but knew she had to hold it down. Andy would really lose it if she vomited all over the place.
Derwin grabbed Rachel and pulled her off the table. She was spun around so she was facing the pool table, her legs pressed against the edge.
“NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” she cried out.
Rachel had never had anal sex, although a couple of boys in college had tried to talk her into it. She had heard stories from some of the other girls about how painful it could be if you weren’t properly prepared. Being raped against the side of a pool table had to certainly fall in that category!
Derwin kicked her legs apart and pulled the firm cheeks of her ass apart. She flinched as he poured a bit of cold beer down the crack of her ass.
“Sorry, honey, but that’s all you’re gonna get fer lube!” he smirked.
Rachel tensed up as she felt the head of his cock pressed against her anal entrance. She let out another loud scream.
“Save yer screamin’ for when I get inside ya!” Derwin said. “That’s when it’s gonna hurt!”
Digging his hands into Rachel’s hips, Derwin drove his cock hard against her tight sphincter, feeling it give way. Rachel being so much shorter than Derwin, he was close to a whole foot taller than she was, he had to bend down with his knees to get his cock into the proper position.
He straightened up then, as he drove his cock into her. As he did that, he lifted Rachel’s feet right off the floor. Her head was thrown back and she screamed like she was trying to rattle the windows. It felt like a white-hot spear entering her body as Derwin slammed his dick into her shitter.
“Holy shit! What a tight hole!” he exclaimed.
He wasn’t able to shove it all the way in, the friction was too great. He backed out a bit then rammed in again. Derwin had to do that about three times, before he got his shaft buried in Rachel’s ass. Each time she screamed bloody murder. The pain was intense.
Her fingers were gripping the edge of the pool table so hard she thought they would snap off. Her whole body shook and shuddered.
“AAAAAIIIIEEEEEEEEE! NO! STOP!”
“Ain’t gonna stop when it feels this good, honey,” laughed Derwin.
He began to fuck Rachel’s ass with hard hammering thrusts. His balls slapped against the back of her legs. Sweat ran down his face from the exertion of forcing his dick in and out of her. Slowly though, she did begin to loosen up slightly, making it easier for him.
Derwin began to fuck faster, Rachel barely able to keep her feet on the floor.
“UHHHHH…….UHHHHHH……UUUUHHHHH…..YEAH……YEAH!…… I’M CUMMING!”
Derwin let out a loud yowl as his cock jerked inside Rachel’s tight depths. His hips shuddered as he unloaded inside her. It reminded him so much of the night with the girl from the Burger King.
Derwin pulled out, the head of his cock making a popping sound as it slipped free of her sphincter. He looked down at his blood and shit-streaked shaft. He used Rachel’s clothing to wipe himself clean.
“Been a long time since I popped an ass cherry,” he mused.
“And ya did a fine job!” said Carson. “So who’s next?”
Andy drew another scrap of paper. “Bruce!” he announced.
Bruce jumped up and got in position behind Rachel who was still leaning against the pool table trying to catch her breath. He pressed his hard rod between her cheeks.
“AAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE……NO……NOT AGAIN!” she screamed out.
Bruce said nothing as he pushed into her. Like Derwin, he also had to bend at the knees and brought her up off her feet as his cock drove home. He grabbed a handful of Rachel’s blonde hair and pulled her head back . Slowly, but forcefully, he worked his thick erection in and out of her.
“Shit, yeah, this feels good!” he said.
He let go of her hair and used her tits as small handles to pull her body back against him. The others cheered him on as he pounded her turd chute. By the time he came, Rachel’s screams had subsided to painful whimpers.
Bruce shot more white jizz into Rachel and pulled out. He had wanted to fuck her longer but her shit channel had been so tight and the pressure on his dick felt so good, he hadn’t been able to hold on more than 5 or 6 minutes.
“Carson!” yelled Andy as he drew another name from the beer mug.
“Okay!” whooped Carson as he finished downing his beer. “Time for some ass action! Hang onto that pool table tight, Rachel!”
She barely had time to recover from Bruce’s pounding and Carson was behind her. He rubbed his cock up and down her ass slit, lubricating the head with some of the cum oozing out of her, before he pulled her ass cheeks apart. He bent down and rammed into her.
Rachel thought her raw throat could not bring out any more screams, but one leapt out involuntarily.
“AAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!”
Carson pulled back and slammed in again, driving the air out of her lungs.
“S-S-STOP!” she bawled. “Y-You’re h-hurting me! Oh G-God…..it…..f-feels…..like y-you’re ripping…..me a-apart!”
“That’s the whole idea of an ass-fuck, sugar!” he smiled.
He twisted his hips, trying to push in as deep as he could. Carson was savage and merciless as he raped her with long, hard strokes. Rachel’s face was twisted up in an expression of absolute agony. She had never experienced such pain. She wanted to just pass out.
Carson pulled almost all the way out and rammed in again, reveling in the feeling of her tight ass muscles gripping him. He slammed her hard against the edge of the table as he felt cum spurt into her bowels.
“Whoa, that was one fine ass fuck!” he panted as he slipped out of her.
This chapter will contain non-consensual rape, anal rape , and forced oral sex.
Tad had waited until his dick stopped spasming and started to pull out of Rachel. She suddenly caught movement out of the corner of her eye, near the doorway of the pool room. It was Andy!
“Well, well, looked who’s joined us?” asked Carson. “It looks like your boss, Rachel. He’s gonna be mad at you, finding you laying down on the job!”
All the men laughed.
“AAANNNNNDDDYYYYYYY!” she called out. “HELLLLLLP!”
Andy’s cock was hard as granite as he entered the room and saw Rachel stretched out on the top of a pool table, still held down by four guys. Tad was just finishing up and climbing off her.
“Oh, I’m here to help, all right,” he said with a sick grin. “You fellas just keep holding her right there. Ol’ Andy’s about to get what he’s been waiting for!”
The look on Rachel’s face was priceless as she suddenly realized what Andy was there for. He wasn’t going to help her! He was going to join the rest of these animals!
Andy stood at the end of the pool table and dropped his pants, showing a fat, thick cock standing at attention. It had a large purple head the size of a golf ball and veins stood out along the length of the shaft.
Andy told Carson and Derwin to let go of Rachel’s legs. He grabbed her by the hips and pulled her to the edge of the table so her legs were dangling over the edge. Owen and Bruce continued to hold her arms.
“Oh Rachel, baby,” Andy said, licking his lips as he gazed down at her reddened and swollen pussy lips. Her abused cunt still looked damn good, even after being savagely fucked by the five other men. Cum and a small bit of blood oozed from it.
“I have waited for this moment since the day you walked into my office! Been dyin’ to get inside that sweet little hole of yers!”
Using Rachel’s ripped shorts, Andy wiped away some of the excess cum dripping out of her and smeared on her inner thighs. Then with his large sweaty hands, he lifted her legs up and placed them on his shoulders.
“NO! A-Andy! Please! NO!” Rachel begged as she shook her head from side to side.
It was bad enough being raped by these other men, but now for it to happen from the one man she thought could help her…..! She always knew Andy was a sexist pig, but it had always seemed so harmless. She had never imagined he would actually go through with something like this!
Rachel’s eyes rolled into the back of her head and she screamed as Andy’s thick shaft penetrated her. He pushed in about halfway and then pulled back. Then shoved in again, even harder. He let out a grunt of pleasure as his thick rod bottomed out.
“God……damn!” Andy exclaimed. He was doing it! He was fucking Rachel!
He began to slowly rape the object of his masturbation fantasies, his big hands wrapped around her thighs. His flabby ass cheeks shook and jiggled, as he worked his nasty fuck tool in and out of the blonde girl. Rachel lay there, her eyes tightly closed, her mouth wide open, letting out gasps of pain as the thick shaft stretched her open.
Andy’s fat gut pressed against her and she felt small droplets of his sweat fall on her. He was so repulsive! In and out……in and out……in and out…..! His fat dick sawed back and forth inside her, the purple head like a small fist pounding her insides.
He was so out of shape, Andy would have to slow down after every 5 or 6 thrusts and catch his breath, just holding himself inside her. Then, slowly, he would start up again. He didn’t care, though. It felt so great having his cock buried in her, he didn’t care if he was at it all night long!
FWAP!…. FWAP!……FWAP!….. FWAP!
Andy’s fat, flabby body was quite a contrast to the more wiry, muscular bodies of the construction workers.
But soon, his balls were ready to release their seed. Unlike the others, Andy had no intention of cumming inside her. He loved spraying loads on a girl’s stomach. And that was exactly what he did as he pulled his slimy dick out of Rachel and furiously stroked it.
He grinned as he watched a thick stream of spooge shoot forth and deposit itself on Rachel’s tummy. Andy continued to stroke himself, milking all the cum out of his balls that he could.
He backed away from Rachel, admiring the gobs and streaks of cum stuck to her smooth tummy. The other men released her arms and she slid off the table into a heap on the floor.
“Damn, that was some of the best fucking I’ve had in a long time!” said Andy.
“You and me both,” said Carson, slapping Andy on the back. “You laid into her good!”
“Well, like I said, I been waitin’ fer that fer a long time!” Andy replied.
“So what’s next?” asked Bruce. “We ain’t done with her yet, are we?”
“Shit, no!” said Carson. “But let’s take a break and have ourselves a drink first!”
Andy had pulled his pants back up and he went to the bar and came back with a tray of free beers for everyone.
“It’s on the house!” he chuckled.
The men sat at a table as they plotted their next move.
“I think we oughtta get some mouth action from her,” said Owen.
“Fuck yeah!” agreed Derwin. “Nothing better than some hot bitch’s mouth wrapped around a cock!”
“Hey Andy,” said Tad suddenly. “You see the mess Rachel left on your pool table? She’s left a hell of a fuckstain on it!”
Andy looked over and scowled at the large puddle of semen pooled in the middle of the table.
“You messy bitch!” he snarled at her. “A good whore would know how to keep all that inside her. Those pool tables are expensive to get re-covered!”
“I say make her lick it up!” Tad snickered.
“Good idea!” said Andy as he pulled Rachel to her feet and pushed her onto the table. “Start licking up your mess….all of it!”
“N-no……I-I c-can’t…..” she whimpered.
“You can…..and you WILL!” snapped Andy.
Rachel closed her eyes as she slowly began to lap at the slimy mess. It tasted horrid!
“Look at that ass!” said Carson as he watched her on her hands and knees. “She’s been wiggling that at us all night long! Getting us all hard as hell!”
“Then let’s do her ass!” Tad shouted out.
“Yeah!” said Carson. “ We’re gonna teach her a lesson of what happens when you shake that cute little thing around!”
“All right!” whooped Tad.
He was forever trying to get some anal action from Amy, but she would have nothing to do with it and would get quite mad at Tad every time he asked.
“Who gets her first then?” asked Bruce.
“Me, of course! I’m the boss!” snapped Carson.
“Oh, quit pulling that shit,” said Derwin drunkenly. “You got her pussy first, I think one of us should get to break in her ass!”
“Hey fellas, don’t get in a fight!” said Andy. “I’ve got an idea of what you can do. Hold on a sec.”
Andy went back to his office and came back with a large beer mug, some small scraps of paper and a pen. He handed out the scraps of paper and got each of the guys to write their names on them. Then the papers were folded up and tossed in the beer mug.
Andy closed his eyes and drew out a piece of paper. He unfolded it and read out the name.
“Derwin!”
“Hot damn! I get her first?” he exclaimed.
“Yes, you do!” said Andy.
“All right!” Derwin said as he was on his feet in a flash.
Rachel was still licking at the puddle on the pool table. Her tongue was coated in gross cum and she felt like retching but knew she had to hold it down. Andy would really lose it if she vomited all over the place.
Derwin grabbed Rachel and pulled her off the table. She was spun around so she was facing the pool table, her legs pressed against the edge.
“NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” she cried out.
Rachel had never had anal sex, although a couple of boys in college had tried to talk her into it. She had heard stories from some of the other girls about how painful it could be if you weren’t properly prepared. Being raped against the side of a pool table had to certainly fall in that category!
Derwin kicked her legs apart and pulled the firm cheeks of her ass apart. She flinched as he poured a bit of cold beer down the crack of her ass.
“Sorry, honey, but that’s all you’re gonna get fer lube!” he smirked.
Rachel tensed up as she felt the head of his cock pressed against her anal entrance. She let out another loud scream.
“Save yer screamin’ for when I get inside ya!” Derwin said. “That’s when it’s gonna hurt!”
Digging his hands into Rachel’s hips, Derwin drove his cock hard against her tight sphincter, feeling it give way. Rachel being so much shorter than Derwin, he was close to a whole foot taller than she was, he had to bend down with his knees to get his cock into the proper position.
He straightened up then, as he drove his cock into her. As he did that, he lifted Rachel’s feet right off the floor. Her head was thrown back and she screamed like she was trying to rattle the windows. It felt like a white-hot spear entering her body as Derwin slammed his dick into her shitter.
“Holy shit! What a tight hole!” he exclaimed.
He wasn’t able to shove it all the way in, the friction was too great. He backed out a bit then rammed in again. Derwin had to do that about three times, before he got his shaft buried in Rachel’s ass. Each time she screamed bloody murder. The pain was intense.
Her fingers were gripping the edge of the pool table so hard she thought they would snap off. Her whole body shook and shuddered.
“AAAAAIIIIEEEEEEEEE! NO! STOP!”
“Ain’t gonna stop when it feels this good, honey,” laughed Derwin.
He began to fuck Rachel’s ass with hard hammering thrusts. His balls slapped against the back of her legs. Sweat ran down his face from the exertion of forcing his dick in and out of her. Slowly though, she did begin to loosen up slightly, making it easier for him.
Derwin began to fuck faster, Rachel barely able to keep her feet on the floor.
“UHHHHH…….UHHHHHH……UUUUHHHHH…..YEAH……YEAH!…… I’M CUMMING!”
Derwin let out a loud yowl as his cock jerked inside Rachel’s tight depths. His hips shuddered as he unloaded inside her. It reminded him so much of the night with the girl from the Burger King.
Derwin pulled out, the head of his cock making a popping sound as it slipped free of her sphincter. He looked down at his blood and shit-streaked shaft. He used Rachel’s clothing to wipe himself clean.
“Been a long time since I popped an ass cherry,” he mused.
“And ya did a fine job!” said Carson. “So who’s next?”
Andy drew another scrap of paper. “Bruce!” he announced.
Bruce jumped up and got in position behind Rachel who was still leaning against the pool table trying to catch her breath. He pressed his hard rod between her cheeks.
“AAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE……NO……NOT AGAIN!” she screamed out.
Bruce said nothing as he pushed into her. Like Derwin, he also had to bend at the knees and brought her up off her feet as his cock drove home. He grabbed a handful of Rachel’s blonde hair and pulled her head back . Slowly, but forcefully, he worked his thick erection in and out of her.
“Shit, yeah, this feels good!” he said.
He let go of her hair and used her tits as small handles to pull her body back against him. The others cheered him on as he pounded her turd chute. By the time he came, Rachel’s screams had subsided to painful whimpers.
Bruce shot more white jizz into Rachel and pulled out. He had wanted to fuck her longer but her shit channel had been so tight and the pressure on his dick felt so good, he hadn’t been able to hold on more than 5 or 6 minutes.
“Carson!” yelled Andy as he drew another name from the beer mug.
“Okay!” whooped Carson as he finished downing his beer. “Time for some ass action! Hang onto that pool table tight, Rachel!”
She barely had time to recover from Bruce’s pounding and Carson was behind her. He rubbed his cock up and down her ass slit, lubricating the head with some of the cum oozing out of her, before he pulled her ass cheeks apart. He bent down and rammed into her.
Rachel thought her raw throat could not bring out any more screams, but one leapt out involuntarily.
“AAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!”
Carson pulled back and slammed in again, driving the air out of her lungs.
“S-S-STOP!” she bawled. “Y-You’re h-hurting me! Oh G-God…..it…..f-feels…..like y-you’re ripping…..me a-apart!”
“That’s the whole idea of an ass-fuck, sugar!” he smiled.
He twisted his hips, trying to push in as deep as he could. Carson was savage and merciless as he raped her with long, hard strokes. Rachel’s face was twisted up in an expression of absolute agony. She had never experienced such pain. She wanted to just pass out.
Carson pulled almost all the way out and rammed in again, reveling in the feeling of her tight ass muscles gripping him. He slammed her hard against the edge of the table as he felt cum spurt into her bowels.
“Whoa, that was one fine ass fuck!” he panted as he slipped out of her.