Great series so far. Clear and concise. Looking forward to more.
Two things I would like - a clearer description of Annie I under stand its her POV so her describing herself might seem odd, but dropping hints throughout would be fine I think (if you did and I missed it I apologise).
The other thing, at least for me personally, I think it would be enjoyable to read a flashback sequence of their first time. When she simply can't believe this is happening to her and all the vile things this High school senior is forcing her to do etc.
Loving the focus on anal too. BTW.
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