Yeah, the cheating angle is something I don't like, so I was writing against myself instead of with myself. I can't figure out a way to word that better lolClaire wrote: Wed Jun 10, 2026 5:50 pm I liked it, even though it reads more like the outline or the idea for a longer a story to me than an actual short story. The narration has a weirdly distant feel to it like it's afraid to actually dive into the moment. That gives the whole story an almost surreal quality.
This is one of those stories that might actually fit the dubious consent label quite well.
I do feel bad about that now that I've written this. So I updated the ratingBut giving Sweet, Sweet Mess a poor rating simply for having cheating in it and then writing this... I see you, @RapeU!
