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Let me take a stab at this.Claire wrote: Fri Mar 13, 2026 12:08 pmThere is one subtle continuity detail embedded in the narration of this part that I like a lot.
Why 20 years? That's not his age; Eleanor might be twenty, but that's not about her.Claire wrote: Fri Mar 13, 2026 12:08 pmHe was lying to himself again. He realized that quickly. In a single minute he could have shot someone as well. Would he forgive a murderer who lived a virtuous life for the 10 million, 519 thousand and 200 minutes that made up the 20 years before the second he pulled the trigger?
Is this it?Claire wrote: Mon Dec 08, 2025 8:02 am ... Sex with his wife had become a rare occurrence, a perfectly normal development after being a couple for 20 years. At least, that was his hypothesis.
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Re: Late Satisfaction - Chapter 5-1 posted!
@Lucius I didn't think that deep about it.
But I like how you think. That number does look suspicious.
It's simpler than that. It's in reference to chapter 4 part 2.
It's simpler than that. It's in reference to chapter 4 part 2.
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Re: Late Satisfaction - Chapter 5-1 posted!
@Lucius You got it! 3 points for you. 
edit: @Lucius removed his correct answer. So if anybody else wants to guess and earn 3 points, go for it!
edit: @Lucius removed his correct answer. So if anybody else wants to guess and earn 3 points, go for it!
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Yeah huge mess you made there Prof, I really hope that Ms Green does not believe him that Eleanor did not want the position.
Also yeah his wife's life may end up messed up as well. He is well and truly in deep shit of his own making.
Silly man, yes, that type of 'mistake' is not something you recover from unless your victim decides to show mercy for some insane reason.
Yeah coming clean to his wife is the least destructive path he could take.
Will not fix all the damage he did though, that could take a lifetime if he is even allowed to.
Not super long comments this time.
No clue on the continuity though
Also yeah his wife's life may end up messed up as well. He is well and truly in deep shit of his own making.
Silly man, yes, that type of 'mistake' is not something you recover from unless your victim decides to show mercy for some insane reason.
Yeah coming clean to his wife is the least destructive path he could take.
Will not fix all the damage he did though, that could take a lifetime if he is even allowed to.
Not super long comments this time.
No clue on the continuity though
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Re: Late Satisfaction - Chapter 5-1 posted!
That's an interesting take. I wonder what the least destructive path would be for him if he was taking the most selfish course of action not caring about accountability at all.Vela Nanashi wrote: Sat Mar 14, 2026 3:36 am Yeah coming clean to his wife is the least destructive path he could take.
To me, the chain of evidence he left feels compelling already. I'm pretty sure that the university won't back him up. But how would a jury in the US judge this case? I don't really know.
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I mean I am sure that Ms Green was quite able to smell cum in the elevator and on him. So she probably knows something is up but probably did not say it right then and there, also I am sure uv light would light elevator up too. As panties are not usually an epically absorbant cleaning product 
If he wanted to not get into trouble at all he most likely would have needed to bribe Eleanor, and make fucking sure to grovel and beg. I don't think that would work. Also sure maybe if he was more evil and capable he might try to get rid of her, but I kind of doubt he is capable of that himself. Also should she vanish I am pretty sure Ms Green would have cops on him real quick and he would fold like a wetwipe.
If he wanted to not get into trouble at all he most likely would have needed to bribe Eleanor, and make fucking sure to grovel and beg. I don't think that would work. Also sure maybe if he was more evil and capable he might try to get rid of her, but I kind of doubt he is capable of that himself. Also should she vanish I am pretty sure Ms Green would have cops on him real quick and he would fold like a wetwipe.
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Re: Late Satisfaction - Chapter 5-1 posted!
The least destructive path of not caring at all? Do nothing, I suppose, and hope that Eleanor does the same.Claire wrote: Mon Mar 16, 2026 1:47 pmThat's an interesting take. I wonder what the least destructive path would be for him if he was taking the most selfish course of action not caring about accountability at all.
I guess his lawyer would advise him to plea bargain with the DA, reduce the charges to something like 20th degree sexual assault.Claire wrote: Mon Mar 16, 2026 1:47 pmTo me, the chain of evidence he left feels compelling already. I'm pretty sure that the university won't back him up. But how would a jury in the US judge this case? I don't really know.
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Re: Late Satisfaction
Chapter 5 - Part 2
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