@mcpa1597 Thank you! The story is the same as the German version, it's just a translation. But hopefully my translation is better than what Google produces.
I would appreciate a rating if you liked the story:
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mcpa1597 wrote: Sun Feb 01, 2026 4:56 am
Just did for this and An Unfortunate Misstep
Thank you! I would appreciate a rating for the English version as well. Also, you should now be able to unlock Record Chaser with the reputation you've gained! If you try, could you let us know whether it worked? It's a new feature we're testing, so feedback is very welcome.
Really enjoying the story, so glad you deided to translate it. You did a really good job, didn't notice any cluncynes in the writing that sometimes comes with translation, but I'm not an expert. I enjoy the turn based storytelling and the way the proffessor decents into dark ideas. I liked the focus on Eleanor's strength and training highlighting how one would think she could defend herself, yet being unable to. It really shows how she is stripped of her power and he has total control over her
@naturefreak Thank you! It's nice to hear that the English feels natural to you. I've grown more confident in my English over time but I'm still less versatile than in German. In that sense, writing something directly in English feels easier than translating.
Rooting the story in institutional power rather than physical strength was what fascinated me about the idea. That makes it feel eeriely real to me.
The story is the same as the German version, it's just a translation. But hopefully my translation is better than what Google produces. 
