Late Satisfaction

[AdmiralPiet]

@AdmiralPiet Thank you for your feedback. I had something similar in mind as the example UI you posted. Can we maybe ask you for help if we need help designing some nice buttons for the ratings?

I am a bit unreliable in cases like that. Doing work for others that is.
But I guess buttons are easy enough and not that sensitive to art-block, especially with some clear work instructions, so I will help if I can.
(But i can only work in pixels, like .png or .jpg. I have no experience with vector graphics.)

[Claire]

Chapter 4 - Part 1

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[Lucius]

I like the description of Robertson's thoughts, the best laid plans of the rapist. Can't help but wonder what's going to go wrong for him. What 'framework' is he missing?

[Claire]

Can't help but wonder what's going to go wrong for him.

Nothing, absolutely nothing...

[SoftGameHunter]

Well, isn't he the daring one, putting a clothing request into an email. That's gonna be there forever.

[Mister X]

Comment on chapter 1
I have already read this story in german and I like it very much. Because of the english names of the people it sounds even more suitable in english. You start the story quite slowly, present your characters and spend much time on Anthonys background and his feelings. The blowjob fantasy ist really hot. I am sure I will think of it when I have my next video call

You describe your figures, their bodys and their feelings in detail and I like that very much. For example Eleanor's memory of her teacher. And I love this little easter eggs, this hints to Record Chaser, when Eugene mentions his meeting with Emily and Claire.

[Claire]

The blowjob fantasy ist really hot. I am sure I will think of it when I have my next video call

Why during a video call? But you do you, just don't get too extracted. Wasn't there this case of a journalist during the pandemic who started masturbating on camera because he thought he had closed his zoom call? Don't make the same mistake!

Thanks for the feedback!

[Mister X]

The blowjob fantasy ist really hot. I am sure I will think of it when I have my next video call

Why during a video call? But you do you, just don't get too extracted. Wasn't there this case of a journalist during the pandemic who started masturbating on camera because he thought he had closed his zoom call? Don't make the same mistake!

Thanks for the feedback!

Well, because I'm not a professor and I don't give lectures But sometimes I attend video conferences, and if a woman were sitting under my desk and pleasuring me...
Yea, I remember that one too.

[Mister X]

Chapter 2:

Congratulations to the description of Robertson's feelings! Obviously he is not the typical raptist, who does not care about his victim's feelings. He has seen Eleanor as a sex toy in his fantasies, but when they talk, he realized she is a human being. And he feels ashamed.
For me it is a little strange, that she told Robertson about her familiy. He is a stranger. She could have ask for help without telling him so much. But okay, she was very nervous at that moment.
Once again, I like you mentioned Claire, who is the protagonist in one of your other storys.
By explaining Robertson's feelings, you almost make him seem like a sympathetic character. Anyone who has ever been unhappily in love will be able to understand how he felt.
And even though the mother is a minor character, one naturally becomes curious about how Eleanor's father won this woman over.
I find it unrealistic that Eleanor doesn't defend herself at all. Yes, she is in shock, yes, he is a respected figure, yes, he has helped her. But her studies would probably have continued without him, she could have applied for a scholarship without him and worked with another professor.
It is interesting that they both deal extensively with possible consequences.
I somehow miss the moment when Robertson makes his decision. Beforehand, you describe his thoughts in detail, but not at that moment and not during the rape either.

[Vela Nanashi]

Very distracted by his own inner thoughts so he can't hear what Ms Green is saying.

Poor Claire.

Yeah flimsy reason for him to keep the contract but Ms Green did not feel like arguing with him I guess.

Hopefully Eleanor will be smarter and bring a friend next time, though maybe that would be weird.

Shithole is a rare version I don't read often in stories

His fantasies are vivid at least.

Oh that last line in his email is going to look suss to anyone else at the university, love and lust make people do stupid things

Good post and sorry I did not get more of a comment out for it, I am curious to see where it goes, hope you have time to translate the next part soon.