the Highlanders

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@HistBuff Eunice Grayson was brilliant, despite having been dubbed by Nikki van der Zyl. So many people believe that Bond, James Bond is a stupid way to introduce himself. But it’s so brilliantly set up in the scene, it’s a comeback to her introducing herself as Trench, Sylvia Trench. But both of them lead up to that in the dialogue ending theirs sentence with a leading Mrs snd Mr. So of course a brit would offer the last name in completion of the question. Follwing up with the first name as emphasis is part of the flirtation.

You didn’t think I chose my avatar in ignorance .

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You didn’t think I chose my avatar in ignorance .

It was for the other readers I wrote this. At the time, I obviously didn't know who she was, and was even too young to grasp the flirting. I only knew I found her attractive and beautiful. I was discovering that dark-haired girls usually had a stronger attraction on me. This being said, I have nothing against a story featuring Grace Kelly.

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A military unit capturing a girl's school has been a fantasy of mine, but no talent for writing.

That's basically it, @Blaster! All you need to do to start writing is having a fantasy. You can write down the basic story, then flesh it out with details, then change things, reread it, etc., then post it when you feel it's ready to go. The proof-reading part is always the most tedious to me and this is why I sometimes find grammar and spelling errors in my posted work, because I sometimes post chapters a bit too hastily, and this is why I very seldom enter contests = I have deadlines at my job and won't have deadlines in my leisure!

@SoftGameHunter also wrote on Ravishu that he basically follows a plotline that he fleshes out.

This particular story here was really well done, especially given the proximity to a deadline.