Closing Time: Rachel's Ordeal

[Shocker]

I’m not sure which part I love more, Rachel being forced to lick up the mess, or being raped in the ass shortly after.

[Blue]

A really hot story.
I was just surprised at how long it took the guys to get their hands on her ass. The way they kept staring at it, I thought her ass would be ready to be fucked by the third or fourth fuck at the latest. But they all dutifully fucked her pussy first, and now it's her tight ass's turn.
Keep it up.

[Vile8r]

Preview: "Fear rushed through Rachel as she heard his words. She struggled to get free, she couldn't breathe. Surely she would choke on his big cock. Andy had her head held tightly as he forced his prick in and out of her mouth. Rachel’s attempts to free herself from Andy were of no avail.
Andy moaned from the terrific feeling of his cock in Rachel‘s warm mouth."

Tags: non-consensual oral sex, anal rape,

Chapter 7:

More cum oozed out and dribbled down the back of her thighs. Carson slapped her across the ass cheeks. Rachel could barely stand any longer and she slumped against the table.

The next name Andy drew was Tad. Tad’s face was flush with excitement as he approached Rachel. He bent her over the table and inserted himself into her. She didn’t scream this time, just let out a loud agonized moan.
Tad pulled her back by her arms as he pumped his cock in and out. She was very well-lubricated now and he fucked her ass with little effort. Tad didn’t get anal sex very often and he was thoroughly enjoying this.

“Oh, Rachel, I knew yer ass would be a sweet fuck!” he said. “Only way this would be better was if you were my girlfriend!”

Rachel could feel his hot breath on the side of her face as his body pressed against hers. The pain wasn’t quite as sharp anymore, but more like a very intense ache inside her as his shaft spread her ass open. He let her drop back down onto the pool table as he spurted thick ropes of cum into her butt.
He pulled out, his dick covered in a gross slime of cum, blood and shit. Tad wiped it off with Rachel’s torn shorts.

The last person was Owen, waiting impatiently for Tad to finish up. He gave Rachel a couple hard smacks on the ass as he pulled her up to her feet.

“Come on, you little piggy,” he said. “Time for another dick up the ass!”
Rachel was in a semi-conscious state, barely able to speak. Owen rammed into her, her feet lifting off the floor again. Her body was limp as he wrapped his arms around her waist and began to piston in and out. His balls slapped against the back of her thighs.
Owen squeezed and pinched her nipples as he slammed her shitbox. Even that barely got a response from her. Rachel was staring vacantly at a far-off spot on the other side of the room. Her body was being used like it had never been used before, just a toy for these louts.

She was barely cognizant of his cock moving inside her. Her lower body was going numb. She wasn’t even sure if she still had legs, she couldn’t feel them. Luckily, Owen was a fast cummer. He didn’t last too long inside her and soon he pulled out and sprayed his jizz across Rachel’s back.

“That ass is wrecked!” he said as he looked down at Rachel. She slipped from his grip and lay in a little ball on the floor. Her anus was a red, gaping hole with a stream of cum oozing out of it.

“Yeah, she’s gonna be sore for a few days,” said Carson. “Ya might have to give her some time off, Andy!”

Andy laughed. “I’ll think about it.”

“You gonna pound yer sweet little waitress’ ass too?” asked Derwin.

“I am, but not just yet. I’ll git her later,” said Andy. “You boys look thirsty, I’ll git you another round of drinks.”

“Damn right, I’m thirsty!” said Bruce. “Ass fuckin’ is hard work!”

Andy returned with more booze and this time also brought Rachel a bottle of water. She took it from him and sipped at it slowly as she tried to sit up.

The men sat around drinking and joking with each other. It seemed like what they had just done to Rachel, was the most natural thing in the world. After about fifteen minutes, they turned their attention back to Rachel.

“I think it’s time to feed her some dick,” said Andy. “And this time I git to go first. I been waitin’ a long time to stick my cock between those lips.”

“Okay,” said Carson. “She’s all yours!”

Andy walked up to Rachel as he unbuckled his pants and let them drop to the floor.

“Rachel!” he barked. “Get on your knees!”

She looked up at Andy, tears in her eyes.
“A-Andy, pl-please! Stop th-this! I hurt! J-just let m-me go! I won’t tell a-anybody! Please!”

“You want that raise, don’t ya?” he smirked. “Well, this is gonna be how ya earn it! I told ya that earlier…..and I meant it!”

With one big hand he pulled Rachel by her hair up to her knees. He pressed his sweaty cock against her lips. Rachel tried to turn her head away, but Andy grabbed her. Pushing his thumb into the corner of her mouth, he pried her lips apart and pushed the head of his cock in. Rachel immediately gagged. He tasted of sweat and stale urine.

“Now, c'mon cunt, suck it," he ordered. “And no fuckin’ teeth…..or ya’ll really get it!”

Andy, using his big hands moved her head back and forth slipping his
cockhead in and out of her pretty lips.

"Oh baby," he muttered. "You got a real hot mouth."

He increased the pace using her head like a rag doll
pushing her face on and off his cock.

"Let me feel that tongue. C'mon lick it," he yelled out as he
fucked his shaft in and out.

Rachel started moving her tongue around in her mouth as the big cock pistoned in and out. She wanted to die. A little stickysubstance
touched her tongue from the tip of his penis. It was his pre-cum and it was in her mouth.

"Oh my god," she thought. "He's going to cum in my mouth!”

Andy pulled harder on Rachel's head forcing his cock deeper into her mouth. His cock head hit the back of her throat.

"Here we go, sweetheart. Ready to swallow my cum?"

“UUUGGGGHHHGGAAAACCCKKKKKKKK!” Rachel loudly gagged.

Fear rushed through Rachel as she heard his words. She struggled to get free, she couldn't breathe. Surely she would choke on his big cock. Andy had her head held tightly as he forced his prick in and out of her mouth. Rachel’s attempts to free herself from Andy were of no avail.

Andy moaned from the terrific feeling of his cock in Rachel‘s warm mouth.

"Ohhhhh fuck! This bitch is good, guys. You all
gotta try her out."

Tears began running from Rachel's eyes as she knew her situation was hopeless. They were all going to have her.

She felt Andy's balls against her chin and his sweaty pubic hair on her lips. His fat gut was pressed against her forehead. His dick jerked inside her mouth and thick jizz spurted into her throat. It was kind of salty and felt so sticky and gooey as she moved it around with her tongue, not quite sure what to
do with it.
Rachel coughed as she struggled to swallow it all. The sensation of the musky fluid sliding down into her stomach was sickening.

Andy pulled out and patted Rachel on top of the head.
“Yeah, I knew you’d be a good little cock sucking bitch! I thought Brooke was good, but you’re way better!”

Rachel spit and coughed as she tried to get the horrible taste out of her mouth. Carson walked up, dropping his pants.

“No use getting rid of that taste. Ya just got more coming!” he chuckled.

Carson pushed his dick inside Rachel’s mouth. She didn’t have the strength to resist this time. Holding her head tightly, he fucked her face with his stiff meat. Carson rammed his cock repeatedly in and out of her mouth.
The gagging sounds continued coming from Rachel. The sounds of Rachel's discomfort only excited him that much more. The gurgling and gagging sounds coming from her made Carson crazier with his lustful fucking of her mouth.
Faster and faster he fucked her mouth, trying to force his hot meat farther down her throat. Rachel’s fear intensified as now she needed to breathe.
"Take it bitch! That's it, take it. All of it. Swallow!
Swallow my cock, whore," said Carson.

His knees buckled as he felt himself release his load in her mouth. Rachel grimaced as the sticky stuff coated her throat again.

“I’m next!” yelled Tad.

He had his cock out and was stroking it hard. He stood in front of Rachel.

“Get it in your mouth, sweetie!” he ordered her. “Wrap those pretty lips around me!”

Rachel stuck her tongue out as she gripped the base of Tad’s hard shaft and slid her mouth over the head. Tad’s dick had the same putrid taste as Carson’s. She had realized it was the taste of ass…..her ass!

Tad allowed her to slowly slide her mouth and tongue along him for a little while. The soft, wet sounds her mouth were making made him even harder. But soon he decided he needed to step things up. He wrapped a hand in her hair and forced her head down farther on him.
Gagging noises increased from Rachel's throat as she tried to breathe, but his rapid thrusts down her throat were too fast and deep.

"I've always wanted to throat-fuck a girl like this,” said Tad. "My girlfriend doesn’t let me do this!”

Rachel continued gagging as he fucked her throat as if it were a cunt. The other men cheered him on. It made him fuck her face even harder.

"Damn! This bitch's throat is gonna make me cum. Oh fuck…..AHHHH!….I'm cumming, bitch!"

Tad pulled Rachel's head quickly into his groin and let out another low deep groan.

"AHHHH!"

Rachel felt his cock inside her throat suddenly throb. It began pulsating over and over, Rachel feeling his warm cum running down deep within her
throat.

Tad held himself in her mouth a bit longer, enjoying the sensation of her lips wrapped around him.

"How could this be happening to me?" Rachel thought. She could not comprehend how these men could do something like this to a girl. Especially when two of them were married and one had a girlfriend!
Had they no conscience? And her boss! What the hell was the deal with him? As much of a pig that he was, Rachel had still trusted him to protect her……. NOT join in! She had just been doing her job….she never deserved something like this!

[Shocker]

I was beginning to wonder if you would let her realize about the difference in taste, when you pulled her mental trigger.

Another exceptional good chapter.

[Lucius]

Poor Rachel! The story is very hot, I'd like to know what (who?) comes next.

[Nickamano]

Still thoroughly enjoyable story. loving catching up to the events as they continue to be updated.

My only possible criticism - and this might be just a me thing - I always tend to think that (sexual) climaxes should be just that, the culmination of an action set-piece (action film parallel) so that there should be more time and "effort" in describing the (sexual) climax than any other part of the sex scene. Which can be really hard, especially in gangbang situations, where repetition is far too easy a trap to fall into.
I sometimes find a big build up leading to "he jizzed and then pulled out" to feel very anti-climactic (ah the tiresome puns!).
Be interested to hear how other people feel?

Hugely looking forward to the continuation of this - repeated ass-to-mouth action to come?? Poor Rachel...

--- And then Nick realised he hasn't actually read chapter 7 yet --- sigh... I have no excuse.

[Vile8r]

Chapter 8:

Tags: Ass-play; anal rape; oral


Tad finally pulled out to allow the next man to have a turn with her mouth. It was Derwin. Rachel didn’t like him. Well, she didn’t like ANY of the men, but Derwin especially!

He was rough and brutal as he forced his cock between her jaws and took hold of her by the hair. He grunted as he shoved his cock to the back of her throat.
“Yeah……yeah…..yeah!“ he said over and over as he pumped into her mouth.

Rachel’s jaws ached horribly but she tried best as she could to take Derwin’s abuse. He rocked back and forth as he fucked Rachel’s face. Looking down, he could watch her lips wrapped tightly around him. As he felt her tongue slide along the length of his shaft, Derwin knew he would be blowing his load soon.
He grabbed her head with both hands as he felt semen erupting from his cock. Derwin began extracting his spasming cock from Rachel's mouth. As it slipped out, another blast of cum shot into her mouth onto her tongue.
More sperm hit Rachel in the face as she coughed, spitting up some of the thick jism just deposited in her throat. It dribbled from her mouth and she felt some running down her chin.

"C'mon whore, eat it. Swallow my cum," Derwin demanded. "Don't you dare spit it out."

Rachel fought the urge to vomit as she swallowed Derwin’s cum in her mouth. She used the back of her hand to wipe it off her face.

Owen was ready now, to take his turn. He walked up to Rachel and pushed her down on her back. He straddled her face and lowered himself so his cock stuffed Rachel's mouth. Rachel was too powerless to resist.

At the same time, he pulled Rachel's legs up, tucking them under his arms, thereby exposing her sweet cunt.

"There's another hole here, who wants in?" he asked to the others.

Then Rachel felt a hard cock brush across her cunt. She couldn't see anything but Owen in front of her as he kept humping her throat. But she knew what was happening when suddenly she felt her pussy lips spread apart and something hot push up inside her.
It was Bruce fucking her! His hard shaft pounded deeper and deeper, pushing into the inner depths of her. He forced her cunt walls to painfully stretch open.

“Yay, Bruce! Slam the little hottie!” yelled Tad.

Rachel lay there helpless on the floor as the two men used her body. Owen with his hips hovering over her face, forcing his cock in and out of her mouth and Bruce buried in her tight love hole.

Owen began to cum. His mouth hung open as he let his balls spill their contents into her throat.
“Oh yeah, baby, that feels good!“ he moaned.

As he pulled out, Owen squeezed her cheeks closed demanding, "Swallow my fuckin' cum, you little tramp. NOW!"

Rachel became even more frightened as he yelled at her. She closed her eyes, and swallowed the mouthful of his hot jism.

"Good," Owen replied.

Bruce, seeing Owen was finished, pulled his dick out of Rachel. He also straddled her face and lowered himself, pushing his wet cock into her mouth.
Rachel could taste the musky juices of her pussy on him. Bruce began doing push-ups over top of her, his dick pistoning in and out between her lips.

The other men sat back in their chairs and watched the wonderful show before them. Carson reached over and high-fived with Andy.

“God damn, that little waitress of yours is quite the treat. I haven’t had this much fun fucking a chick in a long time!”

“Yer welcome,” smiled Andy.

After having his cock in Rachel’s pussy, it didn’t take long for Bruce to cum in her mouth.

Bruce let out a loud animalistic grunt as he unloaded more baby batter into Rachel’s sore throat. He pulled out before he was completely finished.

"Now, lick the rest off."

He jerked his cock a few times squeezing out one last big glob on the end of it.

"C'mon, stick out your tongue."

Rachel opened her mouth reaching her tongue to his cock. Bruce could see strands of his sperm still hanging from the roof of her mouth as he wiped the glob of cum on her tongue and shoved his cock in one last time.

"You've gotten pretty good at eating cum," Bruce remarked. “Keep up the good work.”

Bruce came back and sat down, guzzling a cold beer.

“Holy shit, we hammered her good,” he said.

“Yep, poor little Rachel’s gonna have some trouble walking for a few days,” chuckled Carson.

He turned to Andy.
“Now, there ain’t gonna be any repercussions for this, is there? She’s gonna keep her mouth shut, right?”

Andy grinned. “Yeah, I’ll make sure of that. She won’t say a thing if she knows what’s good for her. And my brother is the local sheriff, won’t do her much good goin’ to him. He’ll believe me over anything she tells him!”

“Is he a piece of work like you?” asked Derwin.

Andy scowled at Derwin, then laughed. “Fuck, he’s even worse!”

The men all laughed.

“I-it’s going to be on th-the sur-surveillance c-cameras,” Rachel suddenly piped up in a barely audible voice.

“What are you blathering about?” asked Andy. “You dumb cunt! I control the surveillance cameras! I can delete anything off them I want, and who says they were even turned on?”

He smiled to himself. The cameras in the pool room were never shut off. He knew, later, he was gonna have one hell of a good video to watch!

“Well, me and the guys are pretty well done here with Rachel,” said Carson as he stood up.

“Just a sec,’ said Tad.

He picked up the wad of bills they had pulled out of Rachel’s bra earlier.

“We, uh, better give her back her tips. I think she earned them!”

He walked over to where Rachel had pulled herself up into a sitting position on the floor. He handed the money to her but then pulled it away, just as she reached for it.

“Uh, uh!” Tad said. “You’re gonna have to get it back from us!”

He peeled off several bills and rolled them up tight, then pulled down his pants and tucked them into the crack of his ass.

“You want yer money back…..then pick it out of my ass…..with yer teeth! No hands!”

The other men whooped and cheered at this new game of humiliation. Rachel shook her head.

“N-no…..I w-won’t do th-that!”

“You ain’t got a choice!” said Carson as he walked over. “The man wants you to pick money out of his ass….you do it!”

Rachel saw Carson coming and climbed to her knees.

“O-okay….I’ll d-do it! Don’t h-hurt me!” she cried out, holding her hands up.

Tad turned around and stuck his ass out towards Rachel. She closed her eyes and put her mouth up to his hairy butt cheeks. The stench of his ass filled her nostrils. She tried to pick the money out from between his cheeks with her teeth.
He had pushed it in there tightly and she had to press her face right to his body to get hold of it, her nose right against his anus.

“That’s right baby,” said Tad as he pulled his pants back up.

“All right, now you’ll do that to all of us!” said Carson.

Each of them, except for Andy, took several bills and did the same as Tad, rolling them up tightly and inserting them between the cheeks of their asses.
Andy helped out by holding the back of her head and making sure she got her mouth and nose right into their butts.

First Carson, then Bruce, then Tad. Rachel’s eyes were tearing up and she felt sick to her stomach from the stink of their asses. The foul taste stuck to her lips.

After Tad, she had to crawl over to Owen and then Derwin. Derwin had really stuck the rolled-up bills into his anus. Rachel practically had her whole face pressed between his cheeks before she got her teeth on the money and pulled it out.

“Good job, girlie!” said Carson. “I guess you REALLY wanted those tips!”

Rachel looked down at the floor, totally humiliated. She had never felt so utterly used in her life.

Carson and his boys finished up their drinks and headed out of the bar. They were all laughing and joking, totally satisfied with themselves.

I hope you all burn in hell! thought Rachel.

Andy had followed so he could let them out the back door. Then he returned to the pool room. Rachel had started crawling on her hands and knees to the doorway. She had tried to stand a couple of times but her legs wouldn’t support her.

Andy pulled her to her feet.

“Come on Rachel! We’re going to the office…..just you and me!”

“N-no, let me g-go! Andy! Please!” she bawled.

Andy pulled her around behind his desk. He pushed her face down onto the desk and kicked her legs apart.

“Now you ain’t gonna say anything about what happened tonight,” he said as he unbuckled his pants. It wasn’t a request, it was a statement.

“Cuz, if you do, I’ll tell my brother about how money seems to keep disappearing outta my bar! And I’ll set it up so it looks like you’re the one who’s doing it!”

Andy pushed Rachel’s butt cheeks apart and began forcing his thick cock into her ass.

“AAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” Rachel squealed as her tortured ass was forced open again.

Andy began stroking hard in and out. He huffed and puffed with exertion.

“Fuck, you got a sweet ass, girl!” he said. "And it's mine now!"

Rachel could barely breathe as her body was pinned down on the desk by Andy’s weight. She grimaced and whimpered in pain as she felt his fat dick pump away inside her. It seemed like he was shoving himself right into her stomach.

“Ohhh…….ohh….. Yeahhhhhhhh!” Andy moaned as he slapped his body against Rachel’s.

At the last minute before he came, he pulled out and sprayed gobs of his white jizz across Rachel’s ass cheeks.

“There, now I’m done,” he said. “But you and me will definitely be doing this more often.”

He pulled Rachel up and put his face down by hers.

“So, you WILL be quiet about all this, right?”

She slowly nodded. “Y-yes, I w-will!”

“Good, I’ll give you the rest of the weekend off. I think you earned it!”

“H-how do I get h-home? I have n-no clothes!” she whined.

“Hmm, that does present a problem doesn’t it?” Andy chuckled.

He walked over to a closet in his office and pulled out a large oversize t-shirt and a pair of girl's shorts. He tossed them to Rachel. She wondered why he kept such clothes in his office, but she said nothing.

“Here, throw these on, but I want 'em back. Now get out of here!”

Rachel slipped on the t-shirt and shorts and then found her purse and car keys. She stumbled out to her car. As she sat in the driver’s seat she began to sob uncontrollably. This had been the worse night of her life ... and she could tell no one!

THE END

[Shocker]

I’d say that’s an explosive final chapter on an already fantastic story, I like how you find ever new ways of degrading Rachel. The story never feels too long, as there is always something happening.

[Nickamano]

I loved the ending picture of Rachel now having to satisfy Andy with her body as and when he feels like it. Great story! Thank you for sharing it with everyone.

[Neighbor]

An intense narrative, with a natural flow from start to finish. The description of the sexual acts was enough to let us keep track of who was doing what.
I wasn't left feeling that I knew any of these people very well, altho Rachel was probably the only one I would have had sympathy for.
I just enjoyed the flow, and didn't worry too much about why any individual was doing what they were.
I'm glad I got a chance to read this thru. Thanks for the story.