Record Chaser - Teaser
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Claire
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Re: Record Chaser - Teaser
Claire wrote: Fri May 15, 2026 10:40 am A big thanks to @sinfulwords. I only just now noticed because of her that the recent hack apparently also got rid of my chapter 4 update. I have now exchanged the old outdated version of the chapter with the new edited version again.
Similar to the edits for chapters 1 to 3, chapter 4 should now read a lot smoother and eliminate a lot of errors. The word count was cut down from 4452 to 4235, mostly getting rid of repetitive or clunky phrasing. In terms of prose quality, it should be the biggest improvement since the chapter 1 update.
Sorry to @sinfulwords that she had to read the old version instead!
My stories: Claire's Cesspool of Sin. I'm always happy to receive a comment on my stories, even more so on an older one!
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Star_grillzz
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Re: Record Chaser - Teaser
I recently found this story and ohh boyyyy! I loove the slow pace! I also like marks personality a lot at that! Hes quiet but controlled in a sense, but tbf, i like controlling men in my stories! Loved it!
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Claire
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Re: Record Chaser - Teaser
Thank you! Did you come here from AO3 by any chance?Star_grillzz wrote: Sun May 17, 2026 1:16 am I recently found this story and ohh boyyyy! I loove the slow pace! I also like marks personality a lot at that! Hes quiet but controlled in a sense, but tbf, i like controlling men in my stories! Loved it!
My stories: Claire's Cesspool of Sin. I'm always happy to receive a comment on my stories, even more so on an older one!
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Vil86
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Re: Record Chaser - Teaser
I love the writing and how slow it goes!! Really builds it up, which is rare
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Claire
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Re: Record Chaser - Teaser
Thanks! I like slow paced stories.Vil86 wrote: Thu May 28, 2026 10:46 pm I love the writing and how slow it goes!! Really builds it up, which is rare
My stories: Claire's Cesspool of Sin. I'm always happy to receive a comment on my stories, even more so on an older one!