Diving Into Characters

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Re: Diving Into Characters

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Claire wrote: Fri Aug 01, 2025 7:09 pmWhy not just write a negative arc if that comes more natural to you? Especially in the case of a rapist I could see quite a compelling story come out of this. Imagine you write a story about a convicted rapist who gets out of prison and really wants to better but ultimately ends up slipping back into old habits. If you could make us root for his attempts to get better first, then I could see that as very interesting story.
That leaves me in need of positive arcs for at least a couple of my 1930s girls -- I can't just kill them off! :)
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Re: Diving Into Characters

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I think I never really felt emotionally distraught by my writing.
I don't delve into my characters like that, and I don't think I can.

When writing a character I focus on who they are, where they come from, what they do. I need at least a vague idea of their life.
Maybe not for every minor support character, and not the parts that have no bearing at all on the story.
For example: I try to adjust their speech patterns to reflect them. Like Harold Miller refering to japanese people as "Japs".
In a period piece I would try for more archaic language.

But because I don't delve into them, but more or less just infer from who they are how they would act and react to things I guess they are somewhat similar throughout my stories.
The more memorable ones are the caricature like characters like Harold, or Eagle and Star.

As for empathy with characters: For my own characters I seldom find myself in a position where I am sad for them. With other authors characters that is different.
In both cases it is very dependant on how well developed the character is, how much I like them, if they have cool attributes, what particulary happens to them and how.

@Claire managed to make me feel a bit sad for Claire and Eleanor. But curiously also Marla, because of how her life will fall apart.
With @Lucius's Ziptia I wished I could have read of her suffering under the whip.