But you already got a detailed comment from a very experienced writer. I don't know whether we have anybody on the board who has written more than @Shocker.
Greetings Orientalist!
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Claire
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Re: Greetings Orientalist!
@Orientalist I'm still fairly new to this, just like to challenge myself to try new things.
But I read your story yesterday and will leave you a detailed comment soon.
But you already got a detailed comment from a very experienced writer. I don't know whether we have anybody on the board who has written more than @Shocker.
But you already got a detailed comment from a very experienced writer. I don't know whether we have anybody on the board who has written more than @Shocker.
My stories: Claire's Cesspool of Sin. I'm always happy to receive a comment on my stories, even more so on an older one!
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Shocker
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Re: Greetings Orientalist!
I’d say that is too much praise. I’m pretty sure @Vile8r has written more stories than me, and if it comes to combined words written, the entirety of my work doesn’t begin to compete with @LtBroccoli in Pharma. Your own stories are likely eclipsing my numbers as well.Claire wrote: Tue May 26, 2026 10:16 am @Orientalist I'm still fairly new to this, just like to challenge myself to try new things.But I read your story yesterday and will leave you a detailed comment soon.
But you already got a detailed comment from a very experienced writer. I don't know whether we have anybody on the board who has written more than @Shocker.![]()
We have a great mix of short form stories as well as almost novel length epics here, which means this forum has something to offer for everyone.
My collected stories can be found here Shocking, positively shocking
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Orientalist
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Re: Greetings Orientalist!
Thank you very much@Claire ! Looking forward to your comments. And yes, am very grateful for comments from @Shocker, he is truly a seasoned writer. Made me reflect on several aspects. I'm trying to finalize Chapter 2 of Ariel's Bare Innocence, hopefully I can get it up soon.Claire wrote: Tue May 26, 2026 10:16 am @Orientalist I'm still fairly new to this, just like to challenge myself to try new things.But I read your story yesterday and will leave you a detailed comment soon.
But you already got a detailed comment from a very experienced writer. I don't know whether we have anybody on the board who has written more than @Shocker.![]()
Experimenting on new things is definitely good to challenge one's self to grow.
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LtBroccoli
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Welcome aboard. The more the merrier. Looking forward to reading your work. Damn near any type of story flies here. We've written short stories, poems, songs, flash fiction, novels, and some epics going across multiple stories. I've even written a few screenplays. Last November a bunch of us took part in NaNoWriMo. 50k words in 30 days.
Once again, welcome aboard.
Once again, welcome aboard.