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Title: Festival of Love, Valentines day, with Iris

By: Vela Nanashi

Summary: Iris decides to bring some joy to people during the festival of love, or valentines day, to a group of men who need it...

Part of the The RavishU Memorial Contest.

Prompt: mistaken identity

Genre: scifi, inspired loosely off Babylon 5 and Lagash 3 (a role playing game that was inspired by Babylon 5)

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The author of this story has read and accepted the rules for posting stories. They guarantee that the following story depicts none of the themes listed in the Forbidden Content section of the rules.

All characters in this story are over the age of 18, or much more, and of age of maturity and consent for their species and culture. They are also all consenting adults.

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Iris:

I dance along the hyperspace currents letting them take me for a wonderful ride to where they please, listening to the songs of distant worlds, I hear the songs of love, desire, lust, longing and loneliness, that last part is a disharmonious melody, yet directly in response to the others, there are people who don't have a mate to enjoy the festival of love with, something the humans call Valentine's day, many other species have their own unique version too.

I decide that I will try to find at least one of those lonely voices and make them feel joy during the festival of love, I will not be able to be their mate forever, but at least I can make them happier in the moment.

I reach out to listen to the minds singing and I sense a group of men who worship a woman whom I felt the echoes of her soul departing long ago, she had been meddled with by the Vorlons, made a more powerful telepath, this group does not know that she is dead, but I do. They all loved her in life, secretly lusted for her, felt guilty about doing so, and also feared her, and she easily would have known their desires for her, even before she got enhanced.

I fly my ship to the hyperspace near their secret base, and rather than travel through the hyperspace jump gate that they have hidden in the oort cloud of their system, I instead slip into an unoccupied VIP hangar in their secret base.

As I do I sense all their minds around me and I change my shape to be an amalgamation of what they believe she looked like, my golden skin and iridescent irises covering all of my body and my third eye all fade out into a pale humanoid skin with a nice patterning of freckles and long red hair, hazel eyes, though I alter my irises to keep a little bit of my violet and iridescent sparkle at certain angles. Also as always however I can not by rules set for myself hide who I am completely, even when I take the shape of a dead person, so I place two of my iridescent irises in my Sacral dimples at my lower back, and on my belly two irises right over where my ovaries are, and I add an iridescent tattoo that symbolizes my Fallopian tubes, uterus, cervix and vagina, I choose to still have a red pubic hair bush with silky soft hair just like that on my hair, only the bush is denser and trimmed into a heart shape, that fits the occasion. I go with the most sexual ideas for what her body would look like, slightly bigger breasts than she actually had, perky nipples with small Areola, on each areola I make another iris and I manifest ring piercings in my nipples and clitoris hood, I make an iris over my anus as well. I also feel like being a bit playful, so I make my skin and flesh of my belly a bit more translucent with an inner soft golden glow, that will let my lovers see their own cocks slightly as they make love to me. I place irises at the soles of my feet and just above my toes, and irises on the palm and outside of my hands too. I place a final iris just above and between my breasts.

I will not actually claim to be her, I will just exit my ship when they notice I am here and they can come to their own conclusions. I briefly consider just walking out in the nude, but instead I decide to weave a black silk dress that leaves very little to the imagination, the skirt goes down just past my butt and my pussy lips are just barely covered by the lower edge. my back is completely exposed, my belly has a heart shaped cut out that reveals my tattooed partially translucent belly, and my sides are also exposed, my nipples stick out from the cups that are held up by strings that go to a lace choker around my neck. between my nipple rings I hang a chain outside the dress that has three links on each side of a heart shaped central link, there is a deep V cut between my breasts that reach into the heart shaped cut on my belly.

I sense in their minds that they have detected me, and are all scrambling with weapons to the hangar, I wait for them all to arrive. They are confused by my ship, many think it is of Vorlon design, I guess I can forgive them for that, since very few would have seen a Vorlon ship for a long time since they left, and my ship and the Vorlon ship are alien to humans and also have a organic feel to them, so I can see the mistaken identity there. They do not fire on the ship.

I decide to remain barefoot, and open the iris door on my ship and I sense the all male cult go from scared and ready to shoot to surprised and turned on.

Their leader Ben steps up "Lyta?" he asks and I just smile "welcome... I, um... we... we were not expecting you, so we are sorry about the lack of preparation. If... if you don't mind me asking, why have you come here, and what can we do for you?"

I smile "it is the festival of love" then I correct myself "valentines day, and I have been ever so lonely, and I sensed you all, and decided to come visit, so we can cure each other's loneliness, and bring joy to our collective lives, if only for a short time" I also then sense what they have that I might have use for "also I know you have some artifacts collected from various excavations, I need those and also for you to top off my fuel, I can only use hydrogen, helium and lithium for fuel" it is not exactly true, but that is the fuels they have that I can use.

I sense more confusion, but also my pheromones and gentle telepathic caresses of their minds guide them to where I want them, they all put away their weapons and Ben says "you heard her, load the artifacts up and refuel her ship" the other men rush to start doing that and I step up to Ben caressing his silver streaked black beard and gazing into his deep brown eyes, and I admire his cinnamon coloured skin and I kiss him hungrily and slide my leg up between his legs, his worn rough blue coverall with some oil stains on it feeling very coarse against my skin, but I love feeling his cock jump under it against my leg going fully hard. His whole body trembles and I feel the fear in him that this is some kind of trick to make him do something so that she could punish him.

I push a vision into his head to hug me and grab my butt and I push him gently to actually do it, his resistance folds immediately and he hugs his muscular arms around me and grabs my butt. I sense his desires, the full range of them, they go into slightly dark territory, but I like some of those ideas and I am fairly sure I can keep control of the situation, none of these minds are very strong, I could puppet them all if I really needed to.

So I reach into all their minds and push them all to follow their desires, but I also implant in them a set of safe thoughts they will obey from me, blue means stop immediately I need to talk, red means harder, more, faster, green means just right, yellow means slow down a bit, mercy.

I sense the desire and passion be unleashed all around me, the fear subdued in them all, Ben caresses up my back and then slides a finger under the thin choker I am wearing and rips it open and he then tries to pull the dress off me, but the chain and nipple rings don't let my dress entirely fall off, so he pulls out a very sharp knife and with two careful cuts, though I get to feel the edge of the knife against my skin a bit, but not enough to cut my skin, he cuts the cups of the dress off and then rips away the dress from me leaving me naked and he grabs my long hair in his hand and pulls me into a more passionate kiss as he puts his knife into its sheath again. He forces his tongue into my mouth to dance with my tongue and his other hand grabs my butt and he slides his fingers between my butt cheeks and past my anus that he feels some of the oil I have excreted there to make my ass more fun to fuck for them and then his fingers find my wet pussy lips as I am very excited and really ready for them.

He breaks the kiss pulling me back by my hair and pushes me down "squat down for me Lyta" and I let him push me into a squatting position and he hurries to undo his coverall and step out of it, his large for a human cock bounces free and slaps me in my face and without asking I lean against his cock and kiss and lick his balls and he groans.

The others are aware of what he is doing and are rushing to finish loading the artifacts and refuelling my ship and as they finish they all strip naked too. Twenty three men who have not seen a woman in the flesh for over a year, and last time one of them afforded a prostitute was five years ago.

Ben's foreskin opens up and weeps precum down his shaft and I wait until it reaches my lips where I am sucking gently on his balls and then I lick my way up his shaft and then kiss his foreskin back letting my full lips slide over the head of his cock as my tongue licks his tasty pre cum up, a bit salty and bitter and I can tell he has been mostly subsisting off beans with a little bit of what humans call spam, it is an animal called a pig that they have over cooked the meat and added preservatives to that make it keep for a very long time, he is healthy though and his genetics is interesting too, a few new things that I had not tasted before. I feel him grab my hair again roughly and push me down his shaft, I sense he wishes Lyta to gag on his cock, so I adjust from my normal form and give him a bit of struggle, tears, gagging and squirming and put my hands on his legs to push as if protesting and trying to get away. He groans and says "Sam, grab that rope and tie her arms behind her back."

Sam chuckles "you sure?" he asks as he goes to grab the rope.

Ben nods "yeah this bitch needs to learn her place" those are from the darker desires, I know he still loves Lyta, but I pushed his mind to this place.

Sam grabs my arms his calloused hands feel rough against my skin and I put up some struggle as that is what they both want to see right now and he grabs me firmly and ties my arms tight behind my back above my elbows, I pretend this is a challenge and whimper a bit in pain, as it would be a challenge to a human female, and not comfortable, but for my body it is not hard to be in this position, though I can't untie myself while pretending to be a human female. So I am well and truly restrained.

Ben gets mean with how he uses his cock, even a well trained cock sucking expert human female would have some issues not throwing up from what he is doing, I don't throw up though as I don't want to, but I let my saliva get very messy and drooling and tears flowing as I gag as he intentionally fucks my uvula and tonsils and everywhere else and balls deep too.

Sam kneels down and grabs my hips and pushes his cock up into my anus, and starts to pound me hard, I moan and whimper for show onto Ben's cock, while I actually am really enjoying the pleasure they are making me feel and the pleasure they are feeling, and I am so easily able to slip deep into their minds, their lives laid bare for me, I learn a lot of things, though much of it makes little sense as it is not really in any good order and I still don't understand humans.

Sam's balls slap my pussy hard, I can tell he is fucking me so hard that it hurts him a little bit, and I can tell why he is doing it too, he had met Lyta before and she ignored his offered hand as he wanted to shake her hand, and she barely even glanced at him, acting as if he was not even there. I notice that of the ones who have met her a lot of them have similar experiences. She was not as nice to non telepaths, treating them more like tools, sending them to dangerous excavation sites to find artifacts of relevance to her telepath cause, and trying to locate the Vorlon worlds, or technologies of theirs and the Shadows, and other ancients too. I suppose I might count as ancient, I don't have a species, it is just me, but I have made many contacts among many species and they value me highly, so in a way I have most as allies, even though none really know me, but I like to bring joy to all.

Sam groans and erupts into my ass, I love his hot cum as it floods into me and I make my anal canal ripple and pull his cock balls deep into me and milk every last drop from his cock and then I lick him with a tongue I grow in my anal canal, and love how he whimpers helplessly and what I am doing keeps his cock hard for a much longer time than is truly comfortable, I release him only when the very last drop of cum has been sucked out of him and when pain equals pleasure in intensity and he slides his softening cock out of my ass.

Ben groans and roars out as he erupts into my mouth and throat and I wrap my lips tight to not let a drop spill, but I intentionally don't swallow his cum allowing my mouth to overflow and his cum to erupt out of my nose, both my ears pop and my already wet eyes get even more wet, if I were human I would not be able to breathe right now, but I don't need air in quite the same way as humans. I can get what I need from my skin. He tries to pull out but I push my head onto his cock to keep sucking and licking him until he yanks my head back by my hair and he chuckles "this slut whore is crazy" he then rubs his cock over my face, spreading the cum that erupted from my nose partially over my whole face.

Sam groans "yeah, I don't know what she did with her ass, but I have never felt anything that good an intense."

As they back off and I remain squatting I look up at Ben and swallow my mouth full of cum and then inhale the cum from my nose and cough it out into my mouth and blow bubbles with it before swallowing.

Jake smiles "I am so glad I got the camera drones going" he says and I was aware of them, I really do enjoy when I get recorded, as I can feel all the dreams and desires of me especially when I am in hyperspace and it feels very good.

I am pulled to my feet "let's take her to the pool, we can fuck her on the sculptures" as they say that I see the place in their memories, this asteroid they have built their base inside was not made by them originally, it was found by them, this is another archaeological site, I recognize some of those sculptures, I remember the species that made them, they are almost entirely extinct, a few of them sleep in stasis vaults, none here, I have not been able to figure out how to awaken them, I have seen in their memories the type of power core they need to be awakened, but I do not understand how to make those, nor do the survivors in the stasis vaults I have visited and probed the minds of.

They push me ahead of them and all of them take turns groping my breasts and slapping my butt, and I hear the camera drones whirring as they float around us to film what is going on, though mostly focused on me. I see in Jake's mind and several of the others that they think that recording Lyta will give them some sort of blackmail to use to make her have sex with them not just today but anytime they demand that. They only think that because I suppressed their fear of her, deep down they know if they had treated her like they did me already they would have had their brains fucked worse than dying by her, unless she too actually liked this kind of treatment, and the blackmail does not work on me, though I may have sex with them in the future anyway, when I am in the mood for them again, but there are so many more beings to make love to in the universe.

As we reach the pool and I am pushed into the wonderful hot water, almost too hot for humans, but only almost, I feel the rich minerals and exotic materials that is tinting the water slightly pink, I soak it up through my skin and it feels good, it enhances my psionic ability, what most races call telepathy, but it is more than that for me, I feel my mind extend along the water deep into this asteroid, and there I feel one of the power cells fully operational, and the asteroid has veins of the exotic matter that is used to make them, my mind gets lost sensing how it is structured in detail and how its energies flow, how it operates.

I just barely pay attention to the men around me, I feel them push me onto my side on one of the sculptures and Sam unties my arms and the men spread my arms, and legs and shove me onto my back on a nice supporting arch for my back and a small bowl for my head to rest in. This sculpture has cuffs built into it and my ankles are cuffed, hugging the sculpture backwards, legs spread wide, I feel a gap under the part of the sculpture I am resting on, and Jake slides under it and his cock slides up into my ass. My wrists are also cuffed and I feel the cock of Neil and Luke being put in my hands and I make oil coat my hands and then start to pleasure them better than they know how to do it themselves, though adjusted to how feels best for them. Oscar steps up slamming his cock up into my pussy. Yann rubs his cock in my face before letting me kiss his foreskin back, he is a pale redhead with green eyes and a bit of a giant, though his cock is smaller than Ben's, but his precum is less salty and less bitter and a bit sweet. I enjoy getting the genetics of another rare redheaded human, and green eyes, also he has really interesting muscle fiber genetics, strong and fast, but his body runs a bit hotter so he has to eat a lot more than most men to not start losing body mass.

I feel Hans's hands grab my breasts and slide his cock between them. Then I hear Oscar say "whoa I can see my cock inside her" I hear the other guys murmur in excitement as they notice that playful thing I did "weird, but also so hot" Oscar says and the others agree, I feel them get turned on more by that, though all who see it also find it weird, but still they all see me as Lyta, even with all the changes and alien stuff I have going on.

Yann groans and clearly needs to fuck my throat now as I have turned him on with my lips and tongue and he slides his cock all the way down my throat until his balls velvety skin covers my eyes and nose. I moan and feel the cocks of Ian, Thomas, Eric, Quinn, Patrick, Ken, Liam, Bob, Tom, Mark, Marcus, Alec, Cade, Dan and Glenn rub along my sides and arms and legs, all desperately wanting to have their cocks and hands touch me all over, barely any skin untouched, and they all have to crowd close to me.

I love feeling what they are feeling, the pleasure my body brings them, and they also pleasure me with their caresses, massages, and rubbing with their cocks, I taste their precum through my skin, Ben and Sam also join back in after having taken a drink and a short break, I am amazed at how they all pack in tight around me like that, even though most of them are actually revolted by touching other men sexually, their desire and lust for me entirely overrides that.

As my intellect studies the power core more, to be sure I understand it, my emotions and senses drown happily in all these men around me, I don't hold back my own pleasure and they easily make me orgasm for them, I always enjoy making that easier in bodies I make for myself.

Oscar cries out and feels annoyed at himself for cumming so quickly, flooding my pussy and I see through his eyes how his cum fills up my vagina and floods up into my womb, and how awed he is about that, my pussy massages his cock preventing him from pulling out until he whimpers and his legs shake and I let him go, and I pull all his cum up into my womb where it flows up my Fallopian tubes and unlike for human women my ovaries consume the cum as it flows into them and I make them glow golden.

Jake erupts in my ass and I milk him like I had Sam, before letting him go too.

Ben and Sam now move up and holding onto my legs they both push their cocks into my pussy, as Neil slides under me to take my ass, and Ian takes his place in my hand.

The names fade as we all feel more pleasure, and they all move around me taking turns to in my pussy, ass, in my mouth. Erupting between my breasts and covering my breasts and neck with cum, and they cum all over me, they intentionally cum all over my face, ears, soaking my hair in cum and even cumming in my eyes, they know how much that stings for human women, but for me it just feels so good, I slowly absorb all the cum offered to me, however the guys keep recovering faster than they get spent, having energy drinks and quick food breaks, they manage to keep me in constant endless orgasms, I think a human female would have gotten damaged by this, but my body does not get damaged very easily from sex and what damage happens I recover from, especially as the water laps my feet and the cum soaks me inside and out, and I draw psionic nourishment from their minds, and bodies, I don't take too much though, but they will after this day need several days of rest to fully recover from their encounter with me, but I know of no lovers of any species that have ever cared about that needed recovery period.

I am pulled free from the first sculpture after several hours and tossed into the pool to clean my hair and skin, and they all rest in the water as they have some more drinks and snacks and I move from man to man sucking their cock under water, and they manage to get erect and cum for me even though their cocks are very tender now, I manage to get one last erection from each of them that I ride until they cum for me one last time, before they all pass out into very deep sleep.

I have the drones copy their recordings for me and I plan on selling several cuts of these and the full thing as porn, as that should earn me some credits and make more people dream of me.

I then turn the drones off putting them next to Jake and shift back to my preferred form as I explore the asteroid further, I find some automated repair, construction and mining machines and have them harvest the exotic material for me and build several power cells, I then take them with me to my ship, along with a large crate of exotic mineral that I think I can use with the broken power cells and the repair machines later.

I slip my ship back into hyperspace, and dance my way to the nearest galactic network communications node, where I am able to add the new porn flicks to several of the networks, as always I don't make the fee very high, as it is less about the credits for me, and more about having people dream of me, to desire me.

I sense the men waking up on the asteroid, all unsure what really happened, if it was real or just some wild dream, they barely remember that they put the artifacts into my ship and refuelled it, but Jake accesses the storage of the drones after a few hours of waking up and shows the other guys the recordings. It is only after watching the recordings twice that they finally realize I was never actually Lyta, but just someone fulfilling their fantasy, none of them get upset with me over it, but then they never get upset. They spend days trying to figure out who I am, and eventually Cade stumbles upon my contact information, that I run several types of businesses, diplomatic, courier, vip shuttle services, high class escort, he sees that my usual rates are very high. I get a bit sad that even as he shows everyone the contact info, nobody contacts me. They find the porn flicks on the networks though, and are a bit embarrassed to have their faces showing, but only for a bit, then that gets replaced by a bit of a weird pride. Sadly some comments on some of those videos tell them that the real Lyta is dead, it breaks their group somewhat, and after a year most of them have moved on to start new lives on different worlds, I suppose that is better, they all find a real human woman to settle down with and have children.

Meanwhile I travel awakening sleepers, they teach me of their technology and I integrate some new thins into my ship, and many of the artifacts I got are also integrated into my ship, as technology or art, a few pieces I hand off to archaeologist friends, and they too reward me with their knowledge and hire me to take them to new dig sites. I really enjoy going to those, seeing the world through their eyes, with their excitement and knowledge, and sometimes I know something they do not and nudge them in the right direction.

--- The end of this story, but Iris may return in future stories ---

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I'm...surprised, a little confused, and...I don't have the right word for it.

Let's take it one step at a time: At first, I thought I was in a complex film like Inception, which you have to watch three times to understand. A few unfamiliar words, very artistic and somewhat spacey writing. But the details were immediately absorbing. What fascinates me most is that you can immerse yourself in it. I don't think I could do that, although sci-fi isn't really my genre.

But in any case, reading your story was more exciting than watching Star Wars or something like that. Given your style, I'd be really interested to see how I would like a story that suits my tastes even more, purely in terms of content.
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I am not sure what your genre is, I usually write fantasy/magic settings, rarely if ever close to real life, hopefully something else I have or will write will engage you even more though :)
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I think I could immediately tell that this is from the same author as the Nadia and Sara story. Even if I didn't know it was you, Vela, I think I would be able to recognize that writing style. I think if I had to guess a theme for the contest that this is for, it would not be Valentine's Day but "questionable consent". Because that is what was on the forefront of my mind. Are these men really consenting? And don't take that as a criticism for a misapplied tag or anything, I think there is just some ambiguity to it here that I find interesting.

Now this time there were two lines that stood out to me in particular.
Ben's foreskin opens up and weeps precum down his shaft
I really like that expression, a penis weeping precum. It is a beautfiful way to describe the desperation of arousal that is not yet able to climax but wants to so very badly. I like that a lot. I might steal that expression in the future. ;) I think I also like how this expression undermines male sterotypes. It's not the steadfast man in control here, but his penis is weeping from overwhelming pleasure as he's played with by that SciFi goddess of lust. Really nice!

And another line made me laugh.
and unlike for human women my ovaries consume the cum as it flows into them and I make them glow golden.
I don't know, this made me chuckle. I just thought "Thank you for reminding me that this doesn't happen to human women's ovaries" :lol: .

And my final remark: I really think you could make things easier for your readers using less commas and more full stops in places. But it's the last time I'll mention this, I promise. :)
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It is fun that my text has a style that you can recognize already :)

Well Iris will assure you the men wanted sex with her, she just stole their inhibitions, but I agree it is mind control too, and thus probably could be conceived of as non con too :) But I think those who wanted rape would be disappointed.

Anyone should feel free to steal any expressions or concepts in my stories that they like, if I read those in someone's story I take it as a love letter :)

Also yes I am aware there are periods that some people are capable of using, but you should just be happy I mimic understanding of , and . somewhat these days, as they are not natural parts of my own language, in my head, I used to write entirely without any punctuation at all, just a stream of unending words :)

It is a highly exciting compliment to a woman's sexual attraction and power when you make a guy's cock weep enough that it soaks through their pants, also fun to make cocks jump trying to get free of stupid clothing and such :) Of course the erect cock in too tight clothing is also hot.
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Vela Nanashi wrote: Sat Apr 05, 2025 12:19 am
Well Iris will assure you the men wanted sex with her, she just stole their inhibitions, but I agree it is mind control too, and thus probably could be conceived of as non con too :) But I think those who wanted rape would be disappointed.

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It is a highly exciting compliment to a woman's sexual attraction and power when you make a guy's cock weep enough that it soaks through their pants, also fun to make cocks jump trying to get free of stupid clothing and such :) Of course the erect cock in too tight clothing is also hot.
It's a bit like asking at what point seduction turns into flat out manipulation. If I do something because I lose my inhiitions, can I then just assume that I wanted to do it? Or aren't inhibitions also part of what ultimately determines what I want? In Iris' case you could argue that she's probably affecting the men's brain chemistry to some degree. But maybe putting on a nice perfume to smell nice could be said to be the same just on a smaller scale? I think your story might be one of those cases that could technically be classified as NonCon, but it is not what anybody associates with that term. It's a bit like describing Arwen from LotR giving up eternal life for Aragorn as suicide because she can now die of old age. Might be technically correct, but it's nothing you would issue a content warning for.

I think you enjoy making men suffer with overwhelming pleasure. ;)
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Overwhelming pleasure is indeed a goal to cause in men and women :)

As for Arwen, had she not done that, given up her love to stay undying elf, she would actually have been at risk of death, as although age may not kill an elf, sorrow and loss can, if I recall my reading of Tolkien's work. So she saved herself from even earlier death by staying with Aragorn.

There have been some studies of men to test the effect of a beautiful woman being around, and I recall reading some that said that the IQ of men drops by tens of IQ points when around beautiful women, though it also helps their heart health and there is the anecdotal post nut clarity that may have an opposite effect on men, if they don't allow themselves to pass out, where they might do even better work. Also many achievements in society has been done by men who wanted to make life better for their women, so even if there is a temporary IQ debuff on men who see a beautiful woman, the other buffs may compensate for it :)

Also nobody should take this very seriously at all :)
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Vela Nanashi wrote: Fri Apr 04, 2025 5:59 pm I am not sure what your genre is, I usually write fantasy/magic settings, rarely if ever close to real life, hopefully something else I have or will write will engage you even more though :)
You'd totally catch me with fantasy. I thought the Game of Thrones story and the Org story on the old board were great. I'm just not so into sci-fi. But the Middle Ages, etc., also have the huge advantage that you can incorporate a lot of unrealistic elements and do a lot with world-building.
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Ah! It took me a minute but then I started to notice the Babylon 5 references and it all started to come together.

I really liked the idea that Iris allowed the anger of the men who had been rejected by Lyta in a variety of ways to be expressed through their attentions. Allowing them to vent and 'avenge' the perceived affronts.
I enjoyed the rawness of the sex itself, how she presents herself as a body to be abused but isn't really a victim of the abuses at all. Its all just to allow the men to vent their previous ... I'm repeating myself lol.

One thing I would say, the initial description of Iris altering her form to approximate Lyta is a little more drawn out and detailed than I think necessary, or you could have saved some of the details for the men to take note of throughout the over all scene.
Oh, and we didn't need to know what spam is made from that's why Monty Python exists. :P

Enjoyable and sexy story, though a little confusing to begin with.
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Re: Festival of Love, Valentines day, with Iris - RavishU Memorial Contest

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I like describing what I see and sense in general when inhabiting a character and I only wanted to inhabit Iris for this one.

Iris loves sex, and pleasing people usually for something else she wants, so helping lift inhibitions like she did was fun for her, she was of course in control if she wanted to.

As for spam describing it is funny to me, and calls back a little to gkar talking about swedish meatballs :)
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